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Fri 23rd Jul 2010 23:46

Hi Larisa-love this poem very much-your words are like yourself-strong and determined-good for you-stay that way-never ever let anyone put you down! thanks Larisa-love the photo-very happy scene-Stefan-xx(M-xx)

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Fri 23rd Jul 2010 22:59

How hast thi' bin' since I saw thee? lol! Hi chuckabutty,hope you are well-Catch you later Mater-lotsa love-Stef-xx(Bxx)

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Fri 23rd Jul 2010 21:15

Hi Larisa-sorry for late reply to your kind comments on my poem-Arisings-was due to a technical fault on the site-all ok now-and I appreciate your kindness-lots of love-Stef-xx

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 23rd Jul 2010 20:20

Thank you so much for your very kind comments on my German Boy. xx

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 23rd Jul 2010 20:15

Hi Lynn - many thanks for your kind comments on my German Boy (if you see what I mean!)

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darren thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 20:42

There is so much about this that I would guess echo's the sentiment of many potential or would be relationships and situations.

I would have liked to have read a potential answer to your question -maybe use that as your poetic turn. The answer didn't even have to make any sense - just to compound the intrigue?

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<Deleted User> (8159)

Wed 21st Jul 2010 20:11

HI CYnthia! Thank you for commenting my "Playtime". I am happy that it appeals to you. It was partly childhood memory, partly grown-up reflection..

Like your new poems. Keep them coming! X

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Francine

Wed 21st Jul 2010 19:28

Bonjour Nicky !
Félicitations pour la naissance de Kara Fé - née le 4 juillet en plus ! Contente que tu es revenue : )

xxx

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 21st Jul 2010 18:24

Yes Isobel...thank you.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 21st Jul 2010 18:13

Minds that
do not intrigue'
are - by rest assured-
fraught with fatigue.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 21st Jul 2010 18:04

Thank you Heather...I think you have made me think...:')

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 21st Jul 2010 17:41

Hi Ann,sorry it has taken so long to get back to you, my new arrival arrived a mere 3lb 8oz, bless her but doing wonderful now, I am just about to look and see if the site is still as discursively apathetic as it was, there are so many intelligent and talented, and very opinionated people that frequent this site I was taken aback a little to see that discussion was a little lacklustre to say the least. Hope you are well, take care, Nicky.x

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Lynn Dye

Wed 21st Jul 2010 16:11

Thanks for favourable comment, Cynthia, on "Seal Pups". The Humane Society International have details:
www.hsi.org/issues/protect_seals/facts/canada_seals.html

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Lynn Dye

Wed 21st Jul 2010 15:25

I wouldn't have believed it either, Cynthia, and only learnt about it by supporting The Humane Society International.
www.hsi.org/issues/protect_seals/facts/canada_seals.html
(Unfortunately, doesn't work as a link, so needs typing in)

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Chris Dawson

Wed 21st Jul 2010 13:06

Enjoyed this Pete, but it has an underlying sadness to it.
Cx

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Chris Dawson

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:55

You've probably heard this before, but I thought it might amuse you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ujUQn0HhGEk
Cx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:41

Delightful prosy bit of poetry, quite enchanting. Is it possible to divide some of the longer lines, or are you concerned about a poem's length?

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Tom

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:40

Hi Cynthia, Thanks a lot for the comment on my recent poem(s). It means a lot. I loved your Clichés poem, by the way, unpredictable, amusing and very intelligently written. TB

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:37

I didn't think that Canada was prone to senseless carnage. I shall double check the situation. Perhaps you would guide me. As a poem, it is well written.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:33

Your poems are merciless in the portrayal of innocence pitched against war, and so stark with physical details and national attitudes.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:18

Very clever, Rod, and topical too. You push a lot of buttons with this one in a semi-serious, bruising kind of way which makes it just hard enough to separate sincerity from irony.

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<Deleted User> (8286)

Wed 21st Jul 2010 12:05

Thank you winston... for sipping from the stained glass of the past.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 21st Jul 2010 11:57

A great poem, Ann, in every way. You are a sensitive observer of everything, with a keen eye for beauty in any form. I think teenage empathy and your own artistic bent for loveliness in the human form would cement such an image.

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Wed 21st Jul 2010 11:53

Thank you Andy... For looking through the Stained Glass... and I am glad I found your poem: Perfect Place.

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Wed 21st Jul 2010 08:55

All photographs taken by Darren Thomas (except for last five)

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Andy N

Wed 21st Jul 2010 08:21

must admit - i wasn't sure if it was poetry or flash fiction (perhaps more than a short story).. think it crosses over into both and in both cases - top one...

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Greg Freeman

Wed 21st Jul 2010 07:47

Thanks for your constructive help on Walking the Shore, Ann! I remember you and Ray ganging up once before on another poem of mine, and you were quite right then, too! I see your thoughts are turning to the beach for your latest. Very evocative. Must be the time of year ...

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Lynn Dye

Tue 20th Jul 2010 23:06

Enjoyed this very much, Ann. I agree it is strange how some visions just stay with us over the years, which makes this poem so easy to connect with. xx

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 20th Jul 2010 22:48

Hi again Lynn-I,m glad that you tried Sunday Miscellany-of course some progs are better than others-but it is very inspiring to listen to-ask my fancy woman-shh! the wife has just come in-lol! and poor old Mr Dodd Snr,s dogs-has your tongue straightened out yet? haha-thanks very much for all your kind comments Lynn-hope you have a peaceful night-Stef-xx-(B-xx)

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 20th Jul 2010 22:42

Good evening Lynn-Thanks for nice comments on 'Where the heart is'-yes very nice pikky-imagine living there eh-wow! glad you enjoyed it-Thanks-Stef-xx-(B-xx)

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winston plowes

Tue 20th Jul 2010 21:25

Gus...is this a short story or a poem? elements of both maybe? a good read, thankyou. win x

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winston plowes

Tue 20th Jul 2010 20:07

Really liked this Ann. one idea... Might it be ok if it stopped after the word 'spoke' (i.e. deleting the last 2 stanzas)? Win

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Dave Bradley

Tue 20th Jul 2010 19:40

I like this Ann. The structure and use of language creates a musing mood, which fits perfectly with the content. There are at least two universal themes we can all connect with. Why do we sometimes feel a strange connection with strangers? And why do certain moments - with a million to call upon - remain so vivid?

One to keep, should you ever get into chucking out mode.

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 20th Jul 2010 19:12

Thanks Andy, I am always tempted to 'add'...

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 20th Jul 2010 17:01

Hi Gus - like this. It prompted me to put one on here with a similar theme.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 20th Jul 2010 16:55

Wrote this the other day, blogged it after reading Gus's poem - Boy Meets Girl. My version of the same thing.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 20th Jul 2010 16:18

Oh, dear! You were occupied with others.
My breath is on smothers.
I speak as I feel like to speak.
Forgive my mistakes
A rick of red roses sneak.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 20th Jul 2010 15:56

Terrific. As is your sample 'See the boats coming'.

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Tue 20th Jul 2010 15:48

Awww! Larisa-you are so right! and I was so, so ignorant not to have read this till now-I am being honest-but now that I have read it-and will read it again-it IS-your best poem,if you dont mind me saying so-really lovely ways of expressing love and affection-and hey! no crying-unless its onto one of those beautiful roses!tears of the heart! (theres a poem title for you)lots of love to you-and apologies for overlooking this beautiful poem-I,m going to give my own backside a good kick-sorry darling-speak soon-Stef-xx-(M-xx)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 20th Jul 2010 15:24

Hi, Dave! Please, read my new poem "The language of flowers" and tell me if there are any mistakes or something I have to change.
With warmest wishes, Larisa xxx

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 20th Jul 2010 15:15

Devon this is so 'kin wonderful, brilliant A pure star sound ...poetry, music... just keep reading it over...

Well done Devon

Because light is sound.Sound is light and the sun stuffs notes with helium and let’s them go.

We all know that??

Don't we?

Hope to see ya soon!!

Gus

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Tue 20th Jul 2010 13:20

Congrats on appearing (is that right?)on this weeks Radio 4's Poetry Please. Couldn't have happened to a nicer girl!

I assume it's on Listen Again if any one missed it.

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Ray Miller

Tue 20th Jul 2010 13:04

Hello Winston. The ghazal is from a poetry site called Poets Graves and was written by a chap called Ben Johnson, who despite the name, isn't famous.I didn't you - or anyone! - had such a passion for ghazals.

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Rod Tame

Tue 20th Jul 2010 10:16

Hi Josh, Saw your comment on my profile. Ta very much :) Hope to see you at some more events. I have been busy updating my profile etc.

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Rod Tame

Tue 20th Jul 2010 10:09

Thanks Josh! I must admit to having been slack about keeping up my internet activities but I'm back on top of that now.

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<Deleted User> (4235)

Tue 20th Jul 2010 02:19

Thank you both so much. This was an older poem of mine, one that has been left on the side for far too long, and I think I will rewrite its ending.

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Heather

Tue 20th Jul 2010 00:05

Loved this Cynthia! There's something so beautiful about the gentle build of tension, the soft humour. It's an easy read and just the sort of poetry that suits a cosy evening in or a sunny day outside. I loved the little details, especially in that first stanza, the crystal rim, the creamy rug. All very nicely done.

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Heather

Mon 19th Jul 2010 23:53

Thanks guys! I'll take another look at that third stanza and see what I can do with it, maybe a little tweaking here and there :)

Cynthia: Well it's always open to interpretation and you seem pretty spot on so far XD

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Jul 2010 22:59

Dave, many thanks for your kind comments on Melancholium. One look at my profile picture should be the giveaway.
It was reflective, but I wouldn't change a thing that has happened to me. It was just a what if?

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Jul 2010 22:56

Isobel, many thanks for reading Melancholium. Hope you have a great inspiring holiday. Graham

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