Hi - Blue Haiku = really good

Comment is about Nash (poet profile)

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BP oil ??

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

Original item by Nash

I have looked this up and can only find that the phrase means to be left out/ignored. Who Piffy is I cannot fully explain: some commentaries say that it is likened to patience. I think Piffy is a rather rotund and red-faced little chap who wears plus-fours and looks a bit like Humpty Dumpty. He's my version of Piffy anyway.....

Comment is about Muriel and Me (blog)

Original item by Dorinda MacDowell

Good evening Dave.Following the last line..that would be for a sleep would,nt it? if not-watch your heart! and those rusty bedsprings! love your new profile-amazing what a wash can do-(jesting)very smart on parade now!-best regards my friend-Stef.

Comment is about Let's (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Hi Cynthia,

Seems you are playing that "is he, isn't he?" game again with this deftly penned story. My guess is that he is, so don't feel you have to disabuse me of my conclusion! It's good to keep the audience in suspenders so to speak. I really enjoyed the read and the diversion into your creative and fertile imagination.

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about Morning on the Mall (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hi Dorinda,

It's a long time since I heard the phrase "like Piffy on a rock cake." I've tried to find out who Piffy was, without success, but I think it's a lovely and quaint old saying. Do enlighten me if you can!
As Cynthia says, more power to your workshop!

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about Muriel and Me (blog)

Original item by Dorinda MacDowell

Probably well over the plimsoll line though - certainly a surfeit of apes and strutting peafowl. Shame there aren't more diamonds and emeralds.

Oooh you are awful!

Regards,
A.E. x

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

Thanks Jo and Win for taking the time to comment.... Isobel its def sac as in shrivelled testicles! Anthony... this is what the site was lacking, your quick intelligence and wicked humour! Yes not a stately Spanish galleon in sight either! Commando is good... a quick pop and back under cover lol Cate xx

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

This was written some time ago, but still seems very relevant today.

Comment is about Morning on the Mall (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

thank you for the welcome Dave

Comment is about She comes to me (blog)

Hehe - we have 2 cats that work that trick - then abandon us once fed of course.... Welcome to the site Rosemary

Best wishes

Dave

Comment is about She comes to me (blog)

The workshop must be working. This is piquant and funny.

Comment is about Muriel and Me (blog)

Original item by Dorinda MacDowell

If you had to choose three words to describe my own work, what would they be? Don't be dodgey; I'm a big girl now.

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

Original item by Kealan Coady

This poem reminds me of kids making rhymes up, as they play in the playground. Jo

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

And you too Stefan, thank you

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

Original item by Nash

You're quite right, Ann! Thank you

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

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I like it Nash, except the last line. I'd leave that out, but it's your poem ;-)

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

Original item by Nash

Like this Cate. Great string of words through it. Win x

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

Hi Cate,

And thanks for your welcome greeting!

Cargoes eh? And not a quinquireme, (one of my favourite words - I well remember having it explained to me as wide-eyed kid) moidore or cheap-tin-tray in sight.

Perhaps it isn't cargo, but "baggage." Baggage frequently contains dirty laundry; some of us have washing machines, others choose to flaunt their skidmarks in the public launderette - pretending they are doing someone else's washing. Me? I think I'll go commando from now on!

Regards,A.E.

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

hi si !!! *gasp* so nice to meet you on thursday at wigan. Best wishes for the future

Comment is about Simon Ellis (poet profile)

Original item by Simon Ellis

Love this one Cate. Yes - there are rather a lot of shrivel sacd/sacked saddos out there, venting their bile...
I wouldn't have known this was a pastiche, had you not explained it to me. I wonder if anyone else will know the poet and poem?

Comment is about Not John`s Cargo (blog)

Original item by Cate

ah! thats only your opinion-(perhaps-in-and not-for-grief? I humbly ask.

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

Original item by Nash

Hi Nash, Thanks for looking at my stuff and commenting on ' On mondays I fall in love' Leeds can actually be a romantic place (If you are lucky enough) Win

Comment is about Nash (poet profile)

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I'm not sure I like this

Comment is about Saltwater (blog)

Original item by Nash

Welcome back Nicky... Loved the ending especially, Hovering there... Win

Comment is about Renewal (blog)

Original item by Nicky Burrows

Hi Nicky.. Thanks for looking at ';-P'. Brilliant view of it I thought, There are lots of lines in there that suggest your interpretation, more so at the end. Thx Win x

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Good morning oh bewhiskered one! ta for opening my day with laughter-off to find needle and cotton-before me sides burst!-but sorry, was,nt funny enough to deserve a kiss! haha! hope you enjoy your day-Stefan......no!

Comment is about Dave Dunn (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Hi Anthony, Thanks for your comments on ';-p' as to wallowing in a wonderful disease... You may be falling into the trap of assuming the poet (me) is writting from his own true experiences. In this particular case is it too mischevious of me not to say if this is the case or not. Win :-)

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Consider me a lazy old git when I say my comments on this outstanding work are repeated word for word in the comment given in-'Our Child' 'me flippin 'ed is reelin'(haha) with inspiration from you!-and boy,do I love its effect! Stefan.

Comment is about Breathless (blog)

Original item by Noetic-fret!

Good morning Mike.I summon up every scrap of praise I can muster and give it to you Mike for this truly AMAZING! poem,that will embed itself forever on my whole being.If I could buy all the REAL gold in this life and beyond and present it to you,so would I do.Even that would not be enough to show you how wonderfully affected I am by this stunningly composed and read piece.No matter what obstacles get in your way,never,never allow them to hinder your giftedness.I am totally blown away! again and again and again.Some may think this is an over the top comment-so be it-you took me there-WOW!-Stefan.

Comment is about Our Child (blog)

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Thanks, Francine!

Comment is about Damned Chemistry (blog)

Original item by Nash

I like this: will have to try it.
I always remember
Evil rats on no star live

Comment is about First attempt at a palindrome (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Gus!
youre back!
greetings
missed you at Wigan was hoping to catch up.

"I wanna be a part of it, NewYork NewYork|!!"

Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)

Original item by Gus Jonsson

One of your best works I think, showing us your great humanity. Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Ballad about the soldier (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hello my friend, nice to see you here too :) Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Larisa Rzhepishevska (poet profile)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Ann. difficult to do justice to the funiest man that has ever lived IMHO he was a genius and much loved... As a big fan you have not offended :-) well done with the Youtube vid. Win

Comment is about a stan laurel kind of day (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Currently, Dave has fly-away hair :-)

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hi Cynthia,

RE Avon calling; It isn't myself i am denigrating, more the old image ( Edward Scissorhands ). I was mulling over it the other day while delivering brochures.
Ann was right with the toilet, an attempt at word play.

Re Downpour ; I really wanted to keep this short and simple but i really struggled with it for some reason. In the end i gave up and just wrote it as it came.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Hope you are well x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

This is fabulous!
Oh là là...
'I imagined kissing you in French.'

Comment is about Damned Chemistry (blog)

Original item by Nash

Could really connect with this... Isn't poetry an amazing / powerful thing, it can bring the strongest, most unexpected feelings / memories to the surface. This did that for me Pete, Thx. Win x

Comment is about Make me a child (blog)

Hi Ann,
Thanks for commenting, glad you like Avon calling. You were right about the loo by the way xx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi thanks for your comment on Avon calling. Much appreciated ;-)

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Hi There... My word! Loss on paper is brilliant. Not read that before, Nothing is wasted, no weak lines, a concise grimness of loosing. Many have been there but to capture it in balance on the page... brilliant. win x

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

Original item by Alison Mary Dunn

I love this Thomas.
I see the 'wish to die' as the regret and guilt. Those emotions are so destructive if you let them take hold of you... Accept that you will make mistakes. Things happen for a reason...
Live, learn, and move on : )

Comment is about Distance (blog)

Original item by Tom

I enjoyed reading your poems on here, Ann,especially Why Can't I Find a Man who can Dance. (I never found one either!!) Love the Dray too!

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

oo great kealan ill have a go now...

Comment is about First attempt at a palindrome (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Many thanks for your very kind comments , I have had a peek at your work and I like it as well
Spencer x

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Kath, this is a great particular image of a universal thought. I think the poem would be really good if you coolly culled nearly one-third of the words and netted the idea more succinctly. My opinion entirely. I've heard this so often about my own work, and I think I have profitted.

Comment is about Downpour (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

Jeez, I never thought of that! Too close to the subject and nursing sentiment. Deadly combination.

Comment is about Avon calling. (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

Maybe it's a joke Cynthia - and it does smell of a toilet????

Comment is about Avon calling. (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt