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keith jeffries

Tue 8th Dec 2020 11:51

A contemplative poem beautifully expressed. With Paul the last line says much more than the words written.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Morgan

Tue 8th Dec 2020 11:31

AHAHAH this is hilarious!?

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John F Keane

Tue 8th Dec 2020 10:52

Interesting how important poetry is in other societies, compared to the UK or elsewhere in the Anglosphere.

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Tom

Tue 8th Dec 2020 09:56

Great poem Abdul. We had thick snow here last week. I went out and stood in the huge flakes as they came down. It felt as surreal as the year itself - but a lot more exciting (and hopeful).

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Tom

Tue 8th Dec 2020 09:42

I really enjoyed this, some lovely turns of phrase here. The audio is great too. ?

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Tom

Tue 8th Dec 2020 09:39

Lovely writing as always V. You've inspired me to have a Joni day, which is very generous of you! ?

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John Coopey

Tue 8th Dec 2020 09:28

Thanks for the Like, Stephen G and Tom.

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julie callaghan

Tue 8th Dec 2020 08:48

Thanks very much Aviva, please accept my apologies ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 8th Dec 2020 08:29

This is so good. But, I can't believe Covid-19 has even infected one of my favourite songs now.. I wonder if it will ever be the same.

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julie callaghan

Tue 8th Dec 2020 07:12

A night out at Faulty Towers?

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julie callaghan

Tue 8th Dec 2020 07:09

Thank you for all the great and encouraging comments and all the likes. I will keep on attempting poetry?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 8th Dec 2020 05:06

Your poetry is so romantic. I could listen to you recite the news and swoon. ?

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Alexia_Supreme

Tue 8th Dec 2020 04:36

The picture you painted is so vivid! Love it!

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Tue 8th Dec 2020 03:28

Thank you both for the comments.

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keith jeffries

Tue 8th Dec 2020 02:27

This poem is rich in its personal and spiritual content. Kindred spirits are few and far between. To find this complimentary soul can only bring immense delight.

A poem of great beauty, expressed with gentleness and faith
Thank you for this

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 8th Dec 2020 00:53

Thanks to P and SA for the kind words - and to those (who know who they are) who clicked on "like".
Maybe it'll be something more seasonal next time.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 8th Dec 2020 00:46

There are still rumours that it was known about through the code-
breaking of the time but it gave Roosevelt the opportunity to put
America into WW2 via a popular mandate. Wasn't it Japanese
Admiral Yamamoto who prophesied that Japan had woken a sleeping
giant? The president's words placed him alongside Churchill in
war's pantheon of powerful oratory: "December 7th 1941 - a day
that will live in infamy".

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Dec 2020 23:59

Welcome positivity - concisely conveyed.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 7th Dec 2020 23:14

Thank you Stephen. I'm really happy that you took the time to comment, much appreciated. It is one of the poems that I sometimes question why did I write this at all, why did I write it as I did, etc. Because the theme or personal purpose is quite obscure so it didn't really fight its way to be written, it just sort of fell onto the page but over the years apart from a few words here and there it stayed more or less the same. And a bit like a special memory, or song, the more I met the poem the harder it became to work out whether it was truly good or just familiar.

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Xoanxo

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:43

Thank you very much Vautaw! Very glad to be back!

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:39

Thanks for the Likes Trevor & Stephen & J.D! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:36

' a dip in the sand caught a pool of sea ' A wonderful start to a lovely piece of poetry Aviva. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:26

Yes to all of that!

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J.D. Bardo

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:10

Yes, Please write. Outstanding piece, I love it. you write so well, that poem is swell.

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 7th Dec 2020 22:07

Just keep doing what you're doing Julie & WOL will remain a happy place!

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Mon 7th Dec 2020 20:41

A poem about writing poems about writing poems.

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julie callaghan

Mon 7th Dec 2020 19:36

Thanks for the likes Stephen G, curious and Dean. A little ditty for the new addition to our towns lights.

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Shehariah

Mon 7th Dec 2020 18:51

Paul, I have missed your words of wisdom and encouragement. My life isn’t mine to take. I tried. I am coming to the end of something significant in my life, a season of being if that makes sense. I do not know what lies on the other side, but I must go through this.

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Shehariah

Mon 7th Dec 2020 18:49

Aviva, I appreciate your feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read this. I am allowing myself to feel and experience what is real to me right now. I have every intention of coming out of this, not as I once was, but as I’m meant to be. What once was is dead and will never come back.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2020 18:07

The worst thing about having to wear a mask these days is that women can’t see how good looking I am.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2020 18:02

A tactical master stroke; a strategic clusterf*ck.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2020 18:00

Wow, Stephen! The rest of us are on “When Santa Got Stuck up the Chimley”.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 7th Dec 2020 17:33

This is a striking and insightful poem describing the problem with such care and effectiveness. Even though the poem doesn't progress on to solve the problem, I think that some of the lines of the poem hold clues (by reverse reasoning) to what the solution might be. I certainly hope that you don't end up following the voices' advice.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 7th Dec 2020 17:23

We should remember these anniversaries. A fitting tribute.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 7th Dec 2020 17:17

Thanks to all for the comments and the likes. I desperately want the vaccine when it becomes available and am in awe of the scientists who have made it possible, but I think the "light at the end of the tunnel" metaphor has become a bit too much of a cliché (one I use myself, I might add).
Life is too complicated to be reduced to the difference between night and day. I'm tempted to talk of "shades of grey" but that's too much of a cliché as well.

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Shehariah

Mon 7th Dec 2020 17:01

J.D. thanks for the like.

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Ghazala lari

Mon 7th Dec 2020 15:13

Beautiful. Eternal bliss. Creator and us a perfect love story.

Keith this is just so beautifully written. I loved it. Each line written with so much conviction and peace.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2020 14:28

Anyroadup, Paul, that’s plane for all to see.
Thanks for the Like, JD.
BTW, I suspect I mean “relaid” rather than “relayed”.

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Xoanxo

Mon 7th Dec 2020 09:54

Thank you very much Vautaw, much appreciated!

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julie callaghan

Mon 7th Dec 2020 08:09

Thanks for the likes for my little ditty, Hugh, Paul and John.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2020 07:54

Fruit of my loins, Stephen. Like her old man she is “not quite right in the head”.

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Mon 7th Dec 2020 05:26

Thanks for the feedback! Your thoughts on the poem make it better than I could have ever intended.?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 7th Dec 2020 03:38

I’m not sure how I missed your postings in prior years, but I’m happy to find you now. I will be enjoying reading and listening to you recite your poetry. What a gift. Thank you for sharing it here with your WOL family. Welcome home!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 7th Dec 2020 03:32

Your voice is heard and it’s lovely. Along with the soft piano music, it elevated your poetry to the next level. Bravo. Bellisimo! ❤️

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Nigel Astell

Mon 7th Dec 2020 02:20

Zombie elves banjo playing
singing Zombie Christmas classics
gate crashing hungry Zombies rampaged
massive scale of eating and feasting
not even writers workshop notes left.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 7th Dec 2020 01:55

Thank you for commenting Philipos. I love that song too. One of my Joni Mitchell favorites.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 7th Dec 2020 01:53

I like the way you think Aviva! Thank you for your thoughtful and enlightening comment. ?❤️

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 7th Dec 2020 01:52

Thank you Paul for your support as always. ? I love the way you comment with poetry. So cool. ? P.S. I immediately thought of this song when I wrote the poem. Sometimes I spend hours finding the song/video to go with my poem, which is part of the fun. I’m glad you enjoy it! ?

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J.D. Bardo

Mon 7th Dec 2020 01:45

I remember dating around the age of 18, that was a tricky thing, Adult, or a minor child, "jail bait" was the comments if your girl was under age when you turned 18. Does this have anything to do with anything? JD,

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 6th Dec 2020 22:44

A wise & cunning daughter you have there John...

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