That's ever so happy and positive Lynn.

Open your arm out wide, take a deep breath, look up to the heavens and let the universal life force flow through you. There is abundance out there.
Claim it. xx

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Original item by lynn hahn

Beautiful.

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Original item by Harry O`N eill

Yes Mr Beau did break his toe. We went thru a lot cuz it was not healing correctly but alas he walks now! He's my best buddy a little Norfolk terrier. I'm a dog lover too...

Comment is about JOY GONE BAD (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

Hi Nicola

Glad you liked the poems
Thanks

More importantly glad you like Kate Tempest. she is in another realm. I can also recommend Harry Baker performing his poem about numbers.
See you soon

Martin

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Original item by Nicola Hulme

that'll be the Crown & Anchor Ray. Hope this link works for you and yes it is still there or was the last time I visited:

https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=crown+and+anchor+shoreham-by-sea&biw=1422&bih=658&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiMotyFk7vRAhVMCsAKHWNvB3sQ_AUIBygC&dpr=1.13

here is the Burrell Arms / Hotel in its horse drawn days:

https://www.glaucus.org.uk/postcard.htm

Cheers, Col

Comment is about IN THE VALLEYS (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Stu,
This sounds like our place as the dementia takes over more and more.

(And that`s just the customers...a bouncer wouldn`t stand a chance)

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Blimey, John, 4 sheds!!!!... What are you hidin`?

(That`s not a garden - it`s a mini-village)

Comment is about VILLANELLE FOR A SHED (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Thanks Paul for stopping by - this was a re - post from last August with Colin and I having a tit for tat theme contest!

Ray

Colin, I know I commented on your Valleys poem , but this is to say I spoke to Lynn about the pub. She thinks it had a sort of ship's prow type man's head on the front and was in the High Street. No more info than that. I wonder if it is still there?

Cheers Ray

Comment is about IN THE VALLEYS (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Thank you so much Rafael ? I am glad you enjoyed it.

Comment is about My Story (blog)

Original item by Sharvari

thanks very much paul, im glad you enjoyed it.

Comment is about i will ruin everything eventually (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

thanks all, lovely as ever to get such positive response.
thought id try something less cosmic this time around but couldnt resist the old depressing, mystical send off line.
graham - i had hoped to show a little of his vulnerability but i fear it may be a case of the person in my mind not translating to the person in the poem.

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Ian,
The problem is that this personna - like so many sons
- really wanted to follow in his fathers footsteps.

My dad got me a docker`s book early (and look what happened to the docks).

Trump promised to bring coal back to West Virginia (Is that the coal we used to produce that we now import from the States?)...

I worked in the tobacco industry (hardly a factory left now
in Britain)

And unemployment - despite the immigrants - running now at less than five per cent.

I wonder what`s going on in the industrial world?

The physical consequences were real enough though.

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Original item by Ian Whiteley

I've always thought, Stu, that if a pub needs bouncers it doesn't need me, although Quiz Night can get a bit lively sometimes.

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

What I love about this Stu is that it doesn't drill down into the character more than to open the mind of the reader ; it is suitably opaque on specifics adding to the island like mentality of the type. It is sad how conventions apply to jobs in this way allowing little freedom for interpretation by the participants. What people expect is what they get therefore. Definitely a stage up from the commissionaire or should I say down? The last line is a masterstroke, a whole realm of sadness in the mix.

Ray

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Thanks Colin. I believe E&M has morphed onto the web these days.

Comment is about YOUR FIRST HUT IS THE CHEAPEST (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Graham - I fear the Exchange and Mart reference will be lost on those less mature and good-looking than ourselves. Is it still going?

Comment is about YOUR FIRST HUT IS THE CHEAPEST (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Thank you very much. Your comment makes me really happy.

I think that your take on it is very interesting, and it really sounds like that is what my poem is about.

I wrote this imaging what it is like before people are reincarnated, and I do believe that people have that choice to back out of it or to accept the reincarnation.

Comment is about Baby's Cry. (blog)

Original item by angi largatzis

Col, great comments and very much appreciated. Ooh, religion, there's a topic and a half, glad peace broke out in your household afterwards! Paul

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Original item by Paul Waring

Genius first verse! A shed load of talent!!

Comment is about YOUR FIRST HUT IS THE CHEAPEST (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

I would have liked to have seen a glimpse of his vulnerability thrown into the mix too. Strong descriptives but who is he? We didn't find out.

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

unusually to the point for an SB offering but excellent nonetheless - and bizarrely the word 'titan' and the subject of 'leylines' have both been very recent topics with my teenage boys.

I guess bouncers are a necessary evil, I'm just glad I don't have any reason to interact with them or their neanderthal ways anymore.

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Love the poem. It tugged my heart strings. I am an animal lover... True story? If so, speedy recovery puppy. :)

Comment is about JOY GONE BAD (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

gosh, reading this comes hot on the heels of a massive in-Hill-house post evening meal debate on religion last night - the details of which I will spare you! - it ended harmoniously btw and we settled down to watch Dragon's Den on the iPlayer.

as always Paul your work is way better than just good and every word and line simply slides effortlessly into the next. The layers of thoughts are like the layers of lies that have constructed our societies and trained our mouths and embedded in our minds - I think we touched on that last night - me and the fam!

'more storeyed than the Burj Khalifa' - what a gem.

cheers
Col

Comment is about Truth and Lies (blog)

Original item by Paul Waring

Lovely poem.

Comment is about JOY GONE BAD (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

I kinda like this Zane and the feel of some of your other pieces but I would say be careful using so many very obvious and simple end of line rhymes. Sometimes they can hold a poem back, make it ploddy, if that makes sense. Try spreading them out a bit thinner or mixing them up by sticking a few in the middle of a line. Just play around and see what happens, there's no hard and fast rules. Hope you don't mind me saying. All the best and keep posting. Colin

Comment is about Drunken Thoughts (blog)

Original item by Zane

hello Ralfy! and welcome to WoL. So glad you liked my sample poem and very generous of you to say so. Your writing is intriguing and I look forward to reading more. I would suggest just post one or two poems a day (or less) rather than be tempted to swamp the site with a whole ton of work. It's just they tend to get gobbled up by the system and it's harder for people to notice them. Lots of excellent writers here on WoL and it's a great place to learn if you take the time to interact and read what's out there.

all the best
Col

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Original item by Rafael

Stuart, in my short time on here this is one of the most interesting pieces I've read, the words and images have stayed in my mind since I first read it......for me, what marks out a poem is whether it moves me, makes me think and is memorable and this is ticks all those boxes! Paul

Comment is about i will ruin everything eventually (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Ray, another great story, love the style, the piece reeks of character! Paul

Comment is about IN THE VALLEYS (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Aythankgyow.

Nice one Ray. I think I will have to respond with a back handed volley of my own Valleys poem re-blog. This feels like a game of poetry tennis! 15 all?

btw, I used to occasionally frequent a pub back in my home town of Shoreham-by-Sea just below the railway station called the Burrell Arms. Back in it's heyday it was a hotel and stopping off point for the horse drawn tram which went all the way to Brighton. By the time it got to my era the hotel had slipped a long way from it's former glory and was definitely more of a spit and sawdust pub. The landlord would always say Aythankgyow in a long drawn out manner which I still imitate to this day much to my own amusement and no-one else's!

Cheers!
Col

Comment is about IN THE VALLEYS (blog)

Original item by ray pool

This is an awesome play of words, I definitely agree with Colin.

Always lots of fun when the tongue also becomes apart of the poem! great job

Comment is about My Story (blog)

Original item by Sharvari

Thank you so much for your motivational words Colin ?

Comment is about My Story (blog)

Original item by Sharvari

Brilliant Stuart.

My favourite line:
tattoos like cartography, mapping his descent from nubile, frosted youth.

Raj

Comment is about a king without a crown (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Very moving. I am sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing this Claire.

Comment is about Mirror, Mirror on the Wall (blog)

Original item by Claire

That turn around in the end was awesome...From start to end actually the poem was quite captivating

Comment is about You're too complacent (blog)

Original item by Wonderer

LOL yes this is a package deal with the poem "REAL MAN".
tough year for sure. 2017 has to be better.

Comment is about SILLY OLD MAN (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

Really so nice to get the sort of praise that inspires me to continually strive to please and pass on my thoughts to the likes of you in your own poetic practises. Colin: I think you have a point about the analogy , certainly an issue which deserves attention to say the least. I'm glad you transcribed some of the qualities of our fox to the less fortunate.
Lots of foxes get run over -always worth keeping an eye out for, my wife's aunt always puts chicken out for them!

Thanks for liking this Paul. Incidentally I know you have been uplifted by comments on the site and have been drawn in to the creative pot which is evident to me through channelling your skills . A give and take situation !

Stu, lovely you're back with your worthy thoughts and putting your own stuff on too - you do me credit, sir.

Just to let you all know, following Colin's poem in a similar vein( and after your suggestion thanks) i'm reposting In the Valleys . I hope it might appeal !

Aythankgyow.

Ray

Comment is about FOX (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Best to ask first, Stu. Otherwise he might think you're after his pot plants.

Comment is about VILLANELLE FOR A SHED (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

This seems to be about twins in the womb. One was stillborn and the other was born healthy. However, the soul of the stillborn child was reincarnated as a baby somewhere else and it's twin still feels the connection. Well that's my take on it.
Really neat writing. Props to you.

Comment is about Baby's Cry. (blog)

Original item by angi largatzis

Cheers mate! Good to be back! Hopefully the first of many!

Comment is about I (blog)

Original item by Matt

Thanks Juan Pablo, I really appreciate your comments. Paul

Comment is about Truth and Lies (blog)

Original item by Paul Waring

no but i think the guy up the road at 54 has a more spacious garden, possibilities there perhaps

Comment is about VILLANELLE FOR A SHED (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

That's true talk.
When I read the first line I thought truth isn't that tricky,
but then you went on and fleshed out your conception that all I could do is nod and agree with your poem.
I believe no one teaches us to lie, we just resort to it for a false sense of security due to our fallen nature and bad habits.

Comment is about Truth and Lies (blog)

Original item by Paul Waring

Stu - does your neighbour at 33 have one you could rent?

Comment is about VILLANELLE FOR A SHED (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

great stuff john. never got the chance to have a shed (small garden) but at 31 i still hold out hope.

Comment is about VILLANELLE FOR A SHED (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

written with all the skill of a master id say. have to agree, the nuzzle/humpty line is a classic. great stuff.

Comment is about FOX (blog)

Original item by ray pool

i like this a lot. the first line is brilliant and i dont mind the exposition so much, the last two lines are especially nice.

Comment is about Stellatus (blog)

Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling

how lovely. so short and yet very sweet.

Comment is about Show me (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Love the almost serreal feeling it paints for me.....Jeff...

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Original item by Greg Freeman

Hi Tommy, I think that you have been clever here to examine the role of poetry and how it can be too sassy or impressive to really deliver - some of us are caught up in a storm of wonderment . Maybe it is a symptom of us today that we like all the add- ons in our lives and should all go back to solidity for a while at least. For some reason I was reminded of a sort of rubik cube with this poem!

regards, Ray

Comment is about Wandering expositions (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

well I for one think its pretty good. Well done everyone.

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