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Andy N

Sat 9th Mar 2013 12:33

i was in volume 1 and will be in volume 3 again.. don't know if i will be able to attend the launch for volume 3, but the launch for volume 1 was a heck of a night at the greenroom.. will certainly never forget that night

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tracey bucknell

Sat 9th Mar 2013 11:51

absolutley brilliantly written jeff, such a huge sad disaster to be forgotten.... lets hope they have a minutes silence for the fallen today eh ? XXX

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 9th Mar 2013 11:08

The Burnden disaster 1946, 67 years ago today. In the shadow of other football related disasters, few people know about this.

It was the first major disaster in football in Britain, yet it is seldom remembered or commemorated, maybe it's time to change that.

RIP the 33 supporters from Bolton & North west who died.

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 9th Mar 2013 07:00

Thanks Greg, looking a great Words event lots going on over a couple of weeks!!!

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 8th Mar 2013 23:28

Thanks John
it's actually a Rondeau - based upon the concept that the sun doesn't actually rise - the earth tilts :-) good old Copernicus eh?
Ian

PS - sorry - posted this on the blog first - forgot it doesn't go to you direct - what a numpty :-(

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:57

You old tryer, Harry!

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:54

Oh no, Yvonne!
I was right fancying my chances (especially the bit about "embracing the ugly") when I got knocked back for A BLOODY DUSTER!
Have you abandoned the metre? or just not got a shilling for it?

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:53

Thanks John
it's actually a Rondeau - based upon the concept that the sun doesn't actually rise - the earth tilts :-) good old Copernicus eh?
Ian

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:49

Top-bombing, Ian.
I don't profess to understand the astronomy but I enjoyed the ride, particularly the repetition (almost felt like a villanelle).

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:46

Enjoyed, Ann. It reminded me of a passage I read recently in Bill Bryson's "A Walk in the Woods" where he comes across a moose (who comes across Bryson) and they stare tansfixed looking at each other for several moments.

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:39

Hello Yvonne,
Glad you liked "WonderBale".
The Gallaghers based their version on mine, you know.

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:37

Hello Steve,
Glad you liked "WonderBale". He certainly on fire at the moment.

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:34

Hello MC,
Glad you liked "WonderBale" The boy's certainly mustard at the moment!

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:33

Hello Harry,
Many thanks for your thoughts on "WonderBale".
I'm afraid I agree that 4th spot is a bit remote now for either Liverpool or Everton. It seems a 3-way fight for 3rd and 4th between us, Arsenal and Chelsea.

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Steve Higgins

Fri 8th Mar 2013 20:14

The Dusty road of life needs some more work yet Yvonne but thanks for reading. Best wishes, Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 8th Mar 2013 20:11

Hi Allison. lots for taking a moment to read 'the long and dusty road' Got stuck on this for a long time but my breakthrough moment was the verse you mentioned :
'I’ll breathe my last in a side road, a by road
An end of the line quiet road'
Still not completely happy with this but thanks for your comments,
Best wishes, Steve

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Greg Freeman

Fri 8th Mar 2013 12:49

Yes, I remember those compilations, Roy, and I like the poem; a reminder of the butcher cover, and the "whiteout" of the white album. You make a good point about the photograph and the fading smiles. There's a poem about the butcher cover in the anthology, by Tamar Yoseloff

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 8th Mar 2013 12:13

I really like this one David - not too sure what it's about - but equally, I don't want to know, because the mysterious phrasing and anonymity of the figures within it are part of its appeal. There's some good imagery at use here, which paints a bleak landscape with desolate and foresaken characters. Great stuff!
Ian

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Dave Bradley

Fri 8th Mar 2013 11:44

Ooo I really like this. An instant slow re-read. There are such intense moments to be had in life. Lovely picture too - just right for the poem.

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Martin Bailey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 11:17

Thank you very much x

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Fri 8th Mar 2013 11:07

nice piece Ali!x

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Fri 8th Mar 2013 11:03

absolutely lovely!x

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Roy Marshall

Fri 8th Mar 2013 11:02

Thanks Greg, really enjoyed reading this. Here is a poem for those who remember the Red and Blue compliation albums and their covers.

Red to Blue

In velvet collared suits
and Chelsea boots
before fish-eyed lenses,
the butcher cover,
potpourri explosions,
coats from Afghanistan,
satin, granny glasses,
lysergic lurches,
Hare Krishna,
an orchestra veering off the rails
into a whiteout.
Seven years after
Please Please Me
they hire the same photographer
for Let It Be; under all that hair,
the faces on the balcony,
twenty-something’s,
smiles worn out.

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tony sheridan

Fri 8th Mar 2013 00:32

I like this! Well done! Take care,Tony.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 7th Mar 2013 20:53

I'm in Cornwall - will spread the word!

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Kate Compston

Thu 7th Mar 2013 20:27

I have a spare bedroom in my flat in Bude. Simon would be welcome to stay during his walk. I'm likely to be able to rustle up some local poets who would appreciate his reading to them. kate.compston@googlemail.com.

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Isobel

Thu 7th Mar 2013 19:36

That's spooky - I was just going in to leave a comment on your profile when it disappeared!

I was going to say that the Tudor isn't about any one person - no venue is. There are a number of regulars who make it cosy and it manages to attract new people. I think the stage and sound system help - it really has a professional set up but with an intimate feel to it.

I'm sorry that you've taken yourself off but understand. On line sites aren't everyone's thing. Still hope to see you at the Tudor though!

And I like the idea of being a tiger! LOL xx

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David Blake

Thu 7th Mar 2013 18:23

I like the movement from the line 'our world' to 'it's cold' bridging the gap between the middle two stanzas. A kind of eerie quality about this one which complements its quite short length very well. Keeps it open to all kinds of interpretation. Nice one!

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David Blake

Thu 7th Mar 2013 18:15

Ian's pretty much said it all for me, especially about more being revealed with each perusal. A great read Yvonne, I like this a lot. Cheers.

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Katy Megan Hughes

Thu 7th Mar 2013 16:21

Sure does!!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 7th Mar 2013 16:18

"Fridge Full Of Muddy Water"? Priceless!
On the subject of things found in canals...have you ever thought of one about a serial killer?
Call it "Johnny, dismember me"!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 7th Mar 2013 15:26

I had a similar difficulty at first, but with me it was down to the age of my desktop computer. It worked all right on my laptop. I'll send you some more details without you needing to click.

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hiddengirl

Thu 7th Mar 2013 15:21

i would like to enter in this contest but for some reason when I click on the more details it doesnt come up
How do i enter in ?

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 7th Mar 2013 15:01

John
just seen your latest blog - which prompted me to go back a few and read some of he earlier ones. have to say that I really like your style and prose - a good mix of heady topics covered in a thought provoking way. Being a newbie I'm still finding my way and tend only to check back on earlier work if i really like a blog posting - so BIG thumbs up for 'the daily mail....' and a great back catologue to boot.
Cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 7th Mar 2013 11:56

I like this one Yvonne, it has a nice lilting rhyme patters and discloses more and more each time you read it. Being of the male persuasion I have never been properly introduced to a duster, but I love the image (intended?) of skin cells being shed into crevasses 'like embryonic spiders' - some really thoughtful and effective images. A good 'un
Ian

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Rachel Bond

Thu 7th Mar 2013 00:12

liked this :)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Mar 2013 22:45

definitely better than Gallagher's version.

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Jerome Kiel

Wed 6th Mar 2013 21:07

Just a pity that this poetry competition is restricted to residents of East Riding when there are some enthusiastic poets just beyond that border! Ugh!

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steve pottinger

Wed 6th Mar 2013 20:59

Crackin' stuff. Made me grin, and I'm not even a Spurs fan....

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darren thomas

Wed 6th Mar 2013 20:32

Hi Rachel - thanks for your recent comments.

I'm enjoying your narratives. Always unpredictable. Always fascinating.

dt

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 19:43

hi julie :) thanks very much for your comment :)

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 19:36

resurrection!

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 19:36

great poem/song!!!

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David Cooke

Wed 6th Mar 2013 18:56

Hi Greg Glad you liked my trees, or I suppose they're still Hockney's! Looking forward to meeting up at Jan & Donall's gig. Should be a good night.

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 16:31

great rhyme and rhythm!

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 16:29

sharing....

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 16:29

i love how 'he drank the sea'. wonderful. thank you for hsaring this

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Wed 6th Mar 2013 16:27

great idea to write about these landscapes you so love

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Neil Fawcett

Wed 6th Mar 2013 11:16

Thanks Harry.

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Hazel

Tue 5th Mar 2013 23:35

Thanks for the comment on Sexy at Sixty Dave..

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