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Travis Brow

Wed 13th Feb 2013 06:57

Thank you Tony, Dave. The fact you recognise your own experiences in others' work is the only meaningful validation; for me, at least.

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 13th Feb 2013 00:31

Thanks Cathy, for this illuminating and touching tribute. I'm sure that she will be remembered - as all poets should be remembered - for her words.

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winston plowes

Wed 13th Feb 2013 00:04

A lovely Article Cathy. Go up there often as I live down the hill. Looks so different in the changing weather conditions. But in your photo it shines. Nice x

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kealan coady

Tue 12th Feb 2013 12:06

hi rach, of course ya can, if ya want i can drop them up to you this friday?

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 12th Feb 2013 10:53

A lovely, fitting piece Cathy.
If anyone else goes up there you might also want to search for the nearby grave of another, far-lesser-known American poet, Asa Benveniste, who lived in Hebden Bridge and whose headstone bears the words: foolish enough to have been a poet.

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Leon Qafzezi

Tue 12th Feb 2013 10:28

Maska Presidenciale

Nje maske ke per zyre
Nje maske per familje
Nje maske per eprorin
Nje maske per vartesin
Nje maske per vete...
Sa dhe kur buzeqesh
Ne pasqyre..
Nuk buzeqesh ti..
Buzeqesh maska
Ku e ke fytyren?

Newspaper"Sindikalisti"1991

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Pete

Tue 12th Feb 2013 10:05

Thank you guys for all of your kind words and encouragement. They really do mean a lot to me.
As writers, we all spend a lot of time in emotional isolation with our words; and when we finally release them, we hope that they will fly in the minds of others.
Thank you again with all of my heart.
Pete

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 11th Feb 2013 23:41

I worked around the 1960s East End of London - Limehouse, Poplar and the Isle of Dogs. The docks were fading fast: the unions (like the "print") refusing to admit change was inevitable, with Gravesend taking container traffic and shipping no longer a viable trade. The area has been altered beyond recognition since then and is now a famous landmark as "Canary Wharf". The challenge was taken up there too - and the effort and enterprise succeeded.

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Mysty Brett

Mon 11th Feb 2013 23:33

This article is so moving. It's so heartwarming to read. Sylvia and her poetry mean so much to so many people. Thanks for sharing Cathy.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 11th Feb 2013 23:27

To borrow from another great song...
"When will I hear you again...?"
Finger-plucking good!

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Mon 11th Feb 2013 23:23

Cheers M.C.

Nice little add on.

Ken.

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Chris Co

Mon 11th Feb 2013 22:37

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But there was a distinct sense of noblesse oblige and an increasing acknowledgement of progress and the need to fund the education of new generations- and, importantly, the desire to encourage the INDIVIDUAL and his/her aspirations.
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For the most part that relates to a conservative nature long since gone! Bar one or two conservatives, this has not existed/was eliminated by Thatcherism.

What you describe is one nation conservatism; Disraeli not Cameron.

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I take the view that despite criticism and a belief in their "bad old ways" that lingers on,
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It does not live on - most certainly does not live on. Neither Tory, Liberals or Labour reflect this idea/ideal. The last conservative to really reflect this ideal was Michael Hesteltine (limited by Thatcher).

One nation conservatism for the most part is history. And none of the parties out there can claim to be socialist or a modern version of socialism - they have nothing to do with socialism.

Good verse like I said. The issue - you highlight it rightly and well. My only issue is that none of the parties are or can claim to be socialist - modern or otherwise.

Hypocrisy and corruption care not for labels or where someone sits in a chamber. The lot of them are questionable and self serving. Far too few politicians of principle anymore.

P.S

Hesteltine was the only person that actually made a difference in the regeneration of Liverpool. The only person that fought for the city and got regeneration of deprived areas, as opposed to dock-lands, shopping centers and libraries.

I know - I was there.

Chris

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Katy Megan Hughes

Mon 11th Feb 2013 22:23

I realise that many people find her work too inward looking or inaccessible but I think her passion and emotion makes her work unforgettable whether you can empathise or not. It's motivated me to go there myself. In her death follwing her conflicts and "furies" she still brings life and inspiration for me to push on, even while experiencing those creative "lows". Thanks for sharing this article, really enjoyed it.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 11th Feb 2013 20:41

Well written and well read.You have created a great rhythymic cadence to this and it flows along effortlessly I loved the last line XX

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John Coopey

Mon 11th Feb 2013 20:35

Whoa, Pete!
Powerful and brilliantly managed.
They say you can't write stuff with weight in structured form and with rhyme.
(I bet no-one will say it here!)

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tony sheridan

Mon 11th Feb 2013 19:45

Love this! More please. I read some of my song lyrics as a poem at open mike nights. A few weeks later I give them the song version. Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Mon 11th Feb 2013 19:37

What can I say Pete? Well done! Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Mon 11th Feb 2013 19:30

Love this Pete!! Spot on!! Take care,Tony.

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 11th Feb 2013 19:25

Pete
fantastic piece. I liked it when I read it, but hearing it in your dulcet tones added a world weary lilt to the hopelessness of the situation that was certainly enhanced from simply reading the words.
Great stuff
Ian

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Greg Freeman

Mon 11th Feb 2013 19:01

Today's snow and ice a poignant reminder of that long, hard winter of 1963. Thank you very much for this, Cathy.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 11th Feb 2013 15:32

Don't let that coffee go cold

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Nigel Astell

Mon 11th Feb 2013 15:28

love is in the air

hearts so true
broken in two
cupid's arrow fires
laughter to tears
if your card
gets sent to
the wrong address
and the one
that you desire
asks have you
got yours yet!


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Laura Taylor

Mon 11th Feb 2013 13:38

Bloody ell Ray, are you trying to get me to spit all over the front row or sommat?! ;D I'll never be able to bloody enunciate that lot!

Re Daily Mail berating - it's a time-honoured thing, like laughing at your own farts. They stay funny, the Daily Mail stays a target. It's rags like that who print this kind of shite - missing them out would just be wrong.

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Rachel Bond

Mon 11th Feb 2013 12:57

thanks for your comments on 'cacti plant' just when i was thinking it rubbish. there is a lot in there if you get the references but also just a simple write about the very complicated feelings surrounding exes.

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 11th Feb 2013 12:35

haha so THERE you are! Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 11th Feb 2013 12:34

Wave to me Sylvia- just wave.

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Ray Miller

Mon 11th Feb 2013 11:54

Thanks, Yvonne, Steve.There's been others who didn't get the gist, Steve.

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Ray Miller

Mon 11th Feb 2013 11:51

Maybe summat like "Feel safe that faith in the Daily Fail." See, I'm programmed for rhyme.
It's apparent that you're referring to the Daily Mail, but in the context of the poem I don't think Fail is working. Also, berating the Daily Mail and its readers has been done to death.

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Leon Qafzezi

Mon 11th Feb 2013 10:19

Ti erdhe tek une virtualisht,
Si nje parfum dehes...
Dhe une druhesha te merja ere..
Pa ditur se era e dimrit,
Kjo kurve plake..
Do te conte tutje
Ne trishtimin e embel
Te dimrit ithnak
Ndofta shihemi ne pranvere..
Ku i dihet?
Asgje nuk duhet paragjykuar..

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Leon Qafzezi

Mon 11th Feb 2013 10:15

Jeta ime nje re dhimbje
Qe largohet pafundesisht
Ne bardhesine e kohes
E mbarsur me stuhi
Qe befas ndalet...
Ne funeralin e ererave
Per te hedhur lopaten
E fundit te dheut
Mbi pafytyresine e Kohes!

(Kujtime ne blu)copright,Leon Qafzezi(2013)

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Laura Taylor

Mon 11th Feb 2013 09:47

Mmm I like this too, has a lovely rhythm to it, and manages to evoke the scene in very few lines.

Is there a reason why you have - at the start and end? If it's deliberate, which I think it must be cos it's you, then it suggests missing lines...something unseen, unsaid.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 11th Feb 2013 09:41

Hello lovely :) Hope you're doing okay. Ta for your comments, and yeh, it has been too long. We should get our arses together once hibernation mode is over, eh ;) xxx

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Laura Taylor

Mon 11th Feb 2013 09:39

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment folks.

Ray - yeh, still not sure on slander/ing - works both ways when it's performed tbh. And, it was originally 'facts' but I couldn't enunciate it so well when it came to it, so it got changed to 'true' - still fits with the rhythm though so I can make it work. You use rhyme much more than I do...I tend to fall on rhythm to make a verse work, in tandem with SOME rhyme, for performance poems.

Agree that 'your acts' could be improved on - will have a think on that. 'Daily Fail' stays as it's a spoof on Daily Mail, which I thought would be really clear to people. Is it not?

Chris - aye, the idea of putting those lines there is to kind of forefront the whole idea of propaganda by using several of the 7 categories of propaganda techniques, then using the phrases which match those categories. 'Hard working family/striver' is amongst the glowing/glittering generalities/bandwagon category, and 'skiver/scrounger' is in the bandwagon/name-calling category.

Works extremely well for the govt though, doesn't it, when you consider how many people actually do believe it when they repeat those terms?



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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 11th Feb 2013 00:52

graphicaly dark.

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 22:10

Where ya gone, Bonny?
I can't fetch up your Profile page.
Anyway, thanks for the comments. I'm not so sure I like the idea of changing a dog's nappy.

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 22:06

Hello MC
Thanks for your thoughts on "Pick It Up".
Was your sister's dog a shihtzu?

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 22:04

Hello Izzy,
I certainly agree with you about dog shit of playing fields.
I think:
1st offence - fine
2nd offence - put the dog down
3rd offence - put the owner down.
Hang on! I'm not sure I've thought that through.
"Lots on" = "Watson" - wassamatta with that!!!

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 22:03

Hello Dave,
Thanks for your thoughts on "Pick It Up". I'm not sure I agree with you that there's a lot less of it about, although if there's the same number of dogs about as there was 20 years ago and there's more people picking it up than there was 20 years ago, there must be less dog shit about (unless dogs are shitting more!).

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 22:02

Hello Izzy,
I certainly agree with you about dog shit of playing fields.
I think:
1st offence - fine
2nd offence - put the dog down
3rd offence - put the owner down.
Hang on! I'm not sure I've thought that through.
"Lots on" = "Watson" - wassamatta with that!!!

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Feb 2013 21:58

Hello Dave,
Thanks for your thoughts on "Pick It Up". I'm not sure I agree with you that there's a lot less of it about, although if there's the same number of dogs about as there was 20 years ago and there's more people picking it up than there was 20 years ago, there must be less dog shit about (unless dogs are shitting more!).

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David Blake

Sun 10th Feb 2013 20:17

Thanks for your comments, and I'm glad you liked 'Maria en la Roca'. Cheers - David.

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Sun 10th Feb 2013 13:30

thanks for this one David.x

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Katy Megan Hughes

Sun 10th Feb 2013 12:58

Thank you Ray - will edit and update - I know what you mean about the "bold" bit, I got stuck there - need to revisit it! Katy

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Sun 10th Feb 2013 12:02

excellent piece of work-THANK YOU! x

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 10th Feb 2013 11:47

David

many thanks for your kind comments. I've had a quick look through the rest of your blogs and am liking what i read. in particularly i enjoyed maria en la roca and thought the alternate title was totally appropriate to the piece.
cheers

Ian

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Ray Miller

Sun 10th Feb 2013 11:11

Nice poem. I'd like to see a half-Irish steampunk entrance. That would be summat, but I'd be "awaiting" not anticipating.
hares - not hare's
There's a fine, unforced rhythm except for this line -
Amongst stranger spectators, taking my hand bold

bold is not the word to end this line on.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 10th Feb 2013 07:44

This is not by me - it is by Yvonne. The link to it was broken. I've managed to re-post it so that it can be part of the Cat competition voting

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Barbi Touron

Sun 10th Feb 2013 06:22

Hello again, I just wanted to stop by and say Keep up the amazing writing, I fucking love this, keep em comin. xo

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Yvonne Brunton

Sun 10th Feb 2013 00:47

Nice one Hugh!

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