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Tommy Carroll

Sat 24th Dec 2011 14:17

I have an album by Santana which includes a number in tribute to Toussaint L’Ouverture :o)
Tommy

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 24th Dec 2011 14:11

Merry Creative Christmas to everyone on WOL wishing you all many clever words for 2012.

Best Wishes!

Graham

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 24th Dec 2011 02:01

Nick- all the best mate- and thanks for your reply! :o)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 24th Dec 2011 01:50

I see town foxes right here in the centre of the capital...trotting along with a certain
attitude. This poem uses an increasingly
familiar sight to remind us of the real essence
of the human condition and its responsibility to others at this time. A thought-provoking
use of the imaginary questions that might cross the borders between species in near
proximity and increasing familiarity.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sat 24th Dec 2011 01:43

Many thanks for your comments Larisa - I've just invested in a new audio recording set up, so will hope to add readings of many more poems soon - maybe even some songs once I have become familiar with all the adjustments!

Best wishes for your two xmas celebrations! Dave

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 24th Dec 2011 01:33

"Hey J.C., it's clear to me your friends are
far from swanky,
Their idea of a Xmas gift is hand-felt hanky-panky!"
Nice one! And that includes the picture.

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winston plowes

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 22:49

Hi Ann, Thx for reading / looking at my picasso scribblinggs. Win x

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winston plowes

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 22:48

Hi Again Fifi, Thankyou for popping in and looking at my minimalist picasso poetry. Win :-) xxx

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Fri 23rd Dec 2011 22:12

Hi Katherine , Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Fri 23rd Dec 2011 22:10

Hi Bolton Octagon. Glad to see your profile on the WOL pages. I speak from personal experience when saying that its a lovely place to perform. Winston

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 22:06

Thanks for your comments on "In the Bleak Mid-Winter".
I'm re-reading Bernard Cornwell's "Stonehenge" from which I virtually plagiaried this. It's absorbing and inspirational.

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 21:56

They'll still be there when where all long-gone.
A timely reminder of our tenancy.

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 21:53

Thought I recognised it, MC. But well worth posting now. Christmas always seems to bring back memories of Chritmasses past with friends and loved ones no longer with us.

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 21:46

Me too, Fifi (everything Foxy below said).

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Jon

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 21:27

Really nice piece Shirley.I can feel the emotion in this!

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 20:25

Hi Neil. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem "He Didn't Care". At the suggestion of John Coopey I have posted a second poem "He Didn't Care Too".
Yes the illustrations are mine. I love this site because I can add my own drawings and audio(If I take the time to record it).
Your poem "Tough Love" is very accurate. I too care but let the everyday matters get me down.

Thanks Again,

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 19:15

John, if you'd ever heard me sing, you would not ask that question! ha ha.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 19:04

Thanks to all at the Middleton open mike especially Gemma for the wonderful buffet and the way she always performs, full of laughs, so professional. I used to be a miserable old sod, but now with all my new found friends at the Ring O Bells,I feel like a born again Ebenezer.

like Tiny Tim said.
"It's bleedin cold in 'ere" but with a bit of luck, I might die before I need to get up for a piss.

Have a great Humbug. Ken.

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 18:25

Nick thank you for your kind comments on my poem "He Didn't Care."
I myself am one of those people who only show my true emotions to the ones who really care.
Thank you for your nice comments on my illustrations. I love this site. I can add my on drawings, and audio if I have it recorded, to my poems.
I took the advice of John Coopey and wrote a second poem, "He Didn't Care Too."

Thanks again.

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Shirley Smothers

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 18:21

Hi Andy. Thanks so much for the kind comments on my poem, "He Didn't Care."
My husband says that some of my poetry is to dark but he likes this one.
I do tend to go for death and beyond poetry.
I took the advice of John Coopey and wrote a second poem entitled, "He Didn't Care Too."

Thanks again.

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 18:16

Hi Isobel. Thank you for your nice comments on my poem "He Didn't Care."
The story I had in mind is that his wife knew he loved her very much. But he was in shock and his family and friends couldn't see this.
I took the advice of John Coopey and wrote a second poem entitled "He Didn't Care Too."

Thanks again.

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 18:10

Hi John. Thanks for your comments and suggestions on my poem "He Didn't Care." I have added a second poem "He Didn't Care Too", with your suggestion.
Thanks again.

Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Shirley

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 18:05

Your voice is stunning.

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 17:58

I would love to do this but I'm in Cornwall! Maybe it'll take off and get as far as Truro!

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 17:56

What a curious fox! Enjoyed your christmas poem Fifi - have a lovely Christmas! x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:45

Thank you, dear Dave, for the explanation. I chose "along". With love and warmest wishes, Larisa
PS Yes, we celebrate Christmas later according to Russian Orthodox calender, but I celebrate it twice. My father was from Russia and my mother's ancestors were from Poland. My mother's surname was Adamska and I was baptized in a Greek Catholic church. So, I am so lucky to have two Christmas holidays.

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Philipos

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:37

Hi Lynn, thanks for commenting on 'Liminance'. Had some difficulties with my PC, hence delay. Seasonal greetings to you and yours.

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:36

I like this!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZ71CQiDBpY&feature=related

(turn the volume up first)

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Ray Miller

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:34

Enjoyed this. I think I understood most of it. The Front Room = Standard English and the back rooms are where dialects, everyday speech are spoken. That's a great metaphor. What I didn't get was the repetition of the variations on nowhere to display.

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Philipos

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:33

I like the way you tackled this as through the senses of a blind lady - and the sound of an animal outside etc.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:04

Thanks for commenting on 'Around All Our Tables', my response is also shown on the poem's page so that it can make sense to anyone who wishes to see it in context. :)

To answer your query, you can choose to use 'up' instead of 'down', or even 'along', though it is rather more usual for similar phrases to use 'down'.

Big hugs for you my friend, and a Merry Christmas (perhaps you celebrate it later as in the Russian Orthodox calender?)

Take care, Dave

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 16:01

:) Hi Larisa, you can choose to use 'up' instead of 'down', or even 'along', though it is rather more usual for similar phrases to use 'down'.

Big hugs for you my friend, and a Merry Christmas (perhaps you celebrate it later as in the Russian Orthodox calender?)

Take care, Dave

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Val Cook

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:58

We had a front room with a huge bay window looking out into the world, or if the world look in on
us they would see perfection. No,we lived in the dingy smaller back parlour looking out on to a yard,very private. Enjoyed this poem Steven thankfully today I enjoy the view.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:41

The Season in its basic setting, is all about sacrificing others. And we are still at it!
Hey J.C....interesting door-knocker!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:31

The phrase "short and sweet" springs to mind.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:29

Thanks Dave - you are on the money with the typo - now amended. Put it down to fat fingers and two similar letters being side by side on the keyboard -
plus a bleary-eyed early hours entry!
But glad you enjoyed the poem. It is one I
have a personal affection for because I see the
content as timeless in the human condition at a
special time of year.
Compliments of the Season to you!

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:11

You manage to get this just right - without making it tacky or crude. I've run the idea over in my head, wondering if I could make the same idea work with a man - but think I'll give up before I start :) A pube clipping roll up takes some imagination Ray! xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:10

Nice poem, Dave! The only line I can't accept: "as they traverse down this life's road". Why down? Why not up? Is it just English language? I always thought that with each coming year we are going higher and higher. So, why not to say "up the road"?
With warmest wishes, Larisa xxx

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 15:02

I really love that poem Nigel - especially the beginning and end - 'Misery is a cross' and 'Christmas is an early spring towards happiness' - beautiful :) You need a little punctuation in the middle to aid reading but perhaps you are not a fan of punctuation.

You should get yourself a profile and start blogging.

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Dave Bradley

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 14:23

Hi MC. I really like this. Slight typo in last verse but it takes nothing away from a heartwarming and true poem.

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Andy N

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 13:07

thanks for the praise over my work, Neil.. I try to use imagery as much as I can in my work so am always grateful when people spot that... thanks - Andy N

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Andy N

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 13:05

You too, Neil... Have a great time... A

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Andy N

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 13:04

Hi Fifi - I will type up the poem on Boxing Day I think as it's a piece for just after Christmas.

Have a great time

Andy Nx

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 12:55

Hi Shirley, many thanks for your comments on my 'Santa' pic. :) At other times of the year I wear less conspicuous hats, but still get spotted quite a lot, hehe.

Merry Christmas to you and yours! Dave

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Roy Chetham

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 12:33

This should be a timeless gem, my personal favourite of the month.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 11:33

Misery
Is
Cross
Also
A
Stitch
As
Laughing
Too
Loud
Can
Cause
More
To
Me
Christmas
Is
An
Early
Spring
Towards
Happiness.

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Neil Fawcett

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 10:04

Thanks Andy and a very Merry Christmas!

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Rachel Bond

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 01:40

thanks dave, yes fragility and specialness of having hope and happenstance that hasnt happened yet x

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Nick Coleman

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 00:20

Now I understand why smokers find it so hard to give up. Never realised smoking was so sensual, erotic, and like sex - destructive.

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Anthony Emmerson

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 00:16

*****

Regards,

A.E.

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