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keith jeffries

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 19:43

A poem which needs to be broadcast loud and clear as we are on the verge of losing some of our essential freedoms, including freedom of speech. The right to say what we think and feel and the equal right to hear a different opinion to our own. If this is abandoned then we are in a dictatorship (1984). It is only around the corner.
Thank you for this
Keith





























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David R Mellor

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 18:38

Thank you stephen and best wishes for the new year

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John Coopey

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 18:22

We should never forget how fragile is the construct of democracy. It needs to be perpetually defended.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 18:07

Thank you Keith, Helen and Leon for your comments
🙂

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 17:28

Stay strong, Mike. It's a difficult time. All my best wishes.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 17:23

Quite right too, Rasa! Happy New Year to you.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 17:18

A very interesting read, Keith. I remember (sort of) back to the fifties and it's true that everything seemed to be black and white, or grey with limited colour. I wonder why? Perhaps people wore more drab clothes and things were painted in darker hues.

Thanks for this.

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Flyntland

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 16:17

I go back further than you Keith but I still have vivid memories of deprivation - poor food and little of it ( bread and Oxo - couldn't afford Bovril) no books - no toys and a severely limited education.
Doctors had to be paid for if you could afford it.
No, it was not a poor but happy time - it was depressing.

Hand carts of Nutty slack from the coal yard are more memories that I share with you., but brown and dark green are the colours that I remember, and everything dull.

We have indeed become weakened by the 'I want what I want and I want it now' mindset.

Life did improve but I am scared now at the horror that is the NHS. - dying in a corridor is no way to end a life.

Well written Keith I think that you got everything in there.

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John Coopey

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 15:10

Ah ha, MC! But I had a plan.
I wore full length cycle shorts to simulate the effect of a wet suit with a t-shirt and kagoule over the top to try to offset the sea’s equivalent of wind chill.
But as Mike Tyson said “Everybody’s got a plan until you get hit in the face”!
And for “hit in the face” read “dragged backwards and forwards over the shingle by the undertow”.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 14:24

Like Skinny dipping - or how to reduce the size of bodily parts?
I recall a swim in an outdoor pool out of season in Essex - and
still remember how the shock of the cold expelled the air from my protesting body and how I could barely draw breath to replace it as I struggled to pull myself out of the water.
You can keep your ocean frolics!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 14:17

Despite its sound of nature in strife
Rain in its rhythm brings promise of life.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 14:16

Horrifyingly, I have heard it said more than once that it needs another war to buck this country up!

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John Coopey

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 14:15

I got my hopes up earlier today when I thought I got a voicemail from her, Stephen. Turned out it was Dell computers asking if I wanted an upgrade.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 14:13

These lines are indeed timely. Somehow, the offspring of a
hardy "make do and mend" generation became weak and
spoilt, with expectations that defied modest reality - as if they
feared losing what had been granted to them by the stoic
accomplishments of their forebears and finding themselves
having to meet similar unwelcome demands on their lives.
Society became easy prey to false hopes, seeking assurance
by lowering standards across the board - with mediocrity the new "excellence". Look at our government and those it
chooses to refer to - or reward with "honours". The strong have become weak and the weak strong.

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Flyntland

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 12:04

Gentle - hauntingly sad - and Oh so beautiful

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Tue 3rd Jan 2023 11:55

Welcome Melinda! Hope you enjoy this great poetry site in which I know you will do very well indeed!

cheers chuck ( as they say in Lancashire 😁 )




Rose 💋

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Tue 3rd Jan 2023 11:52

I know EXACTLY where you are coming from Melinda with the words of this wonderful bitter sweet poem







Rose 💋

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Flyntland

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 11:50

Nigel, frederick, John, K lynn and the 'Wlde pair' thank you all for your very important likes -
Thank you also to Helene and Stephen, your comments are encouraging and dispel self doubt

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Tom

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 10:35

Just came back to comment on your recent poem - but it's vanished... It was touching, anyway.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 09:12

This poem speaks to a deep-seated instinct for security and companionship. I really enjoyed it, Flyntland.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 09:06

John, all you need after that is some smart Alec in a coat and scarf saying 'It's not worth it, you know'.

Mind you, it was that warm on New Year's Day here (15°) that the water might have been quite nice!

Has Adele been on the phone yet? It's only a matter of time.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 08:56

A great start to the new year, Ray. Not sure about too much smiling but I'll give it a go. All my best wishes.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 08:50

Thank you for the comments, John and Flyntland. We need these little parachutes, hopefully of the right kind, to stay optimistic about 2023.

And thanks to Nigel, Frederick, K Lynn, Rudyard; Rose, Hélène, Patricia and Stefan for liking this.

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John Coopey

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 08:38

I fear the parachutes may be of a different kind, Stephen. But, like you, I hope.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 22:41

Interesting you mention smiling at strangers Ray. I often see miserable looking people and think they look miserable and then realise I might be one too. My mother used to say if you walk along with a smile on your face people will think you’re half-sharp! I rest my case.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 22:38

I try to "do the rounds" of WOL, giving everyone a fair crack of the whip, which can be time-consuming if one is to be considerate - Happy new year Ray, from one old codger to another😉

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Mon 2nd Jan 2023 21:08

👍 poem Adam. These guys are so comical to watch skipping and jumping along but thank god for them and all of the beautiful animals we are blessed with

LS

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Mon 2nd Jan 2023 21:03

Stylish stuff TC!


LS

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raypool

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 19:15

One thing missing from this list is by a sad omission my limited responses to other poets on the site. Unfortunately it does take a lot out of me as I feel I must delve in to each poem and get OCD about it. I am an old codger so not much energy to spare. Anyway I would like to offer my sincere thanks for all the input I get and hope you will forgive me for the limitations.

Happy new year everyone!

Ray

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raypool

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 10:28

Thanks Graham, it seems to hit some spot with the readers. Have a great year too.

A good point Uilleam, the object seemed so vulnerable I was attracted to it! Somehow very personal.

Thanks Stephen, exactly so.

Your poetic comment is welcome Mark. It takes a sentimentalist like me to save a soul!

Keith, I know you are committed to greater ideals, and this small token does find a way to comfort . It amazes me how small the script is, yet how vital.

A nice comment Helene thank you. I did feel compelled to rescue the book; her husband was a lovely guy - it seemed it was the least I could do.

In addition, thanks as always for your likes, Frederick, Colin, Holden and your Royal Poetess.

Ray

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 01:13

Happy New Year Hélène, and thank you 🌷

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Hélène

Sun 1st Jan 2023 22:54

Heartfelt, lovely....I wish the same.

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John Marks

Sun 1st Jan 2023 20:53

Thank you and all the best for 2023 Stephen & Uilleam.

....and remember to forget the troubles of the past....

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julie callaghan

Sun 1st Jan 2023 17:39

Thanks for the likes and kind comments hope you all had a wonderful time.

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Flyntland

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:53

This poem is relevent to so many situations - many of us would love to - both send and recieve a - 'little parachute of love' - It would be such a lovely start to 2023

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Hélène

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:43

A great poem to start 2023!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:40

Tender and moving, Hélène.

Best wishes for the new year.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:37

Thank you so much, Graham. I appreciate the encouragement and look forward to WOL poets doing this vital year proud.

All the best to you,
Steve

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:31

Thank you, Stuart. Best wishes for the new year.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:27

One of the best I have seen for a long time, Adam.

Best wishes for the new year.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:23

Best wishes to you, Julie.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:23

I think we all share your optimism Stephen and applaud you for keeping this subject matter foremost in our WOL poets' mindset.
I think the people of Ukraine need as many parachutes of hope as they can get. Bravo!

G

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 1st Jan 2023 10:48

A general strike is what is needed!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 1st Jan 2023 10:35

💐

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 1st Jan 2023 10:25

12m by 'eck, lucky chap!

Mine's 1" on a good day.😟

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Hugh

Sun 1st Jan 2023 10:20

The wind out there is strong and cold,
Attacking the homeless both young and old.
Wrapped up in blankets dirty and damp,
The street is their bedroom ,its lights their lamp.

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Hélène

Sun 1st Jan 2023 01:52

The photo is astounding. Wow. And so fitting to the well-worded poem.

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Hélène

Sun 1st Jan 2023 01:47

Thank you Uilleam. And the same to you & yours!

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Sun 1st Jan 2023 01:36

Lovely poem Julie and such a beautiful coloured species of bird.
Thank you.

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 1st Jan 2023 00:03

Thanks kindly Hélène, WOL is quite the place to be. 🌷

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