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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 6th Nov 2020 15:56

Thank you Paul, Julie, Philipos for the comments & Tony for the Like. And, yes, we should all remember the many heroes who helped shape our countries & gave us freedom to live

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 6th Nov 2020 15:49

We can always think of this "suspended" Guy Fawkes night as an
allegory of the man himself being caught in the act and suspended
from carrying out his planned attack. We are merely on the rack of disappointment, unlike the man himself. ?

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Robert C Gaulke

Fri 6th Nov 2020 14:29

Thanks, Guys. When you work and live in the US, the humo(u)r's endless...Bob

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 6th Nov 2020 14:11

thanks for the likes

I really appreciate your comments Paul and MC - it is very good of you to take the time to do so - really pleased you liked this offering
Ian

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Fri 6th Nov 2020 13:20

Shades of champagne socialists...talk red, live blue.

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keith jeffries

Fri 6th Nov 2020 12:13

This is my kind of humour. More please. It really made me smile but there again I'm a little odd when it comes to humour. The bloke in North Korea has a really 'in' haircut which I have often thought of emulating.

Thanks
keith

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Ghazala lari

Fri 6th Nov 2020 11:52

I love the way you narrate....sounds so dreamily beautiful ? lost in your poem?

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Ghazala lari

Fri 6th Nov 2020 11:50

Exquisitely written ?

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Ghazala lari

Fri 6th Nov 2020 11:49

This is such an intense write. Feel like picking up the luggage and carry it close to heart...?

Beautifully written ?

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julie callaghan

Fri 6th Nov 2020 11:17

Aww, I know Hugh, we used to make our black lab a den under the stairs. I personally think fireworks should be banned apart from professional displays. Let’s hope there’s no more for a while. Lots of fireworks here too. Hope your dog is a lot happier today. Thanks for the like.

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Hugh

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:58

Lots of bangs and flashes round here,
My dog was curled up at my feet in fear.

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julie callaghan

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:16

Thanks for this Stephen, I am such a coward I can’t watch war films or documentaries, the only one I managed was War Horse and this poem reminded me of that. I read this through tears. I think I will come back and read it again later. Well done.

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Philipos

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:09


Unthinking times - what must it have been like - scrambling over muddy trench tops only to be shot back in again, and the mustard gas.

Indeed wear the poppy with pride for the heroes, walking wounded, and those whose remains still dwell in the many sprawling burial places in France, Belgium, and other parts around the world.

Blessings.

P

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:03

Thank you Paul.
I wrote this back in 2017 after watching a documentary about trench warfare & the young men leaving their ordinary lives not realising the horrors they were about to face.

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Philipos

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:01


Morbid thinking, sometimes the essence of a great poem - certainly a pause for thought.

Enjoyed.

P.

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Chris Hubbard

Fri 6th Nov 2020 07:30

Thank you for your interest Jennifer.

Best wishes,

Chris

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Chris Hubbard

Fri 6th Nov 2020 07:24

To Stephen (A) and A.S. , thank you for your interest in my slice of Saharan life. While I've never been there, the very first pencil portrait I made, now many years ago, was of a Tuareg tribesman, taken from a National Geographic magazine photograph,

I've always had a soft spot for the shape and majesty of the great dunes found there, and the courage and power of the people who make their living within it.

Magical!

cheers,

Chris

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Fri 6th Nov 2020 07:22

?Wrote this one years ago and brought it out of retirement for yesterday. Thanks Julie and Po for the comments.

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J.D. Bardo

Fri 6th Nov 2020 06:35

AAHHH, Great Memories, posting this one, thank-you for the likes,

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Philipos

Thu 5th Nov 2020 21:55


Really good - well done.

Most enjoyable read. P ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 5th Nov 2020 20:24

The shape of mesmerising poetry.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 5th Nov 2020 20:11

Thanks for the Likes & comment Shifa!

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John Coopey

Thu 5th Nov 2020 19:53

Thankyou for the Likes, MC, Stephen G, Stephen A, Kevin and JD.

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 19:27

Thanks for this, definitely helped to fill in all the blanks in my diary. A little disappointed that my birthday didn't get a mention.

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 19:07

Thanks also to Shifa and Rose for the likes

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:55

A concise yet effective poem. Absolutely brilliant!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:51

The childlike innocence in this poem is something everyone can resonate with. Lovely!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:47

What a beautiful story you've woven with your words.
The verse, "The backdrop of a war was where I could be found
surrounded by bombed buildings
Food was rationed, so I grew up
feeling punished for no reason" are some of the most evocative lines I've ever read in a poem.
Amazing!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:44

Beautifully penned!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:42

Motivating and true to life. Good job!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:40

So evocative and vibrant!

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Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:33

This was the era when people were of an entirely different breed than those of today

' we can take it '

was their motto and by heck, they could thank God!

great piece Keith and that line-

' the German Airforce had re-landscaped the area ' brilliant!

as brilliant as the poem itself.



Rose?

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Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:23

You word-paint a wonderful picture, Stephen.








Rose ?

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Thu 5th Nov 2020 18:08

Love this Lisa and great to see you posting again!







Rose ?

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:58

Thanks Stephen and Dean for the likes too.

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:57

Thank for the likes and great comments Stephen and Paul from behind the mask.

Thanks also Stephen and Hugh for the likes.

Hope you have fun and keep safe.

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Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:57

Love this xx

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:24

You're on fire with your poetry this week Julie ?
Another goodun ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 5th Nov 2020 17:12

A dose of realism that is strangely refreshing in its depiction of the
unpredictable and the unwelcome aspects of life (and death). Good one..

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 5th Nov 2020 16:55

Well-crafted food for thought. I take the view that if you care
for your body in youth, it will return that care in age. There may not
be anything particularly poetical in "damage limitation" but perhaps
there should be in the context of life itself. As a species we have a
very flexible term of existence, unlike most others in nature. For
that let us be truly grateful as the process of shrivelling and shrinkage takes hold.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 5th Nov 2020 16:30

Me too! You had to be around then to really know that deprivation
had its upside and being young managed to stimulate all sorts of
wonderful mind games and that great weapon of choice - the
imagination. Bomb sites became battlefields. Streets became
avenues of promise to the world that lay beyond. Home became
the refuge when the light began to fade and a voice would call out
to a child to come home - supper's ready! And bedtime saw a hiding place where a torch would flick on for a bit of pre-sleep reading of treasured comic books. Hitler's war was fading and the world we knew offered little in the way of luxury, but knowing what we knew and having what we had was enough.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 5th Nov 2020 16:20

Never mind Ray - keeping active is the secret and carpet laying is
certainly that ! As for being of use today...we need merely recall -
There were those around in another day
Whose sacrifice let others find their way
Via the price they were prepared to pay
So the future would be here to stay ! ?

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 14:37

Thanks for the likes Stephen, Patricia and Stefan

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julie callaghan

Thu 5th Nov 2020 14:36

Brian, maybe I will add another verse to include a lovely long walk in the winter sunshine.... Yes but what a lovely way to go?

Enjoy your cycle ride, I think that is the only one on your list that is allowed for a while.

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keith jeffries

Thu 5th Nov 2020 14:20

Ray,

The opening stanzas could sound a cord of despair as we grow older and begin to feel valueless. However, we form a resource of experience and knowledge, a source of wisdom which younger generations have yet to acquire. When younger we too saw those on their bums and passed them by not knowing what a treasure house they stored.

Thank you for this
Keith

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raypool

Thu 5th Nov 2020 13:44

Thanks Paul, you have it in a nutshell ( or something similar)!

Jennifer, he was a great actor, and made other excellent films as you say. The Offence and The Hill were my favourites, never shown today.

Thank you Brian Stephen Julie and Grant for looking in and liking.

Ray

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 5th Nov 2020 13:32

Cheers Paul, thanks for your comments on "Lack of Balance"
I have missed a rung on the ladder of love and been subject to the twisted joints of balance loss as most have?
Tommy

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Thu 5th Nov 2020 13:31

Julie - I don't mind the occasional hygge, but I want to be out in the fresh air - cycling, playing golf and tennis, and/or in the pub. Too much hygging will kill you.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 5th Nov 2020 12:47

Thank you for the additional comments and Likes Paul!
And, Rose I'm always open to any suggestions! I've messaged you regarding what I was trying to convey. Not to say that it makes any sense lol. ?
Thanks again

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J.D. Bardo

Thu 5th Nov 2020 05:51

A special thanks to Ghazala, Wise as well as kind,
Thank you Hugh, the sun does shine, "occasionally" on JD.
Thank-you dean, love the words of inspiration,

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