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J.D. Bardo

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 12:27

Thanks again everyone, EVERYONE, Paul, About to post some of my favorites that are spiritual in nature, with some Quotes thrown in.
stand by.

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Philipos

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 11:35


Commiserations - such a tribulation of loss - so reminds me of Grays Elegy - and the tolling of memorial sentences.

Seize on the precious times with which to hang your thoughts.

Dogs must surely qualify for the after life - I'd hate it if were not so.

Blessings.

P

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Hilary Walker

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 10:53

Thanks Andy, appreciate your words. I'm ok, hope you & your family are coping! Looks like it may be some time before we're back at Word Central ? take care x

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Hugh

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 10:50

May all your wishes come true,
And a future that pleases you.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 10:31

Impressive voice.....?10 for the poem?

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Hugh

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 09:08

"I just need to be me." Good one.

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 09:01

Thank-you Keith, This on came to me recently when a friend asked what I read.

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keith jeffries

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 08:54

JD.,
Another good poem. In particular I liked the words, "Writing was complicated Reading set me free". I think many would agree with you on this. I was below average at school but eventually arrived at Oxford University. Never give up JD

Keith

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 06:05

thank-you for likes and comments, I wish my return comments could be as elegantly written. Paul, I read that thoroughly, cool, more intelligent comments later. thanks, J.D.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 04:13

Welcome to WOL Brittany! Fellow Hoosier here. This is a really cool place for support from poets around the world. I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. Write on! ~ V

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 3rd Nov 2020 00:31

Thanks Jennifer, glad you liked it. I think we all need to lighten the mood every now and again, in fact especially now. ?

J. x

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Bon Darcy

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 22:32

I'm a tear stained petal dressed in the shade sorrow. So delicately sad but holds so much beauty. Wonderful piece Jordyn and very relatable

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Philipos

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 22:11


Thank you for sharing your lovely memories on the Emerald Isle.

Appreciated.

P

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Philipos

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 22:10


Thank you for sharing your lovely memories on the Emerald Isle.

Appreciated.

P

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John Marks

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 21:31

Thanks be to those stalwart souls who commented upon or liked this poem, versions of which have rattled around in my mind and heart for years. "A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness." ~Robert Frost

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Abdul Ahmad

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 20:16

Thank you Stephen for your comments. We shall come through this nightmare.

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Mike Bartram

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 19:57

Thank you very much for reading and the comment.

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Mon 2nd Nov 2020 18:01

It is an old adage Keith, but, it does apply-

that you never fail to poetically please!





Rose ?

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Mon 2nd Nov 2020 17:55

Two questions
1) how do you switch your gift off as its important to do this sometimes
2) I largely get clairsentenance but sometimes get clairaudience do the two sometimes work together? X

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John Coopey

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 17:37

I too am a bit selective when lobbing brass out, MC. If someone is busking I’m only too happy to shove them a bob or two; they have enriched my day. I don’t mind giving a Greggs food voucher to some down-and-out in a sleeping bag. On the other hand if they’re gobbling fags and slurping a bottle of Diamond White I don’t. “That might be their only pleasure” I hear some saying. “Well swop it” I say. “Swop it for the pleasure of reading a book or buying a sandwich”.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 17:34

Thank you very much, Greg and M.C. and thanks to everyone for the likes.

There is obviously a tendency to look back at 1966 through rose-tinted glasses and of course some of the players have had difficulties in their later lives.But just for one day the world seemed a better place and the likes of Nobby left us with so many wonderful memories.

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Mon 2nd Nov 2020 17:29

Virtual hug x

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 17:12

A really beautiful, heartfelt poem.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:39

One of your very best, Ray, and you set a high standard. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:37

Always admired Sean, he seemed to be able to lead as normal a life as is possible for one of his fame. He remained as goodlooking as ever even in old age, and became a great actor. The Name of the Rose is a memorable film. He was definitely the best 007 ever. Will be greatly missed by many. Pussy Galore also made silly girls giggle Paul!
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:32

An unusual subject,very well imagined, and recounting how perhaps, we have all felt lonely, frustrated and isolated this terrible year. Hope our boat doesn't take too long to arrive. Loved it.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:26

Really clever and very funny! Need to read it slowly again several times. Admit will have to look up Kage and Theodor Geisel!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:08

Nice one! Do fish have fingers? Is an anchorwoman a kind of sea creature? A comic strip is a man getting undressed? A chest of drawers a lot of tattoos on a torso?

Great stuff, jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 16:02

Would love to know what she needed to be absolved of?! Enjoyed your lament, lovely vein of irony as usual.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:58

Extremely evocative, beautiful writing, one can almost smell the mustiness of old dusty folders.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:55

Really feel for you, as it is so traumatic when you lose a beloved companion. Your feelings are so well expressed. They give so much more than they take, always pleased to see you, to fit in with any plan, (except a bath!), and know if you are depressed about something. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:34

Nice one! Perhaps better not to listen to the television spreading the news, as it isn't too reassuring at the moment.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:31

Fascinating! One of the best places for this is an airport, I have found, as there are so many varieties of human being passing by. On the other hand you can't put what you learn about them to much use, as you will never see most of them again. To think what their lives might be like is fascinating though.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:28

So true Keith, but few people realise this, or need for various reasons to keep their real self hidden, so' spend their lives in a charade', as you so cleverly point out. Great writing, and advice to take to heart.

Jennifer

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kimberly

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:21

How easy it is
for us to slip.

How hard it is
to hold onto only words.

When all we crave
is someone else's touch.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:19

Well worth the re-run, like any good piece of entertainment.
The young can be both cunning & devious. I recall a young lad in a pub bar who was seeking cash support for some athletic endeavour
and got quite stroppy when I said I'd pay up on proof of completion.
I wonder how many paid up and never knew or heard anything more of that means of divesting the well-meaning from their money?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 15:07

A timely and effective tribute to one of the sporting signposts of my
generation, now removed from the highway of life. Good one.

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Poetique

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 14:38

Glad you liked it.. Thanks for the encouraging comment Tom

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julie callaghan

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 12:25

I wish I could turn my flower into a hug and send it to you. Keep on the right path and take one step at a time.

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Hugh

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 12:03

The passion and thought you have put into this masterpiece, place on the path of your future life and all will turn out well .You have opened up brilliantly. Well done.

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J.D. Bardo

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 11:57

Thank-you to all leaving likes and comments, I am overwhelmed with gratitude, and feeling to bashful to say much,I am glad you enjoyed my delightful happy story. I am going to follow with a open letter to my dearly departed dog Leah thank-you again J.D. (and Leah)

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John Coopey

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 10:31

The only upside to this pandemic, Kev, is that our worldwide fans are not spoiled with too much of our literary genius!

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Tom

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 10:28

Thanks Dean, Keith, Lisa, JD and Stephen for reading and the likes on this one. And thanks Keith for commenting. This year was really getting to me a week or two ago, feeling pretty hopeless. Much better now (despite the new lockdown) but glad to have gotten this little poem out of the gloom.

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Ujjal Mandal

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 07:33

Thank you

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kJ Walker

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 07:24

One of my favourites of yours. If things were normal, I'd be requesting this one at Well Spoken

Cheers Kevin

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J.D. Bardo

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 07:16

Not a zombie, they are brought back from the dead, I just had a chance to visit the dead for a brief moment once is all.

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New Shoes

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 07:05

Fun Poem! It twisted my tongue!

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New Shoes

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 06:43

"The hills are alive with the sound of music"

Great poem!

and you better get some sleep!

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New Shoes

Mon 2nd Nov 2020 06:27

Just the written words alone are a release. As the living beasts in our mind awake, find the words to how they make you feel and they will go back to sleep. There may be some painful waves, one day you will wake and wonder where they have gone in the deep ocean of thought. Strings that no longer bind you. set your focus on the highest, and find love through your family and friends. And most important of all, allow yourself to love yourself.


Peace

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Mon 2nd Nov 2020 05:59

Jordyn we are all on a journey. We can begin that journey of sobriety at any time, even with a blip, being sober 6 months has literally saved my life. I feel a different person, I have to face myself and my truths and its painful sometimes, but we move on, we let go, we heal, you are so right when you say we cannot expect another to fix us, we have to heal but we can allow another to love us, with our scars and all. I loved this poem. Keep writing.

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