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Mon 14th Sep 2020 22:55

Tom, perhaps semi-serious. And as John has brought up Japan I also think there is an inherent Samurai mentality that influenced their behaviour during WW2.

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John Marks

Mon 14th Sep 2020 22:49

Thank you Keith, Tom and Brian. I am as guilty as everyone else in indulging in racial and national stereotypes. However, the Germans and English share a common origin and 'type' as our languages attest, so we should be careful. We allowed (yes allowed) millions of Irish people to starve to death in the potato famine of the1840s and millions of Indians to starve to death in the Begal famine of the1940s. Also, modern Germany has apologised deeply and often for the Shoah, their terrible crimes against the Jewish people and other vulnerable minorities. The Japanese, on the other hand, still refuse to apologise for their many crimes against Chinese civilians, young Korean women and Allied POWs

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Tom

Mon 14th Sep 2020 22:18

Brian, are you serious?

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Mon 14th Sep 2020 17:22

I always wonder whether it is something in the German nature, an arrogance, that will come out and manifest itself in other ways in the future.

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keith jeffries

Mon 14th Sep 2020 15:56

Should gratitude not be forgiveness? Perhaps.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 14th Sep 2020 15:50

John,

This brief poem is a statement which holds the truth. "The truth will set you free" is a Biblical (New Testament) quotation and often misunderstood even by theologians and many Christians. One can only hope that future generations will never repeat this horror. The truth is that evil manifested itself in the most appalling crime instigated by man. Those who participated, all Germans, should now be well acquainted with the truth of their actions. They lied and murdered the most vulnerable. They bear the blame and the shame.

Thank you for this
Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 14th Sep 2020 14:47

Yes! I feel you. ? Write on! ❤️

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 14th Sep 2020 14:41

Your poetry speaks to me Eric. Makes me long for a poetry man of my own. Thanks for sharing this romantic poem! ❤️

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HayzTee (Hayley)

Mon 14th Sep 2020 14:07

thank yoou all!

it really has been a while since i check my WOL account so my apologies for late replies...

thank you all for your lovely feedback, as always its a pleasure to hear your opinions ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 14th Sep 2020 12:44

Another good poem d.k

Keith

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d.knape

Mon 14th Sep 2020 08:23

Breathing is optional.
I choose it because
I want to see what
the next poem will be.
?

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Robert Haigh

Mon 14th Sep 2020 07:47

Interesting and poetic thoughts, tinged with melancholy.

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Robert Haigh

Mon 14th Sep 2020 07:35

Quite lyrical and poetic. I like it.

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 14th Sep 2020 07:26

Oh no Paul, don't get me wrong, I have also recently become a Grandad and would for the most part agree with you, except on one point, there's a difference between being child and being childish, especially if you're playing like a child. One is all about you, the other is all about someone else. All parents know that someone else comes first. ?❤

J. x

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Mon 14th Sep 2020 05:15

Dont keep your feelings blocked within you. Express and say your heart's wishes out aloud. She will never give up on you. True love just never.
I can feel your emotions so crystal clear in black and white. How beautifully you speak your heart out.

Take care. Much blessings always!!?

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Chris Hubbard

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:50


Well thank you Paul, and glad to be of service!

I certainly enjoyed writing it, which is usually a sign for me that there's something going on within it.

All the best,
Chris

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:40

Thanks for stopping by and leaving thoughtful feedback Keith and Robert! I agree Robert, most compulsive liars I’ve met somehow convince themselves their lies are truth. I suppose it’s their truth!

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:36

Paul, thank you for the like. ?

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:35

Nicola, my spirit has been yearning to be in nature. I have been building a block wall out in the country surrounded by the mountains and pastures in this area. It has been good for my soul. Also, one of the gifts of my sobriety is that my sense of humor is returning and there has been more laughter. As I mentioned to Paul in a comment on We Walk to the Sun, I have felt alone lately. Your comments are helping to remind me that I am not alone.

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:33

Sea.Green and Jordyn, thank you for the likes. ☺️

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:32

Robert, thank you! When I first wrote this I felt like it was not so good. My wife encouraged me that this wasn’t the case. I’m glad she did. And thank you again for the encouragement.

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:31

Adam, thank you for saying that. It took the crumbling of a religious mindset to awaken me to living a spiritual life anew.

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:29

Paul, I went back and re-read Tension after reading this one and you’re right. Tension is the first part, Into the Unknown is the middle, and We Walk to the Sun wraps it up in an open ended kind of way.

I have been feeling pretty alone lately. It’s good to hear the reminder and to know that I’m truly not alone.

Paul, thank you. ?

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Shehariah

Mon 14th Sep 2020 00:27

Nicola, thank you. I am living toward that end every day.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 13th Sep 2020 23:52

Your titular question is very clearly hidden in the poem. You leave us unsure, intentionally or not. Clever.

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Sun 13th Sep 2020 23:47

Appreciate you reading, thanks! & Good to be back

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Robert C Gaulke

Sun 13th Sep 2020 23:05

Cheers, Robert.

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 22:25

A tour de force! Very well written!

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 22:19

This is very good! Truly engaging, with good use of language. I like it very much!

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 22:11

An entertaining write, for sure! I enjoyed the read.

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 22:07

Politicians are good at that. Sometimes I even think they begin to believe their own lies! Truth usually comes to light, eventually.

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raypool

Sun 13th Sep 2020 22:00

Apologies for the late response everyone! Keith, you're right, it does have that kind of flow to it - i'll have to make do with zoom !

Thanks Martin, my dad would have been too aloof to do that, but i'm glad it stirred up a memory or two!

Hi Brian. There's some truth to that in an extreme sense. I often think everything we used to take for granted has to be justified nowadays even though to us it is bleeding obvious.

Yes Mark. That doesn't bear thinking about, although some of our leaders have chunks of common sense missing that we took for granted and learnt almost by rote.

Many thanks for the likes too, Graham, Binte, Stephen and Iman.

Ray

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Sep 2020 21:01

Vautaw,

A straight forward poem but loaded with the truth.
Thanks for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Sep 2020 19:11

d.k.,
strength and defiance. I am with every word. This is one of your best.
Thanks
Keith

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Emeka Collins

Sun 13th Sep 2020 18:56

Old loves?

The joy of anticipating a new lover after shedding our old love usually makes one feel like a child again.

Your poem is like an excursion into new horizon. You take your reader along in your journey to experience your new lover.

Great piece, Keith.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Sep 2020 17:53

Thanks Paul - if the "Franky" is Sinatra, i couldn't be more flattered!.
Thanks also to those taking the trouble to click the "like" button.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Sep 2020 17:43

I retain two volumes by Nigel Rees: "Graffiti Lives" and "Graffiti 2" - which provide fun when the mood seeks a lift. Well done to Mr Rees
and his publisher for these forty year old treasure troves of public
wit. Excerpts gratefully acknowledged in the cause of further
education!
Join the Hernia Society
it needs your support
And how about this for all you intellectual poets out there
TS Eliot is an anagram of toilets
Then there's this....
I wish I were what I was when I wished I were what I am.

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julie callaghan

Sun 13th Sep 2020 16:34

Added a couple of extra verses. Anyone?

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 12:43

I'm still smiling at this as I type my comment, Simon. A highly amusing write, with more than a hint of truth for many of us, I suspect!

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Adam Whitworth

Sun 13th Sep 2020 10:08

Very strong inspirational poem, bravo!

It brings to my mind the thought that even as authoritarian religions crumble, spirituality remains untouched.

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julie callaghan

Sun 13th Sep 2020 09:44

Such a sad storey. So pleased there is a positive ending.

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julie callaghan

Sun 13th Sep 2020 09:27

Oh no, please don’t let it be so.
My written rhymes
I fear may offend
My time on WOL
Must to come an end

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 09:25

Ha-ha! Yes, we've all seen similar ditties on toilet doors, I think.

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 09:12

Ha-ha! Strange how different poets have different ideas about rhyme. I write in rhyme perhaps two-thirds of the time, but we are all free to write in whatever style or form we choose. Poetry itself is open to a myriad different approaches. Long live poetry - and freedom to express ourselves!

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Robert Haigh

Sun 13th Sep 2020 08:28

A poignant write. As I have become older the mirror has not been a good friend of mine! Still, we are all in the same boat, as far as that goes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Sep 2020 07:25

Thank you, Robert and Abdul and everyone else for the likes.

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Sun 13th Sep 2020 05:08

A boy in an exam once said his dreams were in a matchbox the teacher marked the question wrong as the question was what is in the matchbox, the correct answer was nothing. But really the boy had put his dreams in there. Kerp dreaming, all children should have dreams also x and our system of schooling very often tramples on them x

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Sun 13th Sep 2020 05:04

Get back into nature and surround yourself with laughter love and joy x

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Sun 13th Sep 2020 05:02

Beautiful keep shining that light....

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Sun 13th Sep 2020 05:00

Sounds like a soul mate, soulmates are conformable like a pair of comfy slippers but rarely evoke passion like a pair of leopard print stilletos!! Excuse the metaphor x

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