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M.C. Newberry

Mon 28th Oct 2019 10:26

I'm reminded of a popular song (thanks - Irving Caesar) from the past which I adapt here.
Tea for two
And two for tea
How much better
If it's free!
Can't you see
How happy we would be? ?
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Don Matthews

Mon 28th Oct 2019 09:59

We also enjoy drinking Britty Witty Humour John. Maybe your library has a section devoted to this? We could combine the library visit and Wetherspoons in one hit.....

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John Coopey

Mon 28th Oct 2019 09:35

Nigel’s National Brexit Front will slaughter him in an election.

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John Coopey

Mon 28th Oct 2019 08:35

Be sure to phone ahead to let me know you’re coming, Don. I think I’m changing my library book that day.

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Don Matthews

Mon 28th Oct 2019 06:08

I must visit with Thalia when there. Do they do the same with Earl Grey tea? She only drinks from a china teacup. Should she bring her own?

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Mon 28th Oct 2019 04:10

Thank you Dorothy, Don and John for your beautiful comments. John, your insightful interpretation reminds me of the original pied piper lore of a musician who lured children from their village never to be seen again! My pied piper is music. I can get lost in the melody and poetic lyrics forever!

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Mon 28th Oct 2019 03:29

Writing will empower you Masen. It will open your heart and mind to the beauty in life and help you make sense of the tragedies. Write on young poet. Your future is bright!

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Fred Nicholson

Sun 27th Oct 2019 23:10

Philipos, I hear you loud and clear.

My heart bleeds for the peoples, not aware of how unacknowledged past wrongs still affect them negatively, generations later.

As long as we remain ignorant about the connectivity of all life,
change will remain in the sphere of duality and superficial relating.

Philipos, thank you for commenting on 'imagine".

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Fred Nicholson

Sun 27th Oct 2019 22:43

Slowly rising sensual, yes yes yes, blessings abound.

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Fred Nicholson

Sun 27th Oct 2019 22:40

Lisa, this is a beautiful work. I see this as a universal truth. Drink is only one escape many of us use, to obscure clarity. Clarity may mean standing alone against worldly hypnotism.
Indeed, a beautiful work.
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Don Matthews

Sun 27th Oct 2019 21:18

Sheesh Bran! You could both do with a sesh at pet-owner training school. You both might learn something of value...

Nice wordplay....

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Philipos

Sun 27th Oct 2019 19:54

Too easy to say it is man's inhumanity to their fellow man but your poem has connotations with that recent immigrant event in NI and I can't seem shake that horrible thought out of my mind because it is so distressing. I never knew them, but I do sense their tragic circumstances and the rippling effect on their families. P.

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raypool

Sun 27th Oct 2019 19:51

Hi Jennifer, the picture builds as always when you come on. That's a book i'm not familiar with - i'll get clicking thanks. The story is a new one on me - I believe today the ravens are prevented from leaving the Tower by clipping or some such method. There's a history in everything. Also check out swan upping - maybe a poem to follow?

Ray

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 27th Oct 2019 19:25

Hauntingly beautiful Desmond. ❤

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 27th Oct 2019 19:14

Wow! Touching, raw, bittersweet, as always... those fleeting moments filled with electricity. Embrace the storm.

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Philip Stevens

Sun 27th Oct 2019 18:23

Enjoyed... the poem that is

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Philipos

Sun 27th Oct 2019 17:12

So sad if true - have worked with so many who fitted this category - perhaps it was their wit that distorted their personalities. You put this very well indeed. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 27th Oct 2019 16:26

Is it crunch time for Bojo? Here's my thought about his position..
Like a pantomime scene, I shout "Mind you
beware of that figure behind you"!
Does Number Ten have a door headed "Exit"
That waits if you don't deliver Brexit? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 27th Oct 2019 16:04

Hi Brian B. - always good to have your comments. We certainly live
in interesting times...on both sides of the pond.
Brian M. - thanks for the accurate London-centric observation.
Maybe at the next mayoral election we'll see SK doing The Lambeth
Walk out of office.

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raypool

Sun 27th Oct 2019 14:52

Thanks Graham. I did enjoy levering all that rhyme into place in the last verse. She's the master - oops mistress!

Brian, thanks. I wrote this before their marriage - does it stand the test of time? i'll fall back on the use of rhyme.

Thanks Jennifer, glad you liked this. Clackmannan is just a funny cranky word (unless you're Scottish of course).

Thanks for the likes, afishamongmany and Don

Ray

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Brian Blanchard

Sun 27th Oct 2019 14:29

Well said, and certainly akin to events here where the heavy populated (and liberal) east and west U.S. coasts carry so much political weight.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sun 27th Oct 2019 12:47

Having been born on December 25, my parents always made sure that birthdays were special and separate from the holiday. At the end of the day it was all about me, with a cake, presents and cards. The only thing I didn't get was a party with my friends as my spring and summer born siblings did.
Everyone's life should be celebrated. Sometimes the holidays make the festivities all the better.
Here's to all those with such birthdays!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 27th Oct 2019 11:48

Thanks Lisa. This is a general over view of what will actually be happening in November in a way that could affect each sign. Scorpio and Capricorn is a bit of a sticky situation in much the same way as mud because it's earth and water. 2020 is very transformative for Capricorn's relationships though.

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raypool

Sun 27th Oct 2019 10:43

Hi John. I've altered that line - you were spot on. i've altered it to Typical Jack instead. Thanks.

Cheers Don.

Ray

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Hugh

Sun 27th Oct 2019 08:55

Come on Wales you can do it.Cymru am byth.Join England in the World Cup Rugby Final.

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Don Matthews

Sun 27th Oct 2019 07:53

kJ - Maybe they haven't updated home page yet ? Weekend and all that....

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Don Matthews

Sat 26th Oct 2019 22:46

'when all else fails you can always count on your digits'

Nice line......

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Philipos

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:34

Ah Jennifer - nobly put - but t'was ever thus I'm afraid - and a good unpacking though of the Lord's prayer - let's hope he has a listening ear these days. Blessings. P. ?

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:26

Eye think this is very cool

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:17

I hope that's not my horoscope Ruth! November is tough. As a Capricorn I never did get on well with Scorpios.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:13

Indeed, it happens to me all the time

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:02

Beautiful - lovely to find someone who cares so much about family in this day and age. Wonderfully expressed without any mawkishness.
Jennifer

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:49

I made a slight change.

Thanks to all.

Been out of it for a while, good to be back.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:36

Really brings back Old London. Have you ever read The Maul and the Pear Tree by PD James? It's a report of a grisly murder at London Docks. I had a relation who lived up in Sutherland, and when a raven died at The Tower they used to find another and send it down to London! Cross me heart etc. etc. Great atmosphere.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:30

Liked this one Ray - agreed with GS about finding a rhyme for Clackmannan!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:25

Really liked this - in death a dominance - had they sought to fly - how they have fallen.

Jennifer

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branwell kent

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:44

great poem.

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afishamongmany

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:11

Beautiful evoquative piece John and wow Roy Harper that name took me a long way back to my Birmingham days. Didn't realise that he had 'made it' and had a long career after those eary days.
Thanks
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John Marks

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:03

Music, poetry, love, sex - how do we disentangle them? Do we need to?

"Music and silence, point and counterpoint; the rhythm and metre of sound brought to measure

Infuses speech, enlivens poetry."

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afishamongmany

Sat 26th Oct 2019 17:16

Hi Don - this elecro-magnetic communication comes to you from the outer reaches of my cosmic brain box. How did it get there? Ah, it was sent, it came and now it done gone went.

The theory of The Force fails of course for force is only horse power and too impersonal a rational to rely on, to fly on, thinking to escape the fate that awaits, thinking to solve the human situation.
All power, from horse to electro-magnetic, kinetic, frenetic, torque, talk, comes from A Person. The One who came as a son and got the job done. In Him we are made one and the angels do hum the song that saves, the poem of the brave that will run and run into and through the new age to come.
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kJ Walker

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:47

Beautiful. If it wasn't for the title I wouldn't have known what it was about. ?

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Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:45

Isn'tlington elite!!!

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kJ Walker

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:44

Sorry to tell you this Don, but you're still asleep. It's all a dream.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:42

Lovely Lisa. ?

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Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:40

Enjoyed all the rhyming Ray, wonderfully contrived. A good time piece with no mention of Harry and Wills' spat, mental health issues, press intrusion etc.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:12

Respect for getting Clackmannan into a verse! Watch out Pam Ayres!

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Don Matthews

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:19

'No great mind ever existed without a touch of madness.' said Aristotle.

Perhaps I can add some of us are more madder than others?......

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Emilia Callahan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:03

I would agree with you - I think he was just very creative. Although, I'm a firm believer that all of us creatives are just a little mad, anyway.

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Emilia Callahan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:02

Thank you! Yes, I can see where you are coming from though. We do look at the same ocean ? Hawaii is very beautiful. Your friend is very lucky!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 26th Oct 2019 14:17

JC - I always enjoy the sparring and the good humour that still manages to prevail. Thanks for enlivening this precious often
precocious (and occasionally perplexing?) site.?

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