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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 23:16

Never fear the mirror, never fear your reflection or your shadow. I have shared these thoughts but a long time ago. I know now that my shadow is as much a part of me as my reflection and I'm the master of both, but it took some finding. Brilliant piece!

J.

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John Marks

Thu 21st Feb 2019 23:15

Very interesting John. I think Hughes took a fundamentally anti-elitist point of view in many poems. He wasn't afraid of getting down to ground level nor (metaphorically and literally) getting his hands dirty. So I don't know what he'd make of literary theory.Hughes was very much the poet of the continuous present as in the masterly 'Coming down through Sometset':

I want him
To stop time. His strength staying, bulky,
Blocking time. His rankness, his bristling wildness,
His thrillingly painted face.
A badger on my moment of life.
Not years ago, like the others, but now.

Thank you again for an interesting piece.

John

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 23:11

And again, I do this. Mind you, I'm not scared of my answers, (well, not all the time).

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 23:07

And another one goes on my favourite list. I love your style, the use of words, the rhythm absolutely mesmerising. Thank you.

J.

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Feb 2019 22:57

"Predictive text?", "Yes autocorrect?"
Jason didn't use LOL
Instead he used PMSL
We shoulda changed to PLIMSOL

(We're slipping PT, shit AC.....) ?

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Heart of Lead

Thu 21st Feb 2019 21:39

This really hit me hard in a way hard to describe. So often our perceptions are twisted by what we think others will think. In such ways we are bound to an image we created for ourselves. Thank you for this.

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Heart of Lead

Thu 21st Feb 2019 21:36

The shadow and the reflection are both aspects of ourselves. We worry when they take a life of their own. Wonderful work.

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Heart of Lead

Thu 21st Feb 2019 21:30

Thank you Jason, I appreciate your words and I am glad you found similar meaning. Coexisting within can be as hard to describe as it is to live.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Feb 2019 21:13

Anyone taking the road from Brixham to the lower ferry at Kingswear
can find the turning that leads to Higher Brownstone where a lone
tree marks the start of the metalled track that leads down to the
remains of the old WW2 coastal defences beside the River Dart
estuary. My late eldest sister knew them during her youthful wartime
service in those dangerous days. She lost a wartime love - missing
in action over the Channel - and later moved Stateside and married
a survivor of the D-Day invasion - wounded and shipped back to
the UK to recuperate before going back home to Louisiana., with
my sister following on to spend the rest of her life there.

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d.knape

Thu 21st Feb 2019 20:58

enchiladas are a Mexican food.
tortillas covered with meat, cheese, and chile.
The best are Tex-Mex.
Order some today on Amazon!
do not die before you've had some.
?
wink.

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 20:02

Thanks mate X?

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lisa donohoe

Thu 21st Feb 2019 18:57

The title caught my eye straight Away.
You never fail my friend, this is a brilliant piece x

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 21st Feb 2019 18:48

Bloody hell Narcissus is alive and well. Oh how our mirror-obsessed society needs to see this poetic message, but I doubt it would register unless written in modern hieroglyphics! ❤

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raypool

Thu 21st Feb 2019 18:27

An enjoyable romp amongst the bovine and divine. Excellent rhyme all round David.

Ray

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lisa donohoe

Thu 21st Feb 2019 17:58

Thank you dear friend x

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Feb 2019 17:46

Hilarious. Loved it. Thanks, Keith

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 17:45

And so you should go on that date,
Balls to the past, the future can't wait x

Love it.

J. x

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Feb 2019 17:02

Dave C. Good question. But too many of today's occupants of these
islands put our history aside in favour of their own personal interests
so I think not. But history will tell future generations what was done -
and why.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Feb 2019 16:54

Just remember - being funny is a serious business! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Feb 2019 16:45

Refreshing and so topical for this "blip" electronic age we endure.
The consistent wit in the wordplay is hugely enjoyable. THIS should be a poem of the week!

Comment is about Autocorrect and predictive text ruined my chance of romance and sex (blog)

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Rich

Thu 21st Feb 2019 16:31

Thanks Frances, much appreciated - glad you like the poem!

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Feb 2019 16:13

This kind of tirade poetry always has a strong impact on the reader. It is convincing in its intensity. It is well written and well constructed. All the best for Derek. I enjoyed this poem

Thank you
Keith

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Dave Caplan

Thu 21st Feb 2019 14:30

A lovely poem Keith.
I have an autistic nephew who started at university last year.
He is one of the gentlest, kindest people I know, but he rarely speaks unless spoken to !

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 21st Feb 2019 14:24

Good one! Love the visual and you reciting it! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 21st Feb 2019 14:17

Perfect poem for the new age dating scene and the cursed auto correct. Thanks for the smiles. ??

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 13:53

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jennifer Malden

Thu 21st Feb 2019 13:52

Hello D.K - in reply to your question about notifications, I am still getting them, but I had to say, on a kind of form to fill in, which ones I wanted, and which not. Perhaps if you go to your account you will find this form.

Always enjoy your stuff! Hope you are still getting fed one way or another| Perhaps the last effort, about departing, was due to starvation tactics? Cabeza di cocco!!!!! Not really, love your poems, keep one cheerful. What exactly are enchiladas anyway? Obviously food of a Spanish origin, but can't get further than that, and am too lazy to look it up.

Jennifer

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Feb 2019 13:41

Please forgive
My flippancy
(Also I like
Short verse like thee)

I'm getting sidetracked
Here dk
Your time expires
You're on your way

I hope you get
More up-front time
Before the priest
(Kick out the grime)

What's that? No grime?
No crime, no strife?
You've lived a what?
A godly life?

(Getting side-tracked) ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Feb 2019 13:16

John it seems you haven't learned
That 'puters give you pain
They autocorrect and predictive text
And laugh when playing games

Haha we got poor John again
That poor old shilly it
"Predictive text?" "Yes, autocorrect"
We've got him ty the bit

The answer John is ditch computer
Take up paper/pen
Write a letter to your mate
Plenty sex again

Sorted ?


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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Feb 2019 12:33

Yes Stephen, what will we do tomorrow?
What mood will I put us all in
A trip on the roller-coaster of living?
Wait and see cos my verse it's just fin ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Feb 2019 12:14

I am a humourist at heart. I think their should be a lot more on the site ?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 11:07

Good old Spike...really funny 50 years ago...looks very dated now though.

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<Deleted User> (21487)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 10:30

You have revealed you secret so I shall reveal mine, over the years I have been in love with multiple toy boys. All of them black and white
and all addicted to fox poo.

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<Deleted User> (21487)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 10:21

Please don't do this to me - I am laughing - I can't see for tears - my husband is just the same.

I have spilled my coffee and choked on my biscuit and still I am laughing .

Your poems should come with a health warning.

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Stephen Mellor

Thu 21st Feb 2019 09:44

what are we going to do now???

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<Deleted User> (21487)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 08:05

I think you have outspiked Spike Milligan - I just love this - more of the same would be very good.
The photo is spot on.

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 21st Feb 2019 07:56

Thank you all for the comments and likes. I really appreciate them.

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 21st Feb 2019 06:50

I really like this, and the "she" that you speak of really resonates for some of us. I tried to put my "he" in a box, but that didn't work out well for either of us, so instead "we" coexist.
One foot in order, one foot in chaos, balanced on the fulcrum.

Love the style and rhythm of it. ?

J.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:43

Wow, you have a new fan.
Very clever writing, beautifully expressed.

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:42

Hi John, I wanted to drop by and say how much I enjoy your work, and your supportive comments - particularly the lovely one you took the time to make on my blog. There's a beautiful quality to your work that leaves me wanting more. Thanks again, Kate

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:29

Hi Paris, I love this, you transported me right there.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:28

Clever piece.

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:27

Thanks for the encouragement everyone. Really appreciate it. Cheers, Kate

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:08

Nice twist John ?

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Marcy a Ewing

Thu 21st Feb 2019 03:00

Thank you kate i appreciate it

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Dave Caplan

Wed 20th Feb 2019 23:57

That scene in Times Square, New York
must have been akin to that of V.E. day in London.

Are we going to have similar scenes after Brexit ? !

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lisa donohoe

Wed 20th Feb 2019 23:55

It is heartbreaking to read such a deep part of your story john, but as always you write with such heartfelt love and pain in a way that speaks directly to the soul..?

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Wed 20th Feb 2019 23:47

Hi Zach, this is remarkable and I will enjoy re-reading in an attempt to interpret. Complex, dark and rich with evocative language. Thanks for sharing.

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Wed 20th Feb 2019 23:27

Very dreamlike Marcy, it's an effective technique to run it all together like this

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