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winston plowes

Thu 4th Jul 2013 23:50

Darwin + Rhyme = Magic :-)

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Ste J Bee

Thu 4th Jul 2013 21:29

Hi Marksy, thanks for reading the seagulls are watching, I can see your building up your blog entries, Just had a read of The template of my being, Just another load of shite and Dostoyevski's chicken. You are extremely good with words, when I look at my simple stuff, alongside your wordy attitudey stuff, well? what can I say? very inventive... I must try to write something a little more ballsy. Keep up the good verse.

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:42

Surely the first piece of poetry inspired by those bloody adverts crowbarred into the start of YouTube videos.
No - I don't want to see a film starring Owen Wilson and Vince Vaughn - ever!

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:19

Every single sentiment in this poem sums up exactly how I feel. Have a pint for me...

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:12

The population of Sunderland and many a seaside town will serenade this loudly.

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Cathy

Thu 4th Jul 2013 16:21

Thanks John. I used the rhythm method x Anyway, I do. I always write poems for him- one way or another.

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 16:06

Could people please email me with their votes at farmoorgirl@yahoo.co.uk - I've just heard of one vote that's gone missing in the internal mail - but if your name is Steve or Starfish, don't worry, I've got yours. xx

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Greg Freeman

Thu 4th Jul 2013 15:03

I have a perfectly law-abiding black friend and former colleague whose experience of the police as a driver is exactly that of Lemn Sissay's. He doesn't make a big thing about it; he just shrugs his shoulders about it most of the time. That doesn't make it right. It makes it institutionally racist.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:57

new frequency
old airwaves
crazy - - yes
to think
buzzing will
go away.

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:55

Thanks for your comments on my wondering - when isn't there anxiety in the house ? Great to see you on the site. x

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John Darwin

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:48

Thanks for your comments. The title comes from a recent trip to New York. My partner wanted to do be active and touristy and I .... You know the rest

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:48

Thank you Stefan and Patricia :) smiley frog face...

Ally - take a look at my last blog (Time to Vote) - it explains in detail what you need to do.

Thanks Francine - I've got your vote :) x

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:47

Oh come on. If a white officer does it, it's"racism". If a black officer does it, he's an "Uncle Tom". The same moans were heard three or more decades ago...so what does this say about a community that seems apart from countless other ethnic origins in its anti-behaviour towards virtually all forms of authority?
IF an area is crime ridden and its population predominantly a particular ethnic origin, it's obvious that the police will be stopping and checking mostly that sort of individual. It is called "reality". In south London, I once challenged two black youths who were kicking the hell out of a road sign - to which was chained a rather expensive/new looking mountain bike. But looking around, all I could see were other blacks who were busy doing nothing. I was suddenly the odd one out. Match that attitude to irresponsible multi-parenthood out of wedlock and you have a community intent on having its cake and eating it too...preferably immune from any criticism and unwanted attention from "Old Bill". Operation Trident was set up to deal specifically with "black" crime. What does that say to the REST of London's many ethnic communities scrubbing along as best they can - and successfully too within society and the law?
"Take as you find" isn't a bad maxim for getting along - and it works both ways.

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John Darwin

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:33

dead catchy, a bit 'saucy'. Very good Cathy :-)

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:14

This contributor's posts are of a content/quality deserving of attention and respect. The point about the "underclass" can be seen via countless posts on various online sites,frequently crass & vile in their observations,and limited by their basic lack of knowledge, wit and imagination.

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Gemma Lees

Thu 4th Jul 2013 13:03

We had 10 readers and audience tonight for our 5th birthday ('what does the S stand for?') and a superb guest slot from our very own Katie Haigh.

Good Bits: Great poets and atmosphere, Gemma, everything was amazing, great entertainment, really good night, really good night especially Katie, good poetry, good banter, funny, good night, great as usual, great showcase, simply fab, groooooveeee.

Areas For Improvement: Pity there wasn't more there, could do with bigger audience, more bums on seats (you know who you are), too much delicious cake.

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Cathy

Thu 4th Jul 2013 11:57

Thanks Steve, takes one to know one x

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Greg Freeman

Thu 4th Jul 2013 10:53

Nice work, John. I admire Wendy Cope's skills, and believe she would admire this poem, too. You should have entered it for the Bridport!

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<Deleted User> (11197)

Thu 4th Jul 2013 09:40

Thank you for your beautiful comment on 'My gracious moon'.

Best wishes
Ankita

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 4th Jul 2013 08:49

we are more than happy to out-vote ourselves,if that is allowed(even though we probs would have won-yeh rite!)

and vote for(as afore jokingly mentioned)
a defo photo finish,twixt Harry and Rachel.

and who said you had a sad frogs face Iz?
just let us know-we'll swing for them!
(as old Muvver Reilly used to say.)

yeah,defo Harry'n'Rachel.xx

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Thu 4th Jul 2013 08:36

we felt more than compelled to make another visit to this masterpiece.Without doubt,the best poem we have read,in all the time we have been on WOL.xx

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Wed 3rd Jul 2013 22:39

yowser!yowser!x

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jane wilcock

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:47

anxiety in the household eh? Just seen this and its fab!

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jane wilcock

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:42

Just seen this: its great:)

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:41

I've been reading through ALL of them and trying to decide...
So many good ones! You'll hear from me soon :-D

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:38

WOW is right. This is FABULOUS !!!

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Isobel

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:24

Oh what a brilliant poem Ian. I love it. I love all the religious symbolism and the irony (you're very good at that) and the very many messages.

What an original piece of work. It makes me think, it makes me feel - and I'm left feeling nailed to a cross. Wow!

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:17

mucho excellentio Signor Whiteley!

Ciao for now!xx

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 19:32

thanks for your comments on 'Northern Lights' Laura, glad you liked it - that sort of stuff isn't everyone's cup of tea so wasn't SURE HOW IT WOULD GO DOWN :-)

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Christopher Dawson

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 15:30

Thank you Sadie, appreciated, my first ever comment anywhere on this one!

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Wed 3rd Jul 2013 14:26

This is fabulous Christopher!

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 05:01

I really like this one, Dave.
There is so much honest feeling in it.

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 04:54

Captures the mood of solitude well.

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 04:50

Yep, love it. Simple, yet profound.

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 04:38

Indeed :-D

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Wed 3rd Jul 2013 01:53

a picture paints more than words can say
to bring wonder to ones day

the art to bring all together
to communicate from one to another

for in art a community is bound
for a new discussion to be found

to look apon the hand of the present
with a question to cause dissent

but the gallery of life dose contain
the mischief of those who have no shame

but then the brush becomes the light
to light the way to clear ones sight

for all art has this power
to tumble down deceptions tower

to right a wrong with a painters song
to show the truth so the lie be gone

and we all have this itch to scratch
to see the truth, the power to act

so find a wall big and white
and get your paint brush ready to fight

get some black paint so all can see
and write in big words

‘I’m with the free’

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Isobel

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 21:33

And yet there was a time when the underclass had the opportunity to get an education, to learn to appreciate canonical poetry and to write it.

That raw ability won't just disappear because the opportunities aren't there - instead it will be channelled into words of the street - for want of a better way of describing it - and there will be good and bad examples of it - just as there is of poetry written by the middle classes.

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Chris Co

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 18:26

I recently wrote a poem, in part on this subject.

It takes little more than basic research in order to find that black people are 30 times more likely to face stop and search in the UK than white people. Not 3 times more, 30 times more!!!

This is a national disgrace make no mistake.

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 17:40

Hi. M.C.
Thanks for the encouragement. My poem "My Poetry" makes me seem a little thinner skinned than I am. I wrote a short not great poem telling people where they can kiss me. I may post it later.
You also write music! I'm jealous, not really. You're multi- talented. Is it possible to post your song here?

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John F Keane

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 17:25

Poetry performance is all well and good. Performance is not the issue that this poem is trying to address - only what is performed (or written, for that matter): a quite different thing.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 17:00

John, the words at the top of Write Out Loud's home page say: "Encouraging poetry performance." Are you saying we are quite wrong to do so? Is it all a waste of time, in your view, because only the middle-class know how to write poetry? I would say that you've rather tied yourself in knots, just in order to follow the form of the sonnet, and might have expressed your argument more clearly in free verse. It seems a bit much to bring bestiality into the argument as well ...

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Tue 2nd Jul 2013 16:44

dearie me! you need to let life into your life!

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John F Keane

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 16:07

Yes, vulgarity is vile in poetry and everywhere else. At a deeper level, the lionization of plebeian culture is just praising an unsuccessful, dysfunctional culture. The underclass generally don't raise successful children, tend to live in poverty, generally fail in education and are prone to crime and intolerance. In short, their culture is inferior to middle class culture in every way. And so the question naturally arises: why should their 'literature' be set alongside that of the middle class, when it is clearly the product of an inferior, dysfunctional culture? We need to stop pretending that hip hop 'slams' produce poetry even remotely comparable to canonical literature expressed in classical/traditional forms.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 15:16

Hehe - I think the pictures are already in your mind my friend, so perhaps the DVD is not essential... ;) Thanks as ever for your comments, best wishes, Dave

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 13:39

Ouch! This brings back a hurtful memory. Back in the 70s I took a solo walking holiday down the coast of North Somerset/Devon and one of my holiday accessories was a pair of - you guessed it - Ray-Bans! Sadly, I made the mistake of hooking them in a shirt pocket and after gleefully jogging along a stretch of beach - the multi-pebbled variety - I found I'd lost them. NO chance of locating them on that huge stretch of shore and I had to give up looking and - muttering angrily - trudge on! They were a mere forty quid then but it was a painful lesson when a weekly wage was less! I never bought another pair.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 13:19

Hi Shirley - develop a thicker skin and keep writing. You are not alone in enduring the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune". A song of mine was recently marked 2/10 and described as "very poor quality" by a BBC Radio Country music DJ. The words she used were far from "fair comment" as they made no effort to differentiate between tune, lyric, arrangement, vocal, recording etc. In short, they were unprofessional, but there you go! Critics are not always right. In my case, someone took the trouble to put "Good track" beside the same song elsewhere - which helped even things out.

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John Togher

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 12:52

It is a one-off week early event this month. Nothing we could do about it. Sorry if people miss out, but we'll be back next month, second week in August for the Slam and back to normal with the open mic night in September.

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John Togher

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 12:50

How have you got on with the earworm poetry cd?

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Andy N

Tue 2nd Jul 2013 12:41

good stuff, john. tightly wrote all round even though my favourite bits are the first four lines. good stuff man. get it in your next book!

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Tue 2nd Jul 2013 09:25

Cliff,wired for sound? wired to a pacemaker and zimmer frame more likely Steve,haha!

I think 'Quilled memorandum'a better title mm?
but then what do I know,not being..authorial!

neat piece Mr.H.x

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