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M.C. Newberry

Mon 8th Jul 2013 15:10

Wherever Mr Keane chooses to lead us, he's always stimulating company.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 8th Jul 2013 14:20

Alexandra! You are another one with whom I completely agree. Every poem, every word in it comes from the poet's heart and soul. So! Is it really possible to judge? They say that tastes differ. I also hate judging and when I vote it's not judging but giving preference to the poem I like most of all. Love you all! Regards and best wishes, Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 8th Jul 2013 14:08

How right you are, dear Cynthia!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 12:48

I'll get back to this. It needs time to absorb.

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steve mellor

Mon 8th Jul 2013 12:46

I thank you for the time to comment
'I should cocoa'
an old-fashioned phrase (upper class) which usually means 'absolutely no way'. I can imagine Terry Thomas using it.
what the derivation is though, I couldn't tell you

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 12:42

You are honest about a real problem, and confront the animosity lurking in many breasts about the basic 'humanitarian' issue, population growth. Birth control in countries requiring so much financial assistance would be a productive step forward. When there is nothing else to do, the human animal copulates - and populates. The ancient idea that 'numbers rule' is still the operating force in many undeveloped minds of the 21st century. It is a real thorn of ideology that must certainly be addressed.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 12:20

Why do you need 'classical street-cred'?

This took several readings, but I finally lined up 'grant, suffer and safe-harbour' as the three active verbs of supplication. A full stop after 'bright' would have helped a lot. Was 'light' supposed to be repeated, according to some formula? What am I missing?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 12:06

Fab title. Great concept. It takes a clear mind to develop something so spare into truth so deep.

When you're posting, run your script right up to the top margin. Often the whole of a short poem will translate completely to the Blog List. That can be an advantage sometimes.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 11:56

Shocking! -ly delightful for a hot summer's day.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 8th Jul 2013 11:54

The first part of this is so captivating. Your opening line is an excellent 'hook' to interest the reader. IMO, it then dissolves into 'cuteness'. I appreciate that the 'underworld' idea has been top-sided, and that is excellent, but now it needs some really powerful words to back up the concept. Get out your thesaurus, if poetry really intrigues you, because there is no shortcut for developing your diction skills. Writing poetry is work.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 8th Jul 2013 11:01

A joyous tribute, well executed. Written with love. Delightful. Lucky couple. XX

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Greg Freeman

Mon 8th Jul 2013 10:58

You know your stuff, Dave! This is a great, hard-hitting, really effective poem, whether read or performed. And it rhymes, too! Maybe the most angry material has to.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 8th Jul 2013 10:53

Love it! Lateral thinking and falling off the edge. XX

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Mon 8th Jul 2013 09:03

Thank you Alex :) Best wishes, Dave

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Greg Freeman

Mon 8th Jul 2013 05:43

It was a very lively night. You would have enjoyed it, David.

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Chris Co

Mon 8th Jul 2013 03:38

Below is basic public domain information.

In the United Kingdom, the inquiry about the murder of the black Briton Stephen Lawrence concluded that the investigating police force was institutionally racist. Sir William Macpherson used the term as a description of "the collective failure of an organisation to provide an appropriate and professional service to people because of their colour, culture or ethnic origin", which "can be seen or detected in processes, attitudes, and behaviour, which amount to discrimination through unwitting prejudice, ignorance, thoughtlessness, and racist stereotyping, which disadvantages minority ethnic people".[19] Sir William’s definition is almost identical to Stokely Carmichael’s original definition some forty years earlier.

So M.C - really what you're saying flies in the face of the reality as found in one of the biggest race cases in the history of the United Kingdom.

Oh and the statistics on stop and search are at complete odds with the percentage of crime/those found guilty of crimes from the black community - so really M.C your talking absolute nonsense. The facts do not remotely bare out your opinions.

As for your anecdotal incidents...that's all they are, anecdotal. For that reason your case of one is somewhat irrelevant.

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John Coopey

Sun 7th Jul 2013 22:51

Thanks Harry for your thoughts on "A Toast to Craig and Hannah".
It's a bit different from a set of pans (and a lot cheaper!)

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John Coopey

Sun 7th Jul 2013 22:50

Thanks Harry for your thoughts on "A Toast to Craig and Hannah".
It's a bit different from a set of pans (and a lot cheaper!)

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John Coopey

Sun 7th Jul 2013 22:48

Hello MC,
Glad you liked "Ray-Bans". Your recollection made me realise they've been about quite some time!
And also thankyou for your kind thoughts on "A Toast to Craig and Hannah".

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John Coopey

Sun 7th Jul 2013 22:36

Hello Yvonne,
Glad you liked "Ray-Bans". Your own little ditty was well worth posting, I thought.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 7th Jul 2013 18:15

Hi Emmy - welcome to WOL. Hope you are enjoying yourself on here - good to see you putting poems in the blog section :)

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John F Keane

Sun 7th Jul 2013 08:03

Love or loathe her, she was (and is) impossible to ignore...

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Steve Higgins

Sat 6th Jul 2013 20:14

Some decisions come back to haunt us.
best wishes, Steve

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Jul 2013 19:30

Glad you enjoyed listening! Sorry, though, the voice you hear isn't mine. I know my limitations!! I put my stuff on tape for a guy who runs a recording studio. He and others do the honours on CD recordings.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Jul 2013 19:27

Should all weddings be so lucky!!

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Katy Megan Hughes

Sat 6th Jul 2013 08:08

You're so right again Nigel. I'm starting to think you know me quite well!

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 6th Jul 2013 01:37


Now that`s what I call a poet doing his job

AND AN EXCELLENT JOB TOO!

(not many couples get that kind of a send off!)

Well done John, You done them proud.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 6th Jul 2013 01:28


After my last poohing and peeing effort this is a desperate attempt to get myself some slight classical street-cred

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:56

Jesus Gene? shit hottest,of the hottest!
now comes the follow up-ooer!
only kidding,big guy.xx

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:27

thanks so much for your comments on 'the jesus gene' Francine - glad you liked it :-)

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:26

thanks for the comments on 'the jesus gene' Isobel - glad you liked it. It's an older piece and I'd fallen out of love with it a bit - but it's getting some good feedback, so I'm starting to see its merits a bit more :-)

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:22

yeh Rich,(re latest on our page)they do thin out,but dont worry,the gems shine through-keep chilled.xx

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:21

thanks Richard - really enjoyed it - the Tudor is A.O.K.

Looking forward to the Cadence Cameo spot on the 18th - you will be getting a mention when I read 'that which autumn leaves' :-) will you be open mic-ing?

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:14

ps-howsyer ferrits n pijjinz Higginsy?

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:06

as we say in Rossendale-this is reet nice!xx

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Ste J Bee

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:46

Thanks for reading The Seagulls are watching Steve, them seagulls get everywhere. Just read 'Sounds like Richard Burton' ....like other comments, there's nowt wrong wi' bein' northern.

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Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:34

friends should be the kinda people that,
-will die for you!
not the kind you mention int' last two lines.xx

nor a bunch of plastic american clowns
living on a cardboard studio set!

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:27

back on form girly girl!xx

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John F Keane

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:20

Aren't other variables involved, such as age, class and gender? How many middle class, female pensioners are searched?

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Steve Higgins

Fri 5th Jul 2013 20:40

Time just keeps getting faster as you get older. Good one. Thanks Roy,
best wishes, Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 5th Jul 2013 18:30

Plenty of those winged robbers in St Annes. Nice work.
Best wishes, Steve H

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Ste J Bee

Fri 5th Jul 2013 17:58

Cheers Marksy, I think I've got the 'grass is always greener syndrome'

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 5th Jul 2013 16:39

I have spent a pleasant morning listening to a few of your audios. Wow! You are talented and I am jealous! Your song "You Smiled" has a 60's retro sound, which I really like. Keep writing and making music. I love your voice.

Shirley

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Jul 2013 16:03

Shirley Sunshine

Each smile
slots into
every word.

Your page
fills up
with sunshine

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 5th Jul 2013 14:50

Hi Shirley - thanks for your interest in my song "You Smiled". You can easily find it under "audio sample" near the top of my home profile page. Just click on it and you should hear it play - no problem!

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Greg Freeman

Fri 5th Jul 2013 12:33

This is a different project, Cynthia. Winston's excellent wheeze involved posting poems on lock gates along the Rochdale canal last year

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 5th Jul 2013 12:27

Thank you for your appreciation Graham. I hope you are well.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 5th Jul 2013 10:56

Is this idea in conjunction with Winston Plowes' recent effort, or entirely different?

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Richard

Fri 5th Jul 2013 10:54

Hi I like this poem very much, I would love you to read my poem called Padlock and see if it strikes you in anyway when compared to your poem its on my blog )

Regards

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Simon Marks

Fri 5th Jul 2013 01:36

Many thanks for the kind comments, Steve but I think you do your work a mild disservice. If it's simple words, then they are effective words. Far better than flannel, of which I can be very guilty. Keep up the great work.

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