Like the music

Comment is about The Sparkle (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Hi M.C.Newberry. Thanks for your comment. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem and found it charming.

Cheers,
George

Comment is about We Visited A Rainbow (blog)

Original item by George Stanworth

LOVE THIS!

Comment is about things i'd not want others to know number 2 (blog)

Original item by SPACEGHOST

I couldnt come on 10th June anyway! So I am selfishly pleased that it will have to be changed.
I could come to a meeting on Monday 17th June. Can you tell me who wrote the long "heatons art trail news" message? Please if you write a message, could you put your name at the end of it. See you soon.
Thanks, Maggie

Comment is about Heaton Arts Trail News (blog)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Very interesting piece Isobel - showing just how limited our thinking can be when limited information is available. You've had some great comments too and I concur this is indeed a great poem. best wishes, Dave

Comment is about The Lonely Whale (blog)

Original item by Isobel

That's great news about your son Alex and thanks for the comment on my poem.

Lack of sleep is a killer. I find the best way of getting a reasonable night is to switch off computers and watch T.V. That way you don't have ideas and thoughts buzzing round in your head. I try to restrict WOL and the internet to daytime now, with the occasional lapses which I pay for...

I understand what you are saying about the Tudor. You take care now.

Isobel

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

thanx for reading xxx

Comment is about MEAL TIME (blog)

Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER

I like this, Simon. Anne Boleyn's story has always exerted a fascination, not least the admirable way she met her end, and you communicate her dignity and courage well.

Comment is about Come Me Hither I, to Die (blog)

Original item by Simon Austin

Just to add my appreciation, though I'll never hear the song properly ever again!

Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

I hope they are considering David Floyd's "Protest" pamphlet! Excellent, funny, true!

Comment is about Voting deadline nears for Morning Star's Protest in Poetry award (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Nice one Nick!x

Comment is about MEAL TIME (blog)

Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER

Moody,angry,razor sharp comment runs all through this poem.Great stuff Mate!

Comment is about Sick (blog)

Original item by Richard Alfred

There's a bit of skipping on the audio. (Well, I was enjoying Wendy at the time).

Comment is about Living Doll - With Hair What Grows (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Pursuit'prob,done and dusted-twas we that made slight boo-boo tagging it,by adding 'Whales' after '52 'ertz'

cheers chuck!xx

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Thanks, Tommy - you made me laugh so much this morning!

Thanks, Julian - I love to see the word 'superb' in a review...

Thanks, Francine - that's very kind of you - and I love your profile picture!

Comment is about Knitting A Poem (blog)

Original item by Fifi Fanshawe

That last comment made me feel quite sad inside! But all good - if you get my meaning : )

Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)

Original item by Nigel Astell

Hiya Stephan/Paticia. I haven't posted a list of competition entries yet - I was going to leave it till end of June cos it seemed quite slow to kick off and I know that a few people said they were writing something.

I have definitely logged Pursuit on the radar though. I'm hoping that everyone tags them, otherwise I'm likely to forget what we've had.

x

Comment is about 52 Hertz (blog)

Original item by Isobel

A! 'I!'-y'aint listed us poem..'Pursuit' int'comp?

Comment is about 52 Hertz (blog)

Original item by Isobel

Very good and then some!x

Comment is about From A High Window (blog)

Original item by David Blake

thanks John
'the sparkle' words & vocal by yours truly, music by yours truly and a guy called Nev Barker, who is the bass player on the track - there are some more in the vault - I'm adding them one a month at month ends - the next one 'Northern Lights' is quite psychedelic - some of the earlier ones are on my profile page - glad you liked it :-)
Ian

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

I'll bear this in mind when I'm in St Ives this summer, Steve!

Comment is about TWO SEAGULLS FLYING (blog)

Original item by Ste J Bee

Whoa! Where did that come from, Ian.
Top stuff.
I assume the words are yours. What else? The singing? The melody?
More of this, please?

Comment is about The Sparkle (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Poignant and true, MC.

Comment is about ALONG THE ROAD - with acknowledgements (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

What ho, Harry!
Just to say how much I enjoyed reading about your wartime exploits.
In my book you deserve a medal as big as a dustbin lid - not for scuppering Hitler n the Atlantic but for downing that custard.

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

Often there's virtually nothing between 1st 2nd and 3rd. We may get a reasonable number of entries but far fewer people vote. I wouldn't worry about whether it's worse or better than anything else - it's just great to see how different minds tackle a theme. I'm really happy with what we've got so far :) x

Comment is about Solitude (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

I imagined it was someone who took their own life - and the 'from a high window' became that much more poignant because it had that double meaning. I think the title is perfect for that reason.

Comment is about David Blake (poet profile)

Original item by David Blake

I agree with Darren... :-D

Comment is about Dark Night (blog)

Original item by Gus Jonsson

What a great analogy this is!
(And I LOVE your name!)

Comment is about Knitting A Poem (blog)

Original item by Fifi Fanshawe

This is so atmospheric - I can feel it!
As always, beautifully written.

p.s You should tag it for the comp (52 hertz) just for fun!

Comment is about Sommerhaus (blog)

Original item by Christopher Dawson

A fine idea! I'm wondering if we could just put the June meeting back by a week...

Comment is about Heaton Arts Trail News (blog)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Maybe Just Maybe

Strings of blue
Singing so low.

Now I have
Heard grim news.

That our meeting
Will not be.

On high note
To recharge onwards.

Explore new locations
Maybe Heaton Moor?

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Could we meet somewhere else plan B?

Comment is about June Meeting (blog)

Original item by Stockport WoL

I propose a few of us to get ideas together - - but no Art Gallery meeting!

Comment is about Heaton Arts Trail News (blog)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Thanks for your comment on my 52 Hertz entry Isobel. I actually changed the title as the original didn't much match the theme of the competition. I like to think of it as someone gazing out below at a vast expanse; be it wide plain, moor, or - indeed - ocean ;)

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

June 2013:

We had 16 audience members and performers this month and an excellent guest slot from Pete Slater.

Feedback:

Great people, nice and relaxed, I'm wonderful, relaxed, poetry uncensored, good poems, nice venue, great poems, great performers, great cakes, purr-fect, very good meeting, outstanding, great as usual, brilliant as per, great variety.

Early start is difficult for travel, early start makes travelling from afar difficult, shoot quiz mic man lol, too many stairs, not enough exits, bigger cakes, noise from downstairs, not enough expletives, a bigger audience.

Review is about Write Out Loud - Middleton on 26 May 2013 (event)

I'd agree on that one.

Comment is about ALONG THE ROAD - with acknowledgements (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Yay - thanks for taking part David! I love the way you have let your imagination roam with this one - unless of course you ARE that man from a high window ;

'The noontide skyscape hangs heavily
Like fog crafted from artists’ hands'

sets the scene beautifully for the story that unfolds. I imagine scenes like this one are played out across the world - and that they leave behind the same sad conversations.

I like the title very much also - it leaves something to the imagination.

Comment is about From A High Window (blog)

Original item by David Blake

Miss Miranda aka Fanshawe, I had forgotten just how superb this is. I am glad he re-tweeted it - who knitted the word 're-tweeted'?

Comment is about Knitting A Poem (blog)

Original item by Fifi Fanshawe

Once more into the bleach, dear friends?

Comment is about Wanted: short poems about ads for Red Squirrel anthology (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

There's an account of that Hebden Bridge reading here http://davidcoldwell.co.uk/2013/05/30/the-hawthorn-halls-the-saltwater-edition/

Comment is about North-west poetry anthology reading at Hebden Bridge (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Lawyers? Lawyers? I will knit me-self a string of them and weave (I'm getting into this)a law-suit of poetic(oh this is fun)liables and stitch you up! you bloody cast-off!

Comment is about Knitting A Poem (blog)

Original item by Fifi Fanshawe

Thank you Steve and Jonnie.
I was unaware of any similarity with Corinthians.
As I have not read the Bible for decades I doubt there is any subliminal connection. Inspiration came from recent personal experience.

Comment is about Love is many things (blog)

Original item by Roy Chetham

Thanks, Tommy. When you make a fortune from it, I'll be very jealous and on to my lawyers ;)

Comment is about Knitting A Poem (blog)

Original item by Fifi Fanshawe

Thank you Francine for your kind comment :)

Thanks Isobel. Yes, I did see it as a bit of a rom/com poem. I guess I was trying to enter into the spirit for the competition, but really didn't see it in the same league as the excellent entries so far (no pun intended!)
Still working on something else so we shall see :)

Comment is about Solitude (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Glad you enjoyed "As Sure As God's In Gloucester", MC. I'd never been until a few weeks ago and was very impressed, particularly with its history and architecture. The £3 walking tour of the city was excellent value.
Re the tombs of former monarchs, Edward 11 is buried there, of course, along with Robert, the eldest son of William the Conqueror.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Many thanks for commenting on "As Sure As God's In Gloucester", Dave. I'd never been until a couple of weeks ago. It's certainly worth a day or two's visit for anyone with an interest in history.
Re "Double Gloucester", the locals will tell you it's like "New York, New York" - so good they named it twice.

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Bradley

...and, of course, you're right about the Cathedral stones. When I've locked up Selby Abbey and am alone, I can hear them breathing.

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

Thankyou for your thoughts on '1069 And All That', Harry.
Re the re-alignment of the arches in your local church, "PRAISE THE LORD!".

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

WOW!! Take care, Tony.

Comment is about Eidetic (blog)

Hi Harry, thanks for the comment on symphony of the elements.
Hazel

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

Original item by Harry O`N eill