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John F Keane

Thu 17th Nov 2011 11:19

Nice poem. This might sound a bit pedantic but shouldn't 'necessarily' be 'necessary'?

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John F Keane

Thu 17th Nov 2011 11:12

The title invokes that famous Joy Division song from 'Closer' (appropriate enough for a Manchester poet). Pity I missed this book launch, it sounded good.

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Neil Fawcett

Thu 17th Nov 2011 10:16

Thanks for commenting MC- much appreciated.

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Thu 17th Nov 2011 09:54

Have you any idea what it was about? its a long time since I have written anything, and I cannot remember a poem from the association of it's picture after this amount of time. XXX

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Laura Taylor

Thu 17th Nov 2011 09:23

Eh up - yeh, I am :) Are you?

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Neil Fawcett

Thu 17th Nov 2011 07:38

Cheers Laura. Are you reading at BOMPs book launch?

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Isobel

Thu 17th Nov 2011 07:14

Heh heh - put me down for a copy of that book!

I'm wondering if you know Winston, site adminstrator for new joiners. He is a juggler and entertainer too. It is an unusual career - very rewarding, I would imagine.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 17th Nov 2011 01:17

You're better off with an oldster in a motorised cart, tartan rug and all, than a gorilla swinging a golf club! I think I go
with the wit who described golf as "a good walk spoiled".

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 17th Nov 2011 01:08

Looks like WOL has a wizard of words - with the
ascerbic touch of John Wilmot (Earl of Rochester.
I look forward to more.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 17th Nov 2011 00:47

Ladies - thanks for your feedback. I value the
feminine perspective is such things...we men
can be a bit reticent about emotional things.
J.C. - thanks for the tip about R.M.'s work. I'll check it out. Alas, any thought of having a "bloody big cog" would merely render me guilty of wishful thinking!
Salutations.

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Elaine Booth

Thu 17th Nov 2011 00:13

Oh, Stella, I could hear you as I read this, that lush voice of yours. The imagery here, though quite cold and wintry is nonetheless lush - lots for the mind's eye to conjure. I enjoyed this very much. XX

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Elaine Booth

Wed 16th Nov 2011 23:48

Loved this when you read it, Dave. Good to see it here to enjoy again!

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Wed 16th Nov 2011 22:27

Hilarious and well thought out-wonder if I can get some poems out of my various afflictions; hmmm....

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Wed 16th Nov 2011 22:23

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind comments : )

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Graham Eccles

Wed 16th Nov 2011 21:49

I hitched in both directions that day. I'm saving the shots for my first book cover. :D

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winston plowes

Wed 16th Nov 2011 21:45

1) Nice last line 2) Really? I was in a pub once when someone walked in with an owl on his shoulder! True 3) A great moment, moaybe could be expanded into a longer piece. 4)I stayed in Egremont recently! Wet / cold. 5) Nice snapshot. Enjoyed the journey. Win x

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Isobel

Wed 16th Nov 2011 21:44

Yes - I do think your poetry is getting stronger and stronger. Perhaps that is an indication that you are in better spirits - pardon the pun! x

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winston plowes

Wed 16th Nov 2011 21:34

Great stuff. Its marghrita time. (Why is there no spell check on this pointless thing) Win ;-)

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Isobel

Wed 16th Nov 2011 20:56

The best part of the poem is the last verse. Until then I wasn't really hooked in. That last verse really kicks you in the stomach and leaves you hurting. Putting a brave front on is perhaps something I can more identify with. I love the baldness of it.

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<Deleted User> (9801)

Wed 16th Nov 2011 20:31

laura's comment says it all!Raw.

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Isobel

Wed 16th Nov 2011 19:29

Oh Francine - you would have loved it!

Graham - I'm so sorry I never got to chat to you - hopefully our paths will cross at some other venue! Your photo was brilliant - but it wasn't one of the months, so hard to reference. Next time, do make my year by hitching a lift in the opposite direction ;-) xx

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Neil Fawcett

Wed 16th Nov 2011 18:24

Thanks a lot John.

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Francine

Wed 16th Nov 2011 17:36

Sounds like a fabulous night out - something I know I would have enjoyed!

This is such a wonderful, creative, fun way for poets and photographers to collaborate and fundraise for the Juvenile Diabetes Research Foundation.

Great review, Isobel. : )

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Graham Eccles

Wed 16th Nov 2011 16:47

Brilliant review, thank you. :)

If i'd have known that you were 'Isobel', I'd have been out hunting Grapefruits especially so you could join in. There were grapes, but that might have been too revealing. :)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Nov 2011 16:34

Ooo raw

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Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Nov 2011 16:32

Hey, thanks Cynth for your note on Biblical Imbecility, glad you liked it :) Yeh, kind of what I was getting at,the lunatic interpretations of what is essentially a bulgy-eyed hysterical part of the whole - although have to say some of it's great! Was thrilled with the 4 horsemen!

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Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Nov 2011 16:15

Cheers ears re Biblical Imbecility :) See ya soon chuck x

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Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Nov 2011 16:14

Hello :) Welcome to WOL - liking your work mostly so far - hope to see more of it

Cheers

Laura

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2011 15:54

Check out Richie Muster's blogs - I think you'll like them

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2011 15:45

Even more power out of little lines! Economy of effort is superb. (You must have a bloody big cog in that brain of yours).

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2011 15:43

You manage to get maximum power out of minimal words

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 16th Nov 2011 14:52

Tommy- long-time 'listener'- first-time 'caller' I heard you on BBC radio other day :o) I was wondering why the 'West' were eager to invade Libya but are reluctant to intervene with Syria, I checked the oil reserves of both country:
Libya oil reserves = 46,400,000,000 Barrels
Syrian oil reserves = 2,500,000,000 Barrels
...!

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Neil Fawcett

Wed 16th Nov 2011 13:34

Thanks Winston, but you do know that the old Lord will be swivelling in his grave.

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Isobel

Wed 16th Nov 2011 12:52

Thank you Darren - that means a lot.

If Joy and I look flushed on that picture, that's because we were. Phworrrr - what a great night we had!

When are we going to get another review off you anyway? I miss reading them. The humour and style is totally inimitable.

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:42

Hi Mark, Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:34

Hi Rob, it was Wigan I think! True you are much more handsome in real life. Thx for adding sample , Win x

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:30

Hi Jonny, Welcome to The Site. Winston

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darren thomas

Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:29

Enjoyed reading this - thanks Isobel.

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:26

Hi Richie. I can see you ! lol. Thanks for putting up your pic. Winston

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Andy N

Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:25

excellent, lucy.. my favourite of yours so far.. wasn't sure if you had packed in writing but i guess you've been too busy.. good seeing you the other night too x

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Andy N

Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:23

I'm no better here, chuck - if you see where i live - it's a bomb site almost literally - lol..

enjoyed it too..

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Andy N

Wed 16th Nov 2011 11:17

i know some who would object to this, Stella but i particularly like the use of the short lines..

top stuff, my dear xx

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2011 10:28

Crackin' cheese, Gromit!
I wish I'd written this - I might yet pretend that I have!
And you performed it brilliantly at the Tudor last week.
Just one thing - what's an app?

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Dave Bradley

Wed 16th Nov 2011 01:29

Intriguing and thought-provoking. Also enjoyed your St Paul/ political one.

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 01:14

Thank you for your lovely comments on my poem 'De-friend...'. Yep, I too have fallen victim to the curse of being a facebook parent. For some reason, my daughter is always very unimpressed with my postings :) When I get to the stage of facebook grandparent...I hope to have just as much spirit as the star of my poem.

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 01:09

Thank you for your comments on my poem 'De-friend...'. The lady in question is the grandma of a friend...sadly! I want one just like that :)

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Wed 16th Nov 2011 01:01

Thank you, thank you, thank you....for your generous comments on my poem 'De-friend...'. I don't give my work a lot of thought, I just let it right out - I feel that you saw that.

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Dave Carr

Tue 15th Nov 2011 22:15

Good poem Chris.
I can't disagree with the sentiment.
Dave

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John Coopey

Tue 15th Nov 2011 19:48

Thanks for your thoughts on Golf Clubs, MC. A friend of mine used to do her surveillance pootling around on a mobility scooter, then whipped the tartan blanket off to leg it when needed!

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John Coopey

Tue 15th Nov 2011 19:44

Glad you enjoyed Golf Clubs, Lynn.

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