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Hugh

Mon 12th Oct 2020 17:56

I inhale the countryside for 3 to 4 hours every single day, its been put there for us to enjoy. Enjoyed your poem and the musical accompaniment. A breath of fresh air in stormy times.

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John Coopey

Mon 12th Oct 2020 17:39

Not forgetting The Kinks.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=f95UCJs2rUA

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John Coopey

Mon 12th Oct 2020 17:35

Of course, we are all strangers to those who don’t know us.

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Mon 12th Oct 2020 17:20

You talk to some people, or should I say listen, for five minutes and you've got their entire potted life story.

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Tony Hill

Mon 12th Oct 2020 16:52

Made me laugh on what is a grey, wet day in the northeast. Tony

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Tom

Mon 12th Oct 2020 16:37

Really enjoyed this one Shifa, great stuff. "A string of flicking lights, invites me" I found this line especially pleasing :)

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 12th Oct 2020 15:53

Cheers Sophie for your like of my work ?

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 12th Oct 2020 15:46

Cheers Jordyn for your Like?

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Mon 12th Oct 2020 14:10

You can't beat plastic. Give it all sort of different names...formica, melamine, karndean...it's all just plastic. As indeed was The Beatles' Pam, and Lennon's Ono Band.

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keith jeffries

Mon 12th Oct 2020 14:06

Ray,

Love it but ease off on the medication or lubrication.

Keith

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raypool

Mon 12th Oct 2020 13:33

I had to delay a response on this because of the images it conjured up ! Thanks Graham, John is braced for that i'm sure; it could be the north south divide at work!

Ah ha John. We're on uneven ground here. That first line I made up years ago and it popped up recently with the urge to purge. I should be happy if you took the blame.

Thanks Tony. An exercise in alternative lyrics which would have brought Sir Tom to his knees.

Greg, Kishore and Stephen thanks for your likes !

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 12th Oct 2020 13:33

I now have dildo's, Simon and Garfunkel and the aurora borealis swimming around my head Ray. What have you been taking?
Get me Greta on the phone!

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d.knape

Mon 12th Oct 2020 11:55

it's okay
these will get better
someday.


?

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keith jeffries

Mon 12th Oct 2020 11:34

I enjoyed this poem immensely as it has that down to earth quality which is sorely needed at the present time.

Well done and thank you

Keith

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 12th Oct 2020 11:26

thanks you for the 'likes' and your kind comments - I'm pleased the theme struck a chord ?

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kJ Walker

Mon 12th Oct 2020 09:43

Loved this. I've never read invictus I'm going to look it up and give it a read. Thanks for posting.
Cheers Kevin.

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 12th Oct 2020 06:01

Thank you so much for your delightful comment, Stephen! Your like is appreciated as well.

Vautaw, Stephen G., Liam, the roses y'all have sent my way are deeply cherished.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 12th Oct 2020 03:15

How fortunate that you recognize your blessing Keith. We often take the familiar for granted. I live only a few blocks from a wooded trail, but drive to a gym to walk on a treadmill. The irony isn’t lost on me. Awareness is the first step to change.

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keith jeffries

Mon 12th Oct 2020 03:04

Vautaw,

How true. I am fortunate to live in a rural setting so this therapy is always available and it is a blessing indeed. A poem for thought in a hectic and fearful world.

Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 12th Oct 2020 02:10

Thank you Jordyn. I wonder how many would be healed if doctors prescribed an hour a day in nature!

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Mon 12th Oct 2020 01:29

Beautiful ❤️ I love it!

-J

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d.knape

Sun 11th Oct 2020 22:48

are you kin to Brigette? hahaha

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John Marks

Sun 11th Oct 2020 22:12

My pleasure Cathy. Write on!

I think that the leaf of a tree, the meanest insect on which we trample, are in themselves arguments more conclusive than any which can be adduced that some vast intellect animates Infinity.

Percy Bysshe Shelley, dead at 30

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kimberly

Sun 11th Oct 2020 21:54

Thank you Stephen ??

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John Coopey

Sun 11th Oct 2020 18:18

Stay strong, Greg. This was never going to be a sprint.
No danger of the T&T being wrong, Paul. We’re contacts of my daughter who’s tested +.
It is teejus, MC. When we come out of isolation though, I shall join the 10 o’clock ravers outside the pub because it’s all just a government hoax.?
And thanks for the Likes, Kevin, Tom and Stephens and Julie.

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J.D. Bardo

Sun 11th Oct 2020 18:14

I refer to myself as looney tunes often. Lol. Love it,

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 11th Oct 2020 17:19

Heartbreaking poem that is more common than you may realize. Growing apart often happens slowly over the years without much warning. Thankfully, we have writing as a release. Write on! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 11th Oct 2020 17:12

Thank you Shifa for such a wonderful comment! And, as I've said below, interpretation is down to the reader, it can mean different things to different people, or it could mean absolutely nothing! Thanks again

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 11th Oct 2020 16:48

Thanks John. I love discovering new (to me) music and bands! I agree, the song is pure poetry and the haunting melody sings straight to my soul. ?

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John Marks

Sun 11th Oct 2020 16:20

Posthumous thanks for all the likes from Carl Sandburg.

Cathy, they're called the Low Anthem from Providence Rhode Island and this particular song is 'Charlie Darwin'. I was lucky enough to see them on a tour of the UK. Their lyrics are pure poetry:

Set the sails, I feel the winds a'stirring
Towards the bright horizon set the way
Cast your reckless dreams upon our Mayflower
The haven from the world and her decay

Who could heed the words of Charlie Darwin
Fighting for a system built to fail
Spooning water from the broken vessels
As far as I can see, there is no land

Oh my god
The water's all around us
Oh my god, it's all around

Who could heed the words of Charlie Darwin
Lords of war just profit from decay
And trade the children's promise for the jingle
The way we trade our hard earned time for pay.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Oct 2020 16:12

Sure, I remember you. Age takes its toll but so far amnesia isn't a
problem. ? Thanks for the comment (s).

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 11th Oct 2020 15:58

Insanely thought provoking!

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 11th Oct 2020 15:49

Rich, dark and beautiful. Read the description of your poem on your profile page to assess the divergence between my interpretation and the actual meaning, and I gotta say that you've handled a subject as sensitive as abuse really delicately. Hats off!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 11th Oct 2020 15:09

Beautifully written, Shifa

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 11th Oct 2020 15:05

Paul, as always, thanks for the kind & encouraging comment mate. Always appreciated!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:41

A stunning poem. A tough read but a joyful one.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:30

You saucy lad....

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Lasse Krey

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:28

Thanks for your comments Paul. They always give my poems more value.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:22

A really enjoyable verse. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:15

A beautiful poem on a vitally important subject. What more can one ask?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Oct 2020 14:02

I don't subscribe to the premise that poetry can be "taught". Like
those who can write melody in music, it is something you have
within.The acquisition of the basics of writing plus increasing
maturity, allied to an understanding of what works in communicating what you seek to convey, all serve to provide memorable proof of that in enviable action.
Thanks one and all for taking the trouble to "like" this blog. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Oct 2020 13:49

Or - to recall another notable,ballad from our unfailingly reliable
companions in reality down in Oz - and, if my memory, one
special gentleman named Slim Dusty - "Life get's teejus, don't it?". ?

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Tom

Sun 11th Oct 2020 11:25

Nice one ? Great title too!

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Greg Freeman

Sun 11th Oct 2020 10:45

Great Dylan song from the Basement Tapes. Byrds did a bloody good version, too. That's not to say yours doesn't have its merits, John, as a commentary on our plight. I felt I was coping with lockdown ok for the first few months. But recently there have been deathbed vigils, funerals to attend, promises to keep. I'm getting bad-tempered; it's all getting a bit too much.

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Isobel

Sun 11th Oct 2020 09:08

Oh thank you Julian - I had no idea we were on youtube! LOL listening to it again, I can see there was still room for some improvement but we put it together without the hours and hours of practice I imagine the Andrews Sisters had...

Happy Days... I hope you're back up and running for next year - it's such a lovely place and venue. x

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kJ Walker

Sun 11th Oct 2020 08:09

I left school with zero qualifications not an o level or a GCSE or anything
Sorry that doesn't help in your argument, have you seen the drivel I come up with.

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kJ Walker

Sun 11th Oct 2020 07:55

You've lost your bet I'm afraid John. I wake up every morning and consider how truly amazing I am.

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Flavia Gordon

Sun 11th Oct 2020 02:27

Thank you Tom, Jordyn, Stephen, Binte and Raquel. I am encouraged.xx

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Flavia Gordon

Sun 11th Oct 2020 02:22

Thank you Martin.x

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Sun 11th Oct 2020 02:07

Being headstrong is a strength. I let my heart rule sometimes and it can cause me pain x you have to put the barriers up sometimes though and protect yourself personally I love romance I'm a bit of a sucker for it. X lol

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