Exactly Paul, that’s what I said in the last line, but your way also gets the point across! ? ?
Comment is about After the Pandemic (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Thank you Paul for your usual generous comments. Fortunately the Covid has no as yet mutated to inflict its venom on plants!
What devastation it would cause if this were to happened.
Comment is about Silenced (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpreet Kaur
I agree the moon has magnetic powers to beguile.
Comment is about What light from yonder window shone? (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpreet Kaur
Appreciate your generous comments and the like.
Comment is about Imagination running wild (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Thank you for your continued support Anmolpreet Kaur.
Comment is about Spiralling downhill (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpret Kaur
I always read your comments eagerly and appreciate the like.
Comment is about Tide waits for no one (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpreet Kaur
Thank you for your astitute comment and the like.
Comment is about Happiness (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpreet Kaur
Thank you for your commentary on the subject of pilgrimage. I entirely agree with you that there is a greater degree of fulfilment in going on a pilgrimage under your own stem.
Comment is about Pilgrim's progress (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Anmolpreet Kaur
Thank you for your generous comment and the like.
Comment is about Floral dance (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Ha...good point! More 4-line stimulation from this source.
And as with that "Garden of Eden" we grapple,
What came first - the seed or the apple?
Comment is about JUST APPEARED (blog)
Original item by Joe Marcello
Anmolpreet Kaur thank you for visiting and leaving constructive comments. The like is appreciated too.
Comment is about Fall from grace (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
The moral in these evocative lines is plain.
Adapt...adjust
Ere' flesh becomes dust!
I endorse CP's closing line!
Comment is about The Layers of Age (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
I enjoyed the observational stance - perfectly suited to its material.
Comment is about Bench Looking Out To Sea On The Kent Coast (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
I like the positivity in these lines even when the "solo traveller" in me
is ready to resort to the advantages of self-determination.
Comment is about Cooperation (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 20th Sep 2020 17:42
Calm sea at the Kent coast...perfect illegal immigrant conditions.
Comment is about Bench Looking Out To Sea On The Kent Coast (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
What beautiful imagery Dean. This poem took me on the adventure with you and the seagull, one with nature. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry and checking out your radio show. Thanks for sharing! ?
Comment is about Bench Looking Out To Sea On The Kent Coast (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
Thank you Flavia. Lucky are the ones who find a love that sets our spirit free, much like writing poetry! ?
Comment is about Love Looks Good on You (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
The thin line between the two seasons well described and what a good comparison.
Ak
Comment is about Fall from grace (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Abdul your work always succeed to make our minds blossom as well.
Ak
Comment is about Floral dance (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
A great reminder of the importance of journey to pilgrimage. Nowadays people use horses or cars to speed up their progress but the real pleasure is always preserved for those who work to reach with their own determination.
Ak
Comment is about Pilgrim's progress (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Great depiction of word " lonely" and its true meaning.
Ak
Comment is about Happiness (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
moon's bidding what a choice of words and yes secrets of sea are yet to discover.
Ak
Comment is about Tide waits for no one (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Two things that possess the power to create and destroy " Hope and Memory" .
A combination if put right could ease your journey but also can destroy it.
Ak
Comment is about Spiralling downhill (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Truely an imagination well depicted and beautifully crafted.
Ak
Comment is about Imagination running wild (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
the beauty of full moon is enchanting and draws you towards its calm and soothing pleasure.
Ak
Comment is about What light from yonder window shone? (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Thank you all for your messages of support, kind comments and likes. I am very nervous about putting my poems out into the public domain but it is for a good cause. Vautaw I have no plans for an ebook but I think I can share the proof of the book with you, I have tried to send it in an email, please let me know if you receive it. jx
Comment is about Thank You WOL (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
"Heart on lock down, soul exiled"...I particularly love this line.
Comment is about Love Looks Good on You (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Does this share a relevance with ‘who is the bully’? It feels like a conversation.
Comment is about I've Been Wrung (blog)
Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis
Thanks for liking Paul.xx
Comment is about Duality at Play (inner monologue of a childhood sexual abuse survivor (blog)
Original item by Flavia Gordon
Tom, Neressa, Vautaw, Stephen and Julie I am happy you read and liked. Very much appreciated. xx
Comment is about Palm to Palm, Skin to Skin (blog)
Original item by Flavia Gordon
Really appreciate your likes Vautaw and happy that you continue to read my pieces.
Comment is about Fake it 'Til You Make It Pep Talk (blog)
Original item by Flavia Gordon
Thanks for reading and liking Jordyn. I really enjoy reading your poems. xx
Comment is about Bare Minimum (blog)
Original item by Flavia Gordon
Paul, Vautaw, Kimberly, Stephen and Poem Hub thank you so much for reading and liking poem. xx
Comment is about MY SAVIOUR, MY SAVANT (An ode to my paid weekly "friend") (blog)
Original item by Flavia Gordon
Thank you, Shifa. I consider that high praise, especially since it comes from you.
Comment is about A Wobbly Leg (blog)
Original item by D.W. Hamilton
Thank you Keith, Cathy, Shifa and the two Stephens. Yes, Keith, tumbling down hill is just exactly what I tried to achieve in this poem - a tumbling out of thoughts and feelings and sense impressions. Often poems treat of a single discrete moment of vision. I wanted to show such connected moments all mixed up together. The ongoing tragedy of the genocide against the pre-Islamic communities still clinging on in the middle east is ignored by western media. It is these communities - the Yezedis, the Assyrian Christians, the Zoroastrians, the Copts, the Maronites - who we should be welcoming to our countries.
Comment is about Kicking leaves through dappled sunlight (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Sun 20th Sep 2020 00:25
"LOO ROLL ON ICE"
I thought that was a Chinese dish.
hahaha
(now I get it.)
?
Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
I am saddened by the death of such a magnificient poet.
Comment is about Anne Stevenson, poet and biographer of Sylvia Plath, dies aged 87 (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
What an awesome thing to do Julie. Writing poetry to support good causes is one of my favorite things to do. It is so spiritually rewarding. Let me know if you create an ebook. I would love to read your poems and support your project. I agree, WOL is a wonderful community. It's like a virtual family from all over the world cheering each other on! ❤️
Comment is about Thank You WOL (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Brilliant stuff John.
Comment is about Kicking leaves through dappled sunlight (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
<Deleted User> (14241)
Sat 19th Sep 2020 18:32
Beautiful poem. And thank you for your kind words about mine.
Keep writing,
Collin
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Comment is about The Layers of Age (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Love the rhythm to this piece. And very true it is too!
Comment is about SUPERFICIAL (blog)
Original item by Sarah Louise mcnee
Hi, just like to thank you for liking my poems & welcoming me to the wonderful world of WOL! Encouragement is only given by those with a selfless heart, so thanks x
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
Original item by Vautaw
Kevin T.S. Tan
Sat 19th Sep 2020 17:28
A lovely poem on a tough subject. Thank you.
Comment is about Agoraphobia (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
Great idea, Julie. Best of luck with it. Always enjoy your poems.
Comment is about Thank You WOL (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
It's a Brit concept. The loo roll (toilet paper) on ice is for the inevitable outcome of eating lashings of chillies...
"with lashings of chillies
and loo roll on ice"...
what does this mean?
Is it a Brit expression
or something you took
from a highway billboard
or a recipe book?
?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
John,
This is splendid indeed. I keep reading and re reading it. It says far more than the words you use.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Love (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
victoriavautaw@gmail.com
Mon 21st Sep 2020 01:52
Thank you Julie. Me too! ?❤️
Comment is about After the Pandemic (blog)
Original item by Vautaw