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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 19:26

Brilliant tribute Isobel. Really enjoyed reading this.

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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 19:10

Wow, very good. The short lines compliment the language perfectly. Shows just how quick thoughts can change, leap around and wander.

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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 19:01

I like this a lot. Very intense-feeling, almost as if the words themselves are skating on ice and are careful not to slip.

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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 18:37

Really good Ann. Great rhythm to it, suits the words perfectly. Really evocative imagery. 'City', 'peace-camp' and 'rainbow' metaphors all add to the poem's irresistible charm.

Comment is about shrimping net city (blog)

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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 18:31

I very much like this. Especially the part about the changing of the seasons and the fact the fairy will never know them. Good work!

Comment is about january fairy (blog)

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David Blake

Wed 6th Feb 2013 18:24

Thanks for your kind words on my recent poems Ann. Much appreciated - David.

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Ray Miller

Wed 6th Feb 2013 16:38

Thanks for the comments.
Anthony - I sound a lot worse than I read, and that's saying summat.
Nick - I'd normally agree with you on avoiding repetition but sometimes it works - or seems to.

Comment is about My Favourite Glass (blog)

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 6th Feb 2013 16:25

Did anyone know that stamp collecting can result in premature baldness? (Philately will get you no hair.) :)

Comment is about Unmasked, again: magazine reveals new case of plagiarism by Christian Ward (article)

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 6th Feb 2013 16:21

Thanks Yvonne
tried to go to your profile page, but can't find you - so placed my thanks here :-)
Ian

Comment is about The Collector (Roget's Soliloquy) (blog)

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Isobel

Wed 6th Feb 2013 15:20

Now are you echoing or are you plagiarising Mr Coe ? :))

Comment is about Unmasked, again: magazine reveals new case of plagiarism by Christian Ward (article)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:50

Oh TC flows par excellence. Bravo! ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about The paint and the past (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:48

Beneath an other-place canopy there lays a whole world to which we have now been introduced. Many thanks, Nick.

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Chris Co

Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:44

I just wanted to echo your words.

j/k

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Chris Co

Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:44

Seems like he's plagiarising plagiarism. Rather sad really that someone has so little faith in their own abilities. It's difficult to imagine how his thought processes were working if he imagined he would never be found out after pulling the same stunt so many times.

Comment is about Unmasked, again: magazine reveals new case of plagiarism by Christian Ward (article)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:41

Oh you naughty boy, far too good for us mere mortals - get yourself published. ta muchly, Nick.

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:38

Your, 'rape machine stalks the poorest casualties' is first rate. Brilliant!
Is using 'gevernments' in the same line as 'care' an oxymoron?
'Guns and ammo flow like like salt upon a wound' - Great!
Like your inspired description 'new disease'.
You nailed it. ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about No Gainful Loss In War Except the Feeding of the Purse (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:29

Dear Mr Newbelly, 'I've seen pictures' why do I have to chuckle when you bless us with your wit? Much appreciated, ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about POLICE POETRY BOOK (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 13:24

You mucky mind - me too - loved it - ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about Day 1 - Mirrored Glass (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:57

Strength of word use. powerful control of the English language - although I had to look up 'purulent' it was certainly a pleasure to read and digest - wish I was so talented - ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about Anthony and Katypatra (blog)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:42

a pertinent observation on the evil morass into which our elected representatives are sliding after losing sight of the end game. Excellent stuff. much enjoyed.

Comment is about The Day We Elected... (blog)

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:42

I thought you said this was going to be lightweight Katy! "Strumpet's fool" or fool's strumpet? (Or is strumpet a strawberry flavoured crumpet?) Like the pic on FB too - very Alys Fowler!

Regards,
A.E.

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:39

Very evocative Enjoyed this. Ah, those were the days.This flows so well from 1 image to the next and draws you in to the whole experience.

Comment is about My Favourite Glass (blog)

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:37

You are in fine fettle of late Mr Coopey. I'm enjoying your covers and meanderings very much. Hope your pages aren't too stuck together!

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about SONNET 18 (blog)

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:35

It seems you did keep this stored up safe Ray - at least in the memory. Well expressed in a form that suits the content well. When are you going to give us some audio!!!

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about My Favourite Glass (blog)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:34

I shed a few tears of laughter reading this. I'm sure Shakespeare wooden mind you borowing his style.

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:28

Seems like he's plagiarising plagiarism. Rather sad really that someone has so little faith in their own abilities. It's difficult to imagine how his thought processes were working if he imagined he would never be found out after pulling the same stunt so many times.

Comment is about Unmasked, again: magazine reveals new case of plagiarism by Christian Ward (article)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:24

Great perspective. Excellent title. Enjoyed. I almost felt broody again.

Comment is about Mother ! Can you see me ? (blog)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:22

Great description love the anthropomorphic touche - claws, teeth. XX

Comment is about MIRAGE (blog)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:14

Nicely done. Love the 'stalwart friends' says so much in a couple of words.
I see wher JC's coming from inre your last 2 lines . I took me few re-reds to understand it as "I'm surprised widows ever learn"
I love this poem.

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:13

per ardua ad ASDA - couldn't spell astra, sorry, your description is of the finest, ta muchly, Nick.

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:10

The poem is born - and such a fine specimen it is - interesting point of view - ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about Mother ! Can you see me ? (blog)

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:06

Dave I cannot access full version of the poem The cat, The Damselfly and the Dee When I click on the link 'read more ...' the screen take me to the news page with a red comment saying 'you do not have permission...'

Comment is about Cat Competition Extended Deadline (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 12:00

Short pause (paws), Magic? ta muchly, nick

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:49

Phantoms that spill and twirl away - cast far by the pull of time - who wrote that? Well, actually, I did. ta muchly, Nick

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:43

Wot I wont to no is what's in yon 'Dirty Books' please - more! more! they cried hopefully, ta muchly, Nick.

Comment is about SONNET 18 (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:38

Good'ay Ray, nice little something that! I wonder about the end line, maybe: ('tipped' you back)? Fussy me, prefer non repetion - enoyed it - ta muchly, Nick

Comment is about My Favourite Glass (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:29

What does? Wot pane are we referring to? Decypher my comment and you win - the prize is that I'll read all your lovely work - ta muchly, Nick

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:26

Are you trying to 'fright us'? with your multiple appendicit(us)- rhymes better - the giggle muscle has had an outing - ta muchly , Nick

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Ray Miller

Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:25

Thanks, Dave and Steve. My Favourite Glass of Bittersweet Pop. I should give it to the Buzzcocks.

Comment is about My Favourite Glass (blog)

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Ray Miller

Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:22

Thanks, Steve. I don't have holidays, only parole.

Comment is about Wards (blog)

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:22

Brilliant stuff! Love your ideas and mid-line rhymes, when they come, the cadence is grand - this poem is the most enjoyable work I've read in quite some time, and I read a lot - ta muchly, Nick

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Wed 6th Feb 2013 11:04

Nicely done, don't agree with JC, I think the ending couplet Does make the poem what it is! I thank you, ta muchly, Nick
ps on the same theme, Gone, is a little longer.

Comment is about The Adaptation. (blog)

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John Marks

Wed 6th Feb 2013 10:59

Hi Chris. I really like your poems. I enjoy the narrative and admire the use of rhyme [never trite]. Most of all I like the sincerity. John.

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John Coopey

Wed 6th Feb 2013 10:56

Very poignant image, Travis. Made more powerful by its brevity.
Maybe I'm not reading it right but the last two lines don't seem to quite hang together (it's probably me).

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tony sheridan

Wed 6th Feb 2013 10:10

Great poem. The last verse is spot on. Take care, Tony.

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David Subacchi

Tue 5th Feb 2013 22:39

You can catch more of my work including videos by searching on SUBACCHI+POEM.

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Tue 5th Feb 2013 20:50

Wonderful night, congratulations to Irina and Michael for spawning such a wonderful brainchild. I felt like I'd been transported back - back to Haight Ashbury in the sixties, to the London performance poetry scene in the eighties, to a kind of heaven where words sing and the bizarre, beautiful and brazen are all bedfellows. Thank you.

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 5th Feb 2013 19:25

https://soundcloud.com/professor-doctor/deep-down-inside-by-smothers

Hello Nigel. Thank you for commenting on my poem "Deep Down Inside". Your comment is much better than my poem. I have provided a link to the sound cloud recording. I can't believe someone actually recorded this to audio. LOL!

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Chris Co

Tue 5th Feb 2013 18:50

Note; not the poem - the audio is the poem.

Give me a liberal Christian every day of the week over a Tory. Money as religion disturbs me more than most things in the New Testament..

There's certainly much more dogma in pursuit of it.

5 Loaves 2 fish.
share your sweets.
How many Tory's would?

Comment is about All things considered (blog)

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Chris Co

Tue 5th Feb 2013 15:16

Thx Frederick - feedback appreciated.

Thank you to all who read.

Best Chris

Comment is about Life (blog)

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