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Laura Taylor

Sun 4th Dec 2011 10:27

Nice one Andy!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 4th Dec 2011 08:36

Beautiful poem! Love it.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 4th Dec 2011 00:59

Hey - does J.C. equate with "just cynical"?
Have you no romance in your soul? Read it or sing it - the message is the same.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:46

Thanks for raising this, Win. "Keir tells me that because the gig was over-subscribed, there will be a second night taking place early in 2012 – he will reveal details as soon as he can." Owing to an editing error, this was omitted from Laura's published piece.

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:43

You dirty Old Bugger! I hope it worked. It's cheaper than flowers anyway.
Am I mistaken or is it a song in the making rather than a stand alone poem (albeit with a very specific purpose)?
Anyroadup, I enjoyed it.

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:34

Reminds me of Steinbeck's "aside" chapter in Cannery Row?? (I think) about the Blues and Greens?? (I think). Well, I did read it 30 years ago.

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:20

Hello Laura.
Thanks for commenting on "Our Tom". He still lives in the village with his mum and dad, and it was only ever a joke that he seemed to spend as much time at our house as his own. I think he had a soft spot for my daughter which he wanted making hard!

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:17

Thanks for your comments on "Our Tom", Isobel.
I read it to him and gave it to him framed for his 21st birthday. Apparently it's on his bedroom desk! There really wasn't any sadness at his leaving.
He's always been a smashing lad, a bit unlucky with the girls but he could make a fortune as a cruise ship gigolo - he has an attraction for women of a "certain age".

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winston plowes

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 22:26

Hi Matt, Somethong very simple and genuine in this appeals. thx for posting, Win

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 22:23


And if it is all a mad, mad world pass me the teapot luv...I will willingly join the party.

A strong one this Izz ..x

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 19:11



Ha! yes love the title too! :o)

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 18:36

Well done with the review, Laura sounds like a magic night. There has been some talk of a BOMP launch pt 2 for all those who couldn't read on the night, anyone know anything about that? Win

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Rachel Bond

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 18:04

hlo laura dearest, its wigan this thursday i see and not on my birthday at all, i might come then. see you there hopefully x

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Rachel Bond

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 17:58

this brilliant :) 'your leg is in the way' something so intimate but not.

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steve mellor

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 17:34

Fifi, your comments on White Rose were absolutely spot on for me. I tried to get the feeling of peace into it.
Thanks for taking the time - appreciated

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Fifi Fanshawe

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 17:20

Larkin, M.C.? Thank you - I'm blushing... :)

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Fifi Fanshawe

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 17:19

Hi Lynn - thank you for your encouraging words! :)

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 16:03

Hi John.
how come we never see a Catfrogbird
on any nature programmes?

delightfully different!

cheers.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 15:54

Scuttled away Clarkson is beneath contempt.
Two of my teacher daughters phoned me from theplateau to tell me they were following family tradition.
The strike is because of the curtailment of financial provision in retirement at a time when private pension provision is in a parlous, expensive, and untrustworthy state

This can only mean that almost all future pension provision will be in the hands of the goverment. (apart from a rich few)

This at a time when the `euro` countries at the core of the E.U. are about to form a tighter, fiscal, unity under Germany and France. I can`t see any way that Cameron (from the outside) can avoid being economically dictated to by this core (very much including pensions)

It`s very timely that the public sector workers should put a warning shot acros thebows of the government.Economically, `We aint seen nutin` yet.

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Rachel Bond

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 15:34

10 great things i am.
9 lives of a cat i have
8 ways i keep it straight
7 dances i have made,
6 wishes i have granted
5 kisses still remembered
4 forms of independant thought
3 major hearts ive broken
2 tired to tell
1 man is sought
0 chance in hell

x

good poem, like a shopping list.

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Rachel Bond

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 15:24

nice one laura, give us some of that sherbert :)

congratulations x

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Rachel Bond

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 15:18

thanks stella, ste

i like the idea of a johnny cash style song. i could ask bill brierley to do it at guitarnverse maybe, hes a dead ringer for cash on the vocals. :)

its a good job we get second chances or there really would be no one here x

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Laura Taylor

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 11:56

Thanks folks

Aw Cathy, it was an absolute pleasure - I'm not surprised you got so emotional! Thanks again for all your hard work - we really all do appreciate it :)

Looking forward to the photies Joy!

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steve mellor

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 08:54

Isobel - the thought of anyone crossing you is ?? unthinkable ?? Loved the poem

I think
I reflect
therefore I am

my favourite little part

keep tilting. see you next week all being well

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Joy France

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 05:32

Yes it was a cracking evening. Some photos going in the galleries over this week. (My camera broke and I had to resort to my backup point & shoot - anyone know of a decent camera for sale cheap?)

So although I got pictures of everyone, the quality doesn't do the event justice. If yours doesn't appear I can email you a copy if you message me.

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 01:27


Read this yesterday and thought I had replied..

Love that second verse especially..and the repetition works well aww I just love this one.. :o)

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 01:24


Oh now Rach..I really liked the set up of this and the mind set behind the poem..the pic is great too..

good work indeed :o)

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Sat 3rd Dec 2011 01:21


ha!...made me smile :o)

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Lynn Dye

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 00:46

Thank you Francine for your helpful comments, much appreciated. I have changed the line you mention. Cheers. :)

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John Embley

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 23:28

I love this, Harry! I taught at St George's (Catholic, funnily enough) in Toxteth (Mill Street) as a probationer in the late sixties, and although ecumenism was the buzz-word those days, Protestant/Catholic rivalry was rife even then -- I never found out how it all ended, either.... thanks for the nostalgia!

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Fri 2nd Dec 2011 22:34

Fantastic fantastication!!

Fond Feelings
from fellow fantasists.xx

(you can tell we watched the 'good 'ol days!)

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 21:22


aS A FAIRLY NEW BLOGGER, WINSTON,THANKS FOR YOUR WELCOME TO THE SITE.

MY VERY BEST WISHES FOR ALL YOU DO IN THE FUTURE (HERE AND ELSEWHERE)

HARRY

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Fri 2nd Dec 2011 20:54

Hi Jeff, thanks for the welcome. Guitar and Verse was a great night, some really entertaining acts, thanks for organising.

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steve mellor

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 19:26

Hi Ann
Lovely, as ever, to get your thoughts. It's not difficult to understand the basis for the poem, but a small explanation
Ann died on the 1st August (5 years ago) which is Yorkshire Day (Yorkshire as you may know, from your school history lessons, is the white rose county

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Ray Miller

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 18:51

Well, when I say silver tin I mean a money box or, in broader terms, the nation's wealth. When I say saxophones I mean bad men with more money than sensitivity. It's a doddle, this poetry lark.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 18:39

Dear Winston- I think many of the posters here ARE aware of Clarksons 'reasons' for his regular outbursts- however there is a MORE important issue to address, that of his ability to offend women, workers and anything left. The consequences of his tirades poisons the attitudes of many gullible people.

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Fri 2nd Dec 2011 18:04


Wonderful review Laura...x

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Rachel Bond

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:52

i liked the bit about the blackout.

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kath hewitt

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:46

Big fat well done to all of you!!! :-)

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Cathy Bryant

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:42

Thanks for that lovely review Laura! Speaking as one of the editors, I'm very proud to have been part of the team. I read each poem (all anonymously - we're about poetry, not reputations) three times, and it was such a pleasure. Keir spends *months* editing, doing layout and sorting out the printing etc, and then he and I proofread it. The book is gorgeous and gives me tingles down my spine, but launch night is what makes the work worth it. Meeting the people behind the poems is very special. I got so emotional in the end that I had a good cry - Stevie Turner says that my 'glitter-stained tears are a future poem in themselves'! So happy. Thanks so much for coming and being part of it too. I'll never forget it.

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:28

I'm still very interested in the tin reference. And I've not changed my name - now it's my real name!

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Steve Regan

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:27

Well reported, Laura. I enjoyed the whole evening... a mix of oratorical and written styles.

Amazingly, no poet hogged the mic; no-one did long, rambling introductions.

My favourite readers of the night - a draw between Cynthia Buell Thomas's sensuous 'Lines on Picasso's The Aperitif' and Harry Matthews' 'According to John'.

I liked the very cheery MC-ing by Dominic Berry.

It was with relief that Rachel McGladdery and I discovered that the venue was licensed!Sometimes veggie venues aren't licensed but this was - and we sure as hell made the most of its red wine supplies.

Top night! And before arriving we had din-dins in Manchester's best restaurant, Cicchetti's, King St West, where a fellow diner was ROBERTO MANCINI.

As Rachel and I tottered out of the restuarant, heading for the launch venue, we also spotted that cockney actress MICHELLE COLLINS, who now plays the landlady of the Rovers Return. Then to complete the celebrity count we bantered with DARREN THOMAS - the engimatic presence from the riotous Tudor Wigan poetry night.

Darren long ago had the good sense to bin off his native Bolton for the good life in Wigan (when he is not travelling the world, that is).

Lastly, I want to say I appreciate the hard work and efficiency of KEIR THOMAS and his editorial team in producing this book. Go buy folks!

I'm looking forward to reading all the poems in the book - when I'm sober, which will probably be sometime early in January. I will then announce my overall favourite. And no it won't be my own 'The Finished Sentence of Love' ... page 156 if anyone's interested!

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:26

Lovely poem Stella. x

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:23

I love the

"thousand little mind-witches"

Good one Dave!

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:18

Love this Fifi! xx

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:15

Funny! Love the analogy.

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:08

If in doubt...
The only way to get rid of temptation is to yield to it.
~ Oscar Wilde

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 16:55

Ann Oxley! J'aime ta nouvelle photo de profil : )

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Laura Taylor

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 16:45

Hey, cheers ladies - I had a ball, and really enjoyed writing the piece. Was a great night :)

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 16:40

Hi Dave,
Thank you so much for your comments! I was just telling a friend what I hoped would come through with 'Broken Mirrors'... I wrote it with two completely different ideas in mind - and you picked up on that : )

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