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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 20:12

Hi - no way has it been down hill since, but (for me) Coromandel was so outstanding that it's a hard act to follow.
What are Queen remembered for?
Bohhemian Rhapsody.
Kate Bush - Wuthering Heights.
Doesn't mean that they haven't both done some awesome stuff since... but you see what I mean? Besides, you might send off Coromandel & get zilch, but for ME it's world-class. That's the thing with poetry (and many other artforms) that it's such a personal thing. When I've sent stuff off it's nearly always the poem that I added in as an afterthought that gets published, never my "good stuff". All you can do is your best. xx B

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:52

Good Evening Antonionioni

Sad but positive, sad but needed, the commonality is the word sad.

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:48

Good Day Antonionioni,

After being n this earth for near three score and ten I find hope and a faith in humanity the only lights at the end of a very long tunnel.

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:44

Thank You Ann,
At my age I find it hard to hate anyone. However: I have a need to tell my story in verse and being economical with words was never my style

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:40

Thanks Dave and Stefan,
for more than twenty years I was driving 100K miles a year and caused more than a few 'road kills' mostly Rabbits ' hence the verse'

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:35

Thank you Philipos and Stephan,
You had to know the history of my Godfather to have some appreciation of the man and this verse is no justice to what he was.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:33

Poignant! Well written too.

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:32

Thank you Janet, Banksey and Dave
I appreciate your comments and the encouragement.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:32

Thanks for spotting the typo Anotionionio! x

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:31

Took one of your suggestions! Ta! ;-)

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Ray Miller

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:23

Very charming poem, Ann. If you don't mind a few suggestions:
3rd line - and set them swaying.
illuminate rather than illuminating.
skims like a stone.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:38

Belt up, Janet!! Some touching observations here.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:36

Interesting one! It's all sadly necessary though as well as inevitable. We have got out of hand and the preposterousness of unchecked population growth has reached its zenith.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:32

Very interesting way of putting it!

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:29

Ian, this is sadly true despite the peace it (the bomb) has bought between the major nations for decades.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:24

They can fox off, can't they? (Is there a mis-spelling in the title Ann?

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 17:40

I don't think this will be here for long!* Just been reading an article about how foxes are getting bigger therefore more dangerous. I wonder why? xx * self censorship will probably kick in tomorrow.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 17:09

Thanks for commenting so thoughtfully on 'Respect', Izz. Yes it's hard to concentrate for a long time at an open mic evening, which is why the Bards formula works imo. Two breaks (not one) and the compere (Steve) saying something constructive after each person. This is usually a mix of the humorous and thoughtful and kind of helps the poem to settle in the mind.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 16:33

PS - for what it's worth - in Coromandel you wrote one of my favourite poems of all time - up there with Robert Frost, Hugo Williams, John Burnside, Mervyn Peake, etc - pretty good company, I think you'd have to agree ?

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Alain English

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 16:10

I disagree Banksy. Incompetent and greedy though our political and economic masters are, they operate with a definite agenda which Pilger tries to get to the root of and more often than not, he succeeds in exposing the lies of the powerful and the effect they have on innocent people caught in the crossfire. Though the powers-that-be have much intelligence and cunning, their agendas (as Pilger and others depict them) are very complex and take several years to implement.

John Pilger is not a wanker. He is a brave and principled man who stands up for the powerless against the powerful and for this he deserves to be commended.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 16:06

HaHa - unfortunately, that's the way it goes... you post one of your best & it gets no attention ! Me & Isobel have discussed this phenomenon at length. For my part, I didn't see the prog - and, charming as the poem is, I think it would have far more meaning (for me anyway) if I had.
And I like polish bears but I feel no great affinity for them like you do (it's cats I love - every last man-jack of em).
Some of what I consider to be my very best stuff has not attracted even one single comment. Hmph ! (stamps feet)xx.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:58

Hi Ian. I love the first verse. I almost don't think you need the rest, but that's just me ('spect you hate me now!) ;-)

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:48

On the naughty step. = good theme/title for a poem?

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:38

Very bleak - good to see you here again. Hope you're well. xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:34

Hi Greg - so glad you "are" poem of the month! Always like your stuff! Happy New Year! xx

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David Franks

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:25

I like your lyrics, Lisa - including the chorus, where I think any tune should repeat for the first and third, and second and fourth lines (as in "Once in Royal David's City", e.g.).

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Greg Freeman

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:21

Cheers, Win, and a very happy new year to you too! Greg

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 11:09

thanks Ann for comments on 'revelations/blackpool.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 10:58

Hmmm - I'm not a part of this little club, (as I prefer written poetry) - so I can't comment directly, but I can indeed imagine. I reckon it's quite similar with the blogs in that some quite obviously post, but never read. Maybe they are to be pitied, as they dont know what they are missing as (IMHO) there's some truly talented postings on WOL. We're all different though & one mans poison, etc. Just recently I was reminiscing about school (hated it BTW) and one rather bookish guy (nice lad though) was always going on about Bruckner. I thought that as he was so passionate about it, that I must be missing something, so I listened to some (8 &9th) on YouTube by the Berlin Phil. & conducted by my very favourite - Claudio Abbado... and what a fucking racket ! And yet this guy loved it & it brought it home to me just how different we all are in our tastes. We're all human, but I think that that is often where the similarity ends.
[I've got a big hat anyway just in case :) ]

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:26

no tea for me Cynthia, In fact I had the first cup of tea in my entire life last week (Lemon and ginger if that IS tea at all) created a well rounded picture this one. liked the drumming kettle and pretty chinking which provided the perfect accompanyment, win x

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:17

nice take on a classic John. Win

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:15

sounds like christmas Kath ? Win

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Isobel

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:01

From my experience the stifled is far, far worse than the unrestrained. With unrestrained you at least have a chance of one day being significant and starting to swim. It can happen - you just have to believe it.

Your poetry is so raw - it stirs a lot up for me. x

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Isobel

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 08:56

Ooooo - can I join you? What a lovely description Cynthia - I can imagine you opening that cupboard and all those lovely smells wafting out. For some reason this brought to mind Bilbo Baggins and his little hobbit hole - cosy and orderly and just how life should be but isn't.
Most of your cupboard would be wasted on me mind - none of your fancy earl grey for me - PG Tips or Cafe Noir and some warm buttered toast please. x

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Isobel

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 08:49

LOL - this poem could be levelled at a few in the Tudor where the atmosphere is slightly less reverent than other venues. There are some poets older poets who even get up and leave once they've done their bit.
I personally find it hard to concentrate fully on listening to poetry for a whole evening, especially if the venue is well attended. That's why I like it when they restrict poets to one or two short ones and mix it up with music. The music needs to be good though and to not dominate the poetry.
Just to follow on from this poem Dave, it would be interesting to know how many people of the ones sat there attentive, are actually listening to the words...
For sure poetry attracts a lot of frustrated performers who maybe haven't made it in other performance spheres and enjoy the buzz of being on the stage. Mutual respect is important though and you are right to draw attention to it.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 00:38

Thank you for commenting, Philipos, Cynthia, and Greg and a special 'Happy New Year' and thank you to you, Francine.

I won't be saying who the poem is aimed at. If anyone thinks it isn't about them then it probably isn't, if they think it is about them, then perhaps it is -

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reception_theory

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 00:32

Hi Greg, well done with your POTM. and happy new year. Win X

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Elaine Booth

Sat 1st Jan 2011 23:03

Loved this - of course!! So pleased you were thus inspired! It was a wonderful evening indeed! X

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Francine

Sat 1st Jan 2011 22:56

Congratulations Greg, on Poem of the month!
'Dance On' is expressed in a sad, matter of fact way, leaving the reader enough to empathise, yet wanting to know more...

Happy New Year!

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Francine

Sat 1st Jan 2011 22:33

Wow Dave, I wonder who you are aiming this at...
Clearly a strong message, that performed, may give some a reason to pause, reflect, and perhaps show some respect! (Although they may be so wrapped up in themselves that they are totally oblivious...)

p.s. Je te souhaite Bonne Année 2011 : )

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Greg Freeman

Sat 1st Jan 2011 22:12

This has real venom, Dave, and knowing you are a really nice guy makes me wonder about the recipient. Reminds me of Dylan's Positively 4th Street.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sat 1st Jan 2011 20:38

Happy New Year Ann, and thanks for your comments on my New Year Wishes poem. Hopefully I will be around more again now, but it's nice to be missed sometimes :) Cheers, Dave

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Sat 1st Jan 2011 20:14

You are v. naughty! x
...Cynthia started it, O foxy one :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 1st Jan 2011 19:27

My word, Dave, what kind of poets do you hobnob with? It's a good rant, with a very valid point as says Philipos.

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John Aikman

Sat 1st Jan 2011 18:45

Yay! More 'Happy New Years' etc. etc.

Yes, I will continue in my quest to write something 'joyfully erotic' one day. It is 'a long felt want'...as they say. I will rely upon you to tell me if I ever succeed (I mean that).

Your obedient servant and fervent admirer...well, err, ummm....me!

:-)

Jxxx

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Philipos

Sat 1st Jan 2011 18:42

I really enjoyed this and was pleased to see you got the rooibos in - well red tea anyway - and what I especially liked about it most is you tell it just as your experience unfolds

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Philipos

Sat 1st Jan 2011 18:38

A lot of soul in your poems Ian and every word worth savouring

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Sat 1st Jan 2011 17:58

I think it was Wilfred Owen who said that Poet's warn - your poem makes a good point

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Sat 1st Jan 2011 16:36

very moving-thank you

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Dave Bradley

Sat 1st Jan 2011 16:21

Enjoyable and thought-provoking. Have you seen the 'humorous' book which claims to help motorists identify road-kill?

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