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J.D. Bardo

Sat 24th Oct 2020 15:27

like the squirrel outside my window, I to am preparing for the winter. thanks for your comments on my writing Keith, loved your Bio. and really liked faces in shadows, (memories) wow, J.D.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 24th Oct 2020 15:09

Sadly, an all too frequent occurrence - the death of wild life on our roads. Here, in the UK, it happens to badgers and foxes or the
occasional rabbit. With vehicles and their headlights having been
around for many decades, you might think that a word of warning
would have been handed down in the animal world by now !

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keith jeffries

Sat 24th Oct 2020 14:54

Flavia,

I enjoyed this poem for its juxtaposition between desire and hesitancy when head rules the heart but the heart speaks back. A clever poem. A very good poem

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 24th Oct 2020 13:28

JD

This poem must be in the mind of many people and you have articulated it well.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 24th Oct 2020 13:12

You use words beautifully, Shifa. & I had to google panoply ?. Favourite word of the day ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 24th Oct 2020 12:37

A beautiful summary of a dour month, Keith.

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keith jeffries

Sat 24th Oct 2020 11:24

a good and interesting poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 24th Oct 2020 09:27

Emeka is a young aspiring poet with enormous potential who has already grasped the fact that poetry, a peaceful tool, can influence events and highlight what is taking place in his country. He is highly observant and articulate. Nigeria needs to be aware that there are, amongst its citizens, intelligent young people who can see what the government is doing and they are not fooled. Emeka we salute you

Keith

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julie callaghan

Sat 24th Oct 2020 09:08

Made me laugh, thanks Hugh.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 24th Oct 2020 08:52

Thank you for the comment Julie, & all my dreams are strange lately! ?

And, John, you may be right. The waking world is just a nightmare right now. I'll let you in , if I can visit the bawdy aisles of Coopey land!

Thanks for tapping the Like button Jordyn, Shifa & Stephen ?

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Sat 24th Oct 2020 08:14

Many years ago I wrote a book on crystals, sadly no longer in print. These gifts from the mineral world never cease to amaze me!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 22:17

“Your new dawn is just a heartbeat away”... adding this amazing quote to my book of favorites! Thank you for sharing beautiful soul with us Paul. We are blessed you are here. ❤️

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 21:55

Ruth: "Ruth, Campari is but a delight ??"
Reprise nor a reprieve ???

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 21:54

I think this makes more sense than our waking world, Stephen. Will you let me in?

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Fri 23rd Oct 2020 21:19

You never fail to poetically please Adam. I love this piece.





Rose ?

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Fri 23rd Oct 2020 21:14

A really cleverly written, and most enjoyable read Simon.


Rose ?

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keith jeffries

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 20:39

Emeka,

This is a very powerful poem indeed. The words, "We boiled in our fear" clearly expresses the effects of such violence. Journalists will report these happenings but only a poet will be able to capture the emotions which are at play. Very well written.
Take great care of yourself and your family.

Keith

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New Shoes

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 19:52

Thanks for the comment Keith. I hope life is finding you well.
Peace
willow

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Fri 23rd Oct 2020 19:45

I love crystals they are my passion loved this poem xx

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 18:21

It went through the parallax, obviously, Julie and Stephen.
And thanks for the Likes Stephen Atkinson and Lasse.

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julie callaghan

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 18:19

Nightmare! I hate strange dreams, Even worse when you can remember them. Enjoyed reading about this one though.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 17:20

Oh yes, brilliant. I can feel some pain starting, so I'll wait on others' ideas.

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julie callaghan

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 15:25

I don't know, where did it go?
please explain, it hurts my brain!

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Emeka Collins

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 14:36

Thank you so much @ Keith, @Shifa, @Greg and @Paul. Thank you for lending your voice to this struggle.

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Clive Culverhouse

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 13:49

Thanks for taking the time to comment Keith, thanks for your kind words.

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keith jeffries

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 11:33

Clive,

This poem has a quality all of its own as you use the language in an almost exquisite way. "Sand on toes in fizziness", " they wont leave until I have gone a brown leaf about to fall". A superb piece of writing.
Thank you for this

Keith

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d.knape

Fri 23rd Oct 2020 03:31

Dawn---The environmentally friendly soap detergent!

You can always expect a little Humor is my poems.
I get away with it because I'm OLD!

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John Marks

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 23:19

Hello Dawn. Poetry, like life, is not an easy path, but worthwhile. Good luck in all you do.

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hardwiredtometallica

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 23:03

Thank you both for your comments, I really appreciate you and the time you invested to write one.
It makes me very happy that I am finally able to share my passion with fellow poets and poetry-lovers (around the globe) as well as to have such a variety of exciting and non-marketed poetry just a click away! : )

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 22:11

Thank you for your kind feedback Paul and Keith. This poem was inspired by the Goo Goo Dolls song Autumn Leaves. I wasn’t even sure which direction it would go. Interesting you picked up on that Keith. I love poems that vary based on the reader’s interpretation.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 20:36

Cheers Tom for your liking of my verse, A wave from the bus,
Tommy

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 19:42

You have excelled yourself with this poem which stirs the imagination in a number of different directions. Well done and thank you

Keith

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 18:33

What an intricate piece of poetry! Simply brilliant.

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trevor homer

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 17:44


Paul, Tom, Ray, Keith, Greg and J.D,
I am incredibly grateful for your comments.

Bon, Julie and Stephen, thanks for the 'likes'. I am indebted to you.

These are dark times for a lot of people, which present difficulties for a whole generation in many ways.
'The Old Get Older And The Young Get Younger'. Strange to think that when Jim Morrison wrote that it meant change of a completely different kind.

Regards T.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 17:39

Not sludge at all. As Stephen G states, spellbinding & thought provoking.

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raypool

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 17:13

Thanks for all your likes Jordyn, Stephen and Tom.

Pass the cocoa Graham, I need an antidote! Also a bit sweaty....

Sorry Keith i'd never do that - without the medication I might stiffen up then I would need the lubrication.

Brian good thinking , nothing's all bad of course - apart from the President of the United States of America.

Tony thanks mate. I feel for your restrictions, we all need a bit of levity. Mine is rising up at the moment as a way of dealing with things.

Nice one, John, thanks for reminding me of that, excellent.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 17:04

This is spellbinding. Thank you.

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JoneJOnes

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 16:57

A wonderful verse. I wrote poetry at the university. And then I stopped because I found a new occupation for myself, which, in addition to pleasure, also brings money: I play in online pokies australia. That's real money no deposit https://pokiestar.com/online-pokies-for-real-money/

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 16:38

Thank you for taking time to read it & the lovely comment Bon.

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Dawn

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 14:43

provoking. Thank you. You peeled it back to reveal ourselves.

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Dawn

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 14:32

This was very compelling. You described the blacken heart well and how it consumes. Stirring.
I respect this piece very much.
Thank you

- one thing, "of the black crows" perhaps could be "from the black crows" if possible. Just for syllables/rhythm.

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Dawn

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 13:03

I like that you made this real with "but not anymore". It broke the situation from witty humor - which was playful, clever, and entertaining, into a little slap-in-your-face reality. Something seemingly small changed the life and consequently the person on a core level.

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Philipos

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 12:34


You should publish.

Thanks for the like on my latest.

P

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 11:35

Thanks Paul ?

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jennifer Malden

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 11:19

Great and v relevant as usual, Ray This wretched Covid has made us all insecure, or me, at least. Things one formerly took for granted are now more precious.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 11:12

Lovely as usual! Are all your characters so desperate!!!! Very funny but also sad at the same time. One has seen this happen often, or thinks one has. Jennifer

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 11:06

thanx for the 'likes' ?

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John Coopey

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 08:28

What a cracking idea, Paul!
And thanks for the Like, Stephen.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 06:45

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Thu 22nd Oct 2020 06:45

Thank you ?

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