Intriguing and well composed, leaving the reader in suspense. A work of literary art.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about The Figure (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Sat 28th Nov 2020 17:00
Thanks for your nice comments?
Comment is about The homeless man (blog)
Original item by oussama elmanar
I really like this and I think that I prefer the text which has had its line arrangements shifted due to the image, rather than the text which is in the image itself which has the original line arrangement. But either way it is a really peace creating poem. Serenity.
Comment is about Because (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Really like this poem. Not a word wasted. Tony
Comment is about Pink Lady (blog)
Original item by Candice Reineke
Thanks for your comment, Paul!
Yes, she’s my favorite too. I’m lucky to occasionally have her in Florida. She saved me from a low last night.
Comment is about Pink Lady (blog)
Original item by Candice Reineke
Sat 28th Nov 2020 14:16
I wished that I was a tree, living a peaceful life. Good work
Comment is about Attention! (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
I will celebrate today as a direct result of reading this poem. (myself)
thank-you
Comment is about Enjoying My Self (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Sat 28th Nov 2020 12:37
Sometimes waking up
calls for a celebration.
Comment is about Enjoying My Self (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Sat 28th Nov 2020 12:06
Whenever
a candle's in a room
there's little doubt
there's sweet perfume.
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Comment is about Bathroom Candle (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Sat 28th Nov 2020 09:56
Enjoying these poetry postcards from your neighbourhood, Mike - . especially as it's such an interesting one for footie fans. And you're right, let's hear it for the bus drivers.
Comment is about For All Our Bus Drivers! (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
Thank you so much, Paul, for your kind words and prayers.
I couldn't have come this far without the help of everyone here especially yours and that of Keith Jeffries.
I am grateful for holding my hands to walk this path.
Comment is about "Walking Tender Paths" (blog)
Original item by Emeka Collins
Thanks Candice for reading and sharing your sentiments. Those keepsakes are such a treasure to hold onto. ❤️
Comment is about You're So Sentimental (blog)
Original item by kimberly
Paul, what a delightful comment! Thank you. Your rose is cherished too.
Thank you Stephen for hitting a like.
Comment is about The Soul of the Moon (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
My best friend gave me handmade coupons 14 years ago with “15-second hug” written on them. We have been lovers now for four years, but I still have one of those coupons in my top dresser drawer. ❤️
Comment is about You're So Sentimental (blog)
Original item by kimberly
I’m a receptive audience in your theater of words. Thanks for revealing beauty in dark spaces.
Comment is about Downstage (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
The bathroom candle – a friend in the best of times and the worst of times. ?
Comment is about Bathroom Candle (blog)
Original item by d.knape
What fun to make delicious art for nourishment. Food for the body, mind and soul.
Comment is about Flavours Of Cooking (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Make of it as you will Brian. I guess you'll be more or less right. One man's hypocrisy is another man's will to move with the times. .
For neither man nor angel can discern hypocrisy, the only evil that walks invisible, except to God alone. (John Milton)
Comment is about Hypocrisy (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
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Fri 27th Nov 2020 22:30
Very good piece John, and I'd like to think that Les Contemptibles are more prevalent at the far end of the tunnel.
Comment is about Hypocrisy (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
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Fri 27th Nov 2020 21:40
My guess is that he poured his drinks away when no-one was looking and only had a quick puff on each fag. In reality he was the boss's son, in the community undercover and had a home gym and a cupboard full of vitamin pills. (That's two minutes of my life I won't get back!)
Comment is about Wonder Boy (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thanks for the likes Stephen G and
Stephen A. Totally lost for inspiration today, not sure if that is a good or a bad thing?
Thanks for the comment MC
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
John, Tony, Stephen, and Bardot. Thank you so much for the like.
Comment is about "Walking Tender Paths" (blog)
Original item by Emeka Collins
Thank you M.C. !
I have always loved Stanley Myers' superb and all too brief guitar fragment he called "Cavatina",
My eyes mist over whenever I hear it.
Chris Hubbard
Comment is about A Small and Simple Song (blog)
Original item by Chris Hubbard
I award you comment of the year King Paul! Thank you so much for your heartfelt words and continuous support. You are amazing. ?
P.S. Hallelujah is pure poetry! It is my all-time favorite song.
Comment is about Shadow Dancing (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Fri 27th Nov 2020 17:15
Ah...music to the ears. (and to the eyes).
Comment is about A Small and Simple Song (blog)
Original item by Chris Hubbard
Life gets teejus, don't it?
(Slim Dusty from Down Under).
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Philipos
Fri 27th Nov 2020 16:58
Stephen, amazing how some get through it, when others don't.
Enjoyed the read and the sharing of thoughts and the subtle rhymes.
What was his secret do you think?
P.
Comment is about Wonder Boy (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
I really appreciate your kind words. It's part of a series called, rather pretentiously, 'Poems of time and place'. I'll put some more on the profile.
Not a catholic, even part-time. I did once have a mitre. It was a football signed by Bobby Moore.
More power to your pen.
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thanks to Zushka and John for the comments and to Ray, Bramwell and Jordyn for the likes. Yes, the darkness is a strange place and our demons have a habit of invading it, even if we lock them away. Perhaps it's down to imagination.
Comment is about In the darkness (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
I love this piece❤️ Thank you for sharing.
-J
Comment is about Distant Thoughts (blog)
Original item by DINESH BHASKAR SHETTY
Thanks. A great tribute.
Comment is about La Vida Loca (for D.A.M;) (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
This is excellent - thoughtful and reflective
Comment is about Axel (blog)
Original item by Mike McPeek
Fri 27th Nov 2020 15:18
Hello Mr. Paul,
Thank you for the warm welcome and your kind comment.?
Honestly, it was more difficult than I thought especially the grammar, because I started to learn English 6 years ago.
And I want to say that the previous generation is the mainstay of society, without them we are nothing, so thanks for you efforts.
I will work harder!
Oussama
Comment is about oussama elmanar (poet profile)
Original item by oussama elmanar
Enjoyed the journey through time along The Old Straight Track.
Comment is about The Old Straight Track (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
You are much more polite than myself Paul, thank goodness!
Thanks for the like and the comment Aviva.
Your words made me see my own write in a new and different light.
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
This made me smile. Is it a three untruths followed by a truth pattern?
The sun is in the sky, rain is probably happening somewhere, the wind is outside the window. There's nothing you want to see, There's nothing you want to do, You're saying something right now. Your mind is full of a poem, your mind is full of a poem, You're using someone else's voice right now? hehehe and then there's the ... in the last truth line and ain't that the truth!
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks for the likes JD, Paul and Keith. Also for the comments Paul and Keith, Changed the title accordingly.
Part 2
My mind is blank
My brain is numb
My voice is lost
On this late November day
The news is dull
The house is still
The week is done
Thank.... ful at least it is Friday
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Julie,
The title of this poem should be an Ode to Lockdown.
We all need cheering up. Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Boring (Ode To Lockdown) (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
JD.,
This poem is fun to read with a gentle humour. It is also original and has a deep underlying message. A poem to enjoy and ponder on.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Meeting St. Peter (blog)
Original item by J.D. Bardo
Thanks for your comment, Kev, and for the Likes, Stephen A and Stephen G and Anmolpreet.
Comment is about THE NOB NURSE (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
I can remember taking one of my lads to the hospital with a rash at the top of his thigh. He'd have been about 7 or 8 at the time.The doctor tried to access it by pulling his shorts up.
He said you'll have to pull em down, it's right at the top.
She said. I was trying to save your embarrassment
He said. You'll be embarrassed when you see what I'm packing.
I thought.. that's my boy
Comment is about THE NOB NURSE (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Love this whimsical poem John. I’ve always wanted to visit the land of make believe. You make it a reality! ?❤️
Comment is about The stolen child (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Stephen Atkinson
Sat 28th Nov 2020 17:07
I always preferred a Granny Smith, but you may have just converted me ! ?
Comment is about Pink Lady (blog)
Original item by Candice Reineke