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Isobel

Thu 13th Dec 2012 07:46

I thought it was parts of Africa that did that but it's probably more widespread.

All I can say on that subject is that I would cheerfully emasculate the barbarians capable of doing that to a woman. It's one of those subjects that makes my blood boil - even in a comedy piece.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 13th Dec 2012 07:18

Oh, poor Fatima!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 13th Dec 2012 07:12

Or there's this of course - the theme tune. I too remember The Sky at Night in the old black and white tv days - staying up to watch it with my dad. I saw Patrick Moore do his talk at Truro about 10+ years ago - and he played the zylophone too :)

http://youtu.be/8ZF4qyOPrcU

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 12th Dec 2012 22:27

Isobel,
Thanks for the comments

I was trying to get five (loosely placed) beats into each line, But missed two or three of them.

Your `gripping` has made me think about the human ability to `get into` this animal predatory stuff (I mean get enthusiastic and excited about it) I wonder what it all means about what -or who - we are?

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Katy Megan Hughes

Wed 12th Dec 2012 20:09

happy to oblige....

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Rachel Bond

Wed 12th Dec 2012 20:00

hi laura...no excuses,you sound like morrisey with his stitches...brush down the poetry coat and get it on :)

glad you got the joke :)

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tony sheridan

Wed 12th Dec 2012 19:41

Beautiful. Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Wed 12th Dec 2012 19:35

I like this! Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Wed 12th Dec 2012 19:30

Love it! "So they swap." Great punchline! Take care, Tony.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 12th Dec 2012 16:47




Concise - man - concise...Bravo!

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Wed 12th Dec 2012 15:29

Hi Tommy,
Thanks for your feedback on 'Mackerel In The Bath'. It was actually carbolic soap and a wire brush-but I couldn't get that to rhyme with 'feather'!

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Wed 12th Dec 2012 15:27

Hi Cathy,
Thanks for the feedback on 'Mackerel In The Bath'-I hope it made a good bedtime story!

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Wed 12th Dec 2012 15:21

Hi Hugh,
Many thanks for the feedback on 'Mackerel In The Bath'- laughter is always a good response!

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Peter R White

Wed 12th Dec 2012 09:47

No event on 26th December. See you 30th January with poets:
River Wolton,
Gareth Durasow,
Maria Taylor,
Roy Marshall,
Deborah Tyler-Bennett,
Matt Merritt

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jane wilcock

Wed 12th Dec 2012 08:45

I have been/am very influenced by Patrick Moore and have been to his talk at Bolton twice, Currently if you get up a hill on a starry morning about 30 min before unrise,about7am, and look to the SE where the sun will rise you can see small faint Mercury at the horizon, above bright Venus and above that Saturn all in a line: then turn opp and Jupiter is bright, 4 planets in one sky!
The poem is great: hes left a black hole and Patrick may be uncovering some of the answers!

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Francine

Wed 12th Dec 2012 05:02

A wonderful tribute.
I had no idea who he was until Julian mentioned him and I looked him up.
Sounds like he was a nice man who shared his interests and passion for astronomy with a grateful and welcoming audience!

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Jade Johannsen

Wed 12th Dec 2012 01:01

Thank you Tommy.

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Tue 11th Dec 2012 22:05

ps-very nice piece of art work Shirley
the expression tells it all.xx

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Tue 11th Dec 2012 21:57

Hi Shirley.Having,like lots of other people,been through what you are going through,we know exactly how you must feel.The last thing you need is as you state in this poem not to be told to snap out of it.It unfortunately has to run its course.Our thoughts are with you.And you should not have to concern yourself about bringing others down-it is their problem if they lack compassion and understanding.Please keep bearing the fact in mind that you WILL come out of it-and obviously,the sooner the better.Bearing in mind what you are going through,it must have taken a great deal of effort for you to take time to read our latest poem and leave such a nice comment on it-lets hope this is a sign that you are pulling out of this dark phase.

Thank you ever so much
for this sad,brave and honest poem.
We will be thinking of you-good luck!!xx

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 21:49

I listened to the children at our school sing Take That's 'Rule the World' earlier this week and found myself getting quite emotional. Patrick Moore reminds me very much of my childhood, black and white TVs and the wonder at space. The song could have been written for him so I'm adding the link - not sure if it will work. School children are a lot better at singing it but there weren't any choirs on

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KII1ruAfvsg

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Nigel Astell

Tue 11th Dec 2012 17:00

Yes what a great night and an excellent collage poem love the ear phones on the image John
and may I wish everyone a happy Christmas too.

P.S thanks for the sweeties Dorinda they went down well

P.P.S yes I did ask if anyone else wanted one as I sucked on two

All the best for 2013

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Nigel Astell

Tue 11th Dec 2012 16:44

Mad to go
Truth or lie
Sinner from beginner
Poetess and whore
Writer so erotic
Do some more.

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 11th Dec 2012 16:09

This is quite a tribute and a great, well, it seems almost a lyrical stream of consciousness piece really.
I find it amusing that he wore a monocle and looked through telescopes. is there a monocular connection do you think?
And, sorry to bang the same drum, but he was not a trained astronomer, no degree nor nowt but self-taught, like so many of us on here.

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Alison Mary Dunn

Tue 11th Dec 2012 14:52

Tx Mikhail, you've turned the mood of 'blank' upside down. Like it a lot! :)

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Katie Haigh

Tue 11th Dec 2012 12:14

Our Middleton night will be on Sunday 23rd, with guest James Whitrow, hope to see lots of you there for our festive poetry night x

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Katy Megan Hughes

Tue 11th Dec 2012 11:48

oh blimey-no more madness! i've had enough to last me a life time lol x

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dorinda macdowell

Tue 11th Dec 2012 11:34

What a great meeting we had last night! - I think this must be one of the very best collage poems we've done.

And now... the following really is sincerely meant:

"I have to say, for it is true:
I thank God for each one of you"

Have a lovely, lovely Christmas and a happy new year........and here's to the next twelve months - and more - of Stockport Write Out Loud!

Love from Dorinda
x

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garside

Tue 11th Dec 2012 10:47

thank you Winston for your care and attention

@Isobel i plan to show this later next year in Manchester - will post on here when i know more thank you

steve

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 10:32

Crumbs - who does like the sound of a crying child - but that does explain it. I don't suppose she was into breast feeding either - the only way I seemed to get any of mine to shut up - so I did it just about everywhere and anywhere :) Very discreetly of course!

Oddly enough, from memory it was often other women who were the most disapproving. Sometimes we are our own worst enemies.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 11th Dec 2012 09:45

Cheers guys

Is - well, the crying line was put in there because of the dates of the unsolicited suggestions...I was born in '68, my mother didn't like crying babies...hence not being allowed to cry. Unsolicited words right from the get go ;)

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 09:37

To begin at the beginning:

It is winter, moonless night in the small town, starless and bible-black, cobblestreets silent but for the full throated mirth and cheer of one small tavern, its streets sloeblack, slow black, crowblack, but for the chink of light, the heat, the warmth, the words that leak and seep through leaded light into the silence of that night. For not all the people of the lulled and dumbfound town are sleeping now…

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 09:01

Come share your Dylan-esqe poetry at the Wigan WOL Tudor Christmas bash this Thursday. As well as whisky, vodka and gin swillers, we are also great culture vultures!

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 08:33

Great performance and poem,Laura - I really enjoyed this.

The only thing I'm not so sure about is the crying. I think crying for women is quite accepted. It seems to be more frowned on for a man though. Small wonder pent up emotions lead to aggression - a good boo hoo does the soul wonders!

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 08:25

You paint a great picture with this Harry - I can so imagine the scene and love the poetry in it.
– the hurl of tautened muscle
And fasten of fang and claw in flesh –

That's gripping stuff!

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Isobel

Tue 11th Dec 2012 08:15

I'm glad someone did something for the passing of Patrick Moore. I think you've captured his essence well. It was the sense of wonder he instilled. His hyper intelligence just shone out of him - in a non condescending way.

What a fitting tribute Mike!

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Mon 10th Dec 2012 22:46

Cor blimey Steve! you are run off your feet!.xx

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 10th Dec 2012 22:35

thanx for your comment on my latest poem lucy, hope you're okay hun X

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 10th Dec 2012 22:32

Thank you, Hugh!

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Isobel

Mon 10th Dec 2012 21:47

You've brought to mind a bit of philosophy I recently heard.

"The whole is more than the sum of all its parts"

I wonder if this is what Aristotle had in mind?

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Mikhail Smith

Mon 10th Dec 2012 21:33

Alison. I think the blank canvas is more exciting - once disturbed the surface becomes a battleground - with the first brushstroke you've already lost -.



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Mikhail Smith

Mon 10th Dec 2012 21:05

Thanks for the comment Jeff - hope to visit one of your venues.




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Mikhail Smith

Mon 10th Dec 2012 21:00

.. thanks for looking Tommy .. I've read all your list above .. there's one missing .. " the price of freedom is eternal vigilance " .. we've all stopped watching ..




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Harry O'Neill

Mon 10th Dec 2012 20:36

Aye, aye, John,...rein it in! (I was `avin me tea!)

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tony sheridan

Mon 10th Dec 2012 19:32

I like this! Take care, Tony.

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Hugh

Mon 10th Dec 2012 19:18

An enjoyable read.Well done !

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Steve Higgins

Mon 10th Dec 2012 18:46

The BBC made a similar film in 1978 called simply 'Dylan' starring Ronald lacey (you may remember him as a nazi in Raiders of the Lost Ark)Laceys performance was exceptional and its something worth re showing on TV.

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Steve Higgins

Mon 10th Dec 2012 18:28

You're right MC. I like work with a good verse and a good -I was going to say ryhme but thats not stictly true, I like a good rythym and something with a good lyrical quality, and yes, something thats uplifting rather than negative or downbeat is always appealing.
Steve

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steve pottinger

Mon 10th Dec 2012 17:31

Thanks very much, Laura!

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 10th Dec 2012 16:54

Excellent Laura. More power to your elbow.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 10th Dec 2012 15:45

He'd have fitted in well in Wigan!

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