Trust Herbertsons kid to get her twopennyworth in first! jumping the queue in front of old people(like me!)as to having to wait six weeks...no way Lynn..I would have to get a blow up doll,to keep me going-like the one thats in my wardobe...DOH!!..pass the bucket quick! good one sexy Dyechops-lotsa 'thingy'-Stef-xx(B-xx)

Comment is about 17½ + 1 Day (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Good evening lovely Lady-your request,regarding a happy ending romantic poem has been noted and will soon be undertaken.Sincerely hope you have had a nice week-end and that your week goes well-thank you so much for comments on'Biding my time' and all of your kind thoughts,be thinking of you-speak soon-Steffers-xxxx

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson

I think this poem outstanding.

warm, real, moving and beautifully crafted.

excellent x

Comment is about The Enlightenment 82 (blog)

Original item by Emma McCourty

Hi, dear Bernadette! Thank you very much for your beautiful comment on my "Something about me". With warmest wishes to you and your family, Larisa

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson

lovely photograph Larisa you must be so proud of your beautiful grandson..I have 3 gorgeous grandsons and another one due in october so I can relate to your poem very well..love Bernadette x

Comment is about Something about me (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Well done Lynn you did it gave us a sequel ..well you've started it off now ! this could end up a book ! or at least a short story please as you can't end it here now you have got our minds racing and bet stef will comment soon ..ha ha I beat him to it .. very good follow on so keep on writing ...love Bernadette x x

Comment is about 17½ + 1 Day (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

This is really good and thought provoking. I enjoyed it too.

Comment is about Now. (blog)

Hi Ian just stumbled on your poem somewhat late. Really enjoyed it, some excellent lines.

Comment is about Setting (blog)

Original item by Ian Nenna

Wonderful poem, Ann, so pure and heartfelt. Respectful hugs, Lynn.

Comment is about little cardboard box (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi Bernadette, just posted an answer to you on my 17½ poem. I do remember those coffee ads, they were good, weren't they, but I'm sure Stefan's hoping for a sequel cos I wrote a series on the Angel and the Beachcomber. Anyway, I had fun with writing this sequel, so thanks to both of you for that!! Lynn xxx

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson

So brilliantly different! loved it-thanks-Stef.

Comment is about Now. (blog)

Thanks Bernadette, yes, I do remember the coffee ad, I think Stefan is remembering my sequels to the Angel poem though. As I said, I hadn't originally planned a sequel to this, but what the heck, I am just about to post it now!! xxx

Comment is about 17½ (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Hello again Dave, commiserations on your loss of Griff, and thanks for comment on Max. There has to be something extra special about border collies, I think... Warmest Wishes, Lynn

Comment is about Dave Dunn (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Dunn

What a stunning picture of you both, Larisa, and a lovely poem. xx

Comment is about Something about me (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

i like this..i found it humorous yet edgy
employed to collect red wine and sushi,

filter and ferment into something fruity -

that's my trickle-down theory of beauty.

i like the trickle down theory of beauty...

I also loved the basement 'verse'. i still dont know the academic difference of the verse and stanza...but i like your explanation better. your choice of objects and place are familiar the poem is tangible and real on cerebral subject...i like work that is grounded. i like its normalcy unlike the pretensiousness of my own loft.

Comment is about Versus (blog)

Hi Ann - thank you for your comments on 'A Certain Lady' :)

Best wishes,
Dave

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

You have a beautiful heart Stefan. Thank you very much for your comment.

Comment is about Something about me (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Beautiful Grandson-beautiful Grandma-beautiful poem! thank you,from a not so beautiful..Stef-xx(M-xx)

Comment is about Something about me (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Ann,Thanks for posting this link to the fab "Sister Sledge".Just brightened up my morning! What a bass player!By the way,loved your Little Cardboard Box poem too!Felt like I was actually there re-living the moment with you as I read!

Comment is about Groove round the kitchen - it's SUNDAY!!! (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I love this Thomas. An excellent poem.

Comment is about Pull Apart The Perfect Nest (blog)

Original item by Tom

Lovely poem Dave. xx

Comment is about A Certain Lady (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Wot new language have you been learing Kath? I was just thinking of you this morning, wondering where you'd gone. Glad your back and I LOVE this. Talk about original! xx

Comment is about Workshop exercise of the month (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

And I mean Groove babe! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Comment is about Groove round the kitchen - it's SUNDAY!!! (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thank you Jeff for reading my poems and for your kind comment. With warmest wishes, Larisa

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

Original item by Jeffarama!

Thank you dear Lynn for your comments on my latest poems. With love, Larisa

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Hi Winston

thanks for taking the time to look at the images on the site - and yes to be by the sea indeed - tis a sweet dream eh :-)

Comment is about Winston Plowes (poet profile)

Original item by Winston Plowes

Hi Cynthia - apols for the delay - thanks for your thought and good to chat with you recently

take care

steve x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

You really ought to call it Thoughts of Partet.The closing two lines are quite beautiful in an odd sort of way! The trouble with "porm" is that it's too close to porn.

Comment is about Workshop exercise of the month (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

This makes complete sense to me : )

Comment is about Workshop exercise of the month (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

for july

Comment is about Workshop exercise of the month (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

A Skussle of Bips prowl through crumid darkness,
coniphany voices send thoughts of Partet.
The Glucker they seek is salmy
and filled with porm.
Foona-Plate is almost upon them
and soon fildew will be theirs.

Comment is about Vocabulate Fremunctiously (article)

Good morning Dave-brill poem,but would you mind if I put my two pennyworth into the last verse?

'in these darker days we gather,
left here to recall
legacies of having known true
hearts
whose good deeds were never small'

if you prefer to bite my head off,
take yer teeth out first! lol!
catch thi' later owd' son-Stef.

Comment is about In Darker Days We Gather (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Good evening Larisa-I hope you and Lynn never get together-you would set the world on fire! but what a barbeque!! woo-oo!-lotsa love-Stefan-xx(M-xx)

Comment is about Don't promise! (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Good evening Dave-you read this with just the right depth of voice-and as Heather mentions,very well ended-Thank you Sir!-Stef.

Comment is about A Certain Lady (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Hi lovely Bernadette-thanks for recent comments.Glad you have bucked up-but if I see that bottom lip ever quivver again,over Uncle Stefs knee you go!! you are gonna do-and-be fine...I can feel it in me' 'osepipe! lotsa 'ugs'n'kisses-Stef-xxxx

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson

A very good evening to you Lynn-one thing about you-you really ooze warmth and friendliness-and I think I speak for a lot of people on here when I say...keep it up girly! lotsa love and thanks-Stef-xx(B-xx)ps glad you got the spider milarkey.

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

A very good evening to you Heather.To say you have made my day with your comments on 'The Widower' would be a great understatement! thank you ever so so much-with kindest regards-Stefan-x

Comment is about Heather (poet profile)

Original item by Heather

Hi Heather, many thanks for your kind appraisal of 'A Certain Lady', much appreciated :)
Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Heather (poet profile)

Original item by Heather

I love the rhythm of this piece, you've got it spot on and the content's just great. Very charming. I felt that you ended it very well.

Comment is about A Certain Lady (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

A really nice progression in this poem, I like the change from fear to excitement and the sensation of success. Considering your persona was a leaf, I found myself rather taken by him ;) Nicely written.

Comment is about the little leaf (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hugs Lyn - my old border collie Griff was a wise and thoughtful beast too. He was only ill for a few days before the end. They live on in our memories though :)

Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Our Max (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Great stuff Josh, hope to see you at another gig soon, cheers Jeff

Comment is about Whistle-Blower (blog)

Original item by Joshua Van-Cook

Hi Joshua, good to meet you the other week, really like this poem, some great lines, like the use of monopoly in the poem, nice one! All the best, Jeff

Comment is about The end (blog)

Original item by Joshua Van-Cook

Hi Larisa, thanx for your comment on my poem, glad you like it. I haven't seen your work before today (just been busy with other stuff!), read a few of your poems and like your style, good stuff, keep it up, best wishes Jeff X

Comment is about Don't promise! (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Jeff, thank you so much for kind comments on "Seduction". Glad you liked it. Lynn x

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

Original item by Jeffarama!

Hi Dave, thank you for commenting on "Seduction" and for best wishes. I think I need to practice on the voice though! ;-)

Comment is about Dave Dunn (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Dunn

Hi Bernadette, thank you kindly for lovely comment on "Seduction". Glad you liked it, my friend. xx

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson

Hi Larisa, thank you for your kind comment on "Seduction". I have commented on your last 3 blogs, I especially love "The Sea". All the Best, Lynn xx

Comment is about Larisa Rzhepishevska (poet profile)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Enjoyed this, Larisa, very well put. Best regards, Lynn xx

Comment is about Don't promise! (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Oh, Larisa! Not sure how come I missed this, but it is truly beautiful. Just love it, my dear xx

Comment is about THE SEA (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska