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Chris Hubbard

Sun 13th Dec 2020 22:45

Hi Jennifer and Keith,

Thank you so much for your interest and thoughts on this rumination.

It occurred to me the other day that I've only ever lived on islands - the UK and Australia. Then I started wondering whether that has influenced my outlook on the world and its travails.

I concluded that, given that I have deep roots in both, it must have.

In spite of the ending, I have a homeland on both sides of the world.

All the best,

Chris

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 22:40

Yes kisses are lovely. But what about Covid. I've had a few covid dates now. I'm looking forward to the next one. It better happen this time. I'm sick and tired of the virtual world.

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Clive Culverhouse

Sun 13th Dec 2020 22:16

Ok well this is going to sound wierd if not stupid but it really did happen, during a meditation session I heard a woman's voice like she was standing right next to me shouting in Spanish and I got the profound feeling she was calling to me. She called me Nicorates. I wrote a poem about it actually called My Name Was Nicorates. It all felt so real, clairaudience I think they call it.

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 21:05

I believe we are reincarnated .
Sometimes I meet someone and its a stronger feeling than just familiarity .
Don't laugh
But I believe I was a nun in a past life .
When I first went to Dublin.
I knew I had been there before in a different lifetime. I feel that way about Greece too.
In the USA I had familiar feelings in New York.
Perhaps its all my celtic roots coming through .
I would like to ask you .
How do you feel in Italy.
Because by my reckoning you have been there in a different lifetime.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Dec 2020 19:57

I assume from your response, MC, that this means you had (and still have no clue) about which way you voted on any of the issues I detailed.
Greg - the best explanation I can offer for the Brexit vote was (and continues to be) this

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=11LZIhF-2QQ

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 13th Dec 2020 18:56

Cheers Paul?

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 18:54

What a nice little ditty.
And did you take your sunglasses with you as well as your hat, socks and whatever else. Also suncream. Although fake tan is better but it gets all over the bed sheets and makes one look like ones been Tangoed. Which would never do for ones reputation now would it?

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Greg Freeman

Sun 13th Dec 2020 18:34

Still harking back to the war, MC ... I'm too young to recall it personally. But 'the war' seems to be what Brexit is all about. Why?!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Dec 2020 18:16

Disenchantment....decision....detachment.
We faced WW2 and declared war without much in the way of planning as I recall. But the time obtained the actions and we had
people with the strength of mind to make it work. It's a reality I
accept that we have a lack of that character in those around today
to see us move forward and get the job done. But necessity will
be a prime driver towards eventual completion of the decision to depart. Survival has been a thread through our history and self-
destruction is hardly aligned to the idea of life here. Self-interest
has its limitations when push comes to shove in the real world. I
take a more optimistic view of the future. Perhaps being born and
brought up by the sea instilled a DNA that seeks a return to wider
horizons beyond the artificial (as in "artifice") construction across
the Channel that poses and postures its way into disrepute.
.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Dec 2020 17:51

Thank you, Aviva. I love the way this builds to the conclusion.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Dec 2020 17:35

Very helpful to see all your reactions in the comments. It gives me a new, and very interesting, view of the poem.

Thanks to everyone, and for the likes as well.

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Tony Hill

Sun 13th Dec 2020 17:03

Almost missed this one, Ray. As Stephen points out, a bit of a gem. Tony

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:52

Wow! Hadn't expected so many likes! So happy that it meant something to you all. Thanks Hugh, Dean, Nicola, KJ, Stephen G, Julie, Stephen A, Aviva and Jezzalee for the likes and Nicola and John for the kind comments.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:47

Yes, I think so. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:46

Love islands, each is a little world unto itself. On the Mediterranean ones there isn't much mud, and what they most feared were the Saracen pirates probably, who captured, enchained and enslaved. Agree with Keith about there being impediments and joys, but only going for the summer the joys are far more than the impediments. Great writing.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:39

Nice one! Scent can definitely bring back memories, bad and fantastic! Liked 'foray into fragrances'.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:36

Really impressive piece of writing! Describes so well what is happening to so many,(too many) families, going from the first shcoked reaction, tring to find some comfort and reassurance, then yielding your anxiety .............. Hope that the 'healing hands' can work for you and yours.

Jennifer

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:20

For me, your best so far Raquel.
And a fitting tribute to a wonderful poet. ?

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raypool

Sun 13th Dec 2020 16:06

You're welcome Keith - a bit balmy I know but I enjoy a bit of surrealism. An interesting concept is the naked light bulb , staring at it might affect your eyesight!

Ray

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:45

You style of writing poetry has a quality I have not seen before and I am impressed by what I read. To produce a poem like this must require deep emotional thought.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:43

I agree with Adam this poem has a powerful quality and deep in its message.
Well crafted.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:41


John Doe - Wikipediaen.wikipedia.org › wiki › John_Doe
"John Doe" and "Jane Doe" (for females) are multiple-use names that are used when the true name of a person is unknown or is being intentionally concealed.


Name is intentionally kept a secret in this case.

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:38

I was born on an island and have lived for some time on two other islands in different parts of the world. This poem speaks of the impediments and joys of island life. An interesting read.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:32

Thank you Adam.

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:28

The rack and a naked light bulb would keep it on time.
I really liked this. Very unusual
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:25

This poem borders on the genre of surreal poetry of which I am a great fan. It is very descriptive and merits a second if not third reading.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:21

Aisha,

This poem should boost the self confidence of most readers. It is brimming with optimism and has a clear message.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Mark O

Sun 13th Dec 2020 13:47

Thank you for your comment!! I really appreciated it : )

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 10:37

I feel the same about my girlfriend Rachel. Yet I have a new love. But I will always love Rachel.

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julie callaghan

Sun 13th Dec 2020 10:31

Thanks for the likes folks.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 13th Dec 2020 10:19

Thank you for the Like & comment M.C. Appreciated.
And Tony, Aisha, Stephen, & J.D. for the additional likes!

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Adam Whitworth

Sun 13th Dec 2020 10:06

This poem is much appreciated Lucas. Your writing has power, well done

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Hugh

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:58

Oh my goodness she must be terrified of your constant knock,
And reading your poem, out of her mind she will block.
The passion and destruction is taking over your mind,
Write something different and to her be kind.

Jane Doe was a young girl murdered in 1976


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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:48

It is just that Jane Doe is a term I understood is used when they find a dead body and can't identify who it is yet.?

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:33

? No, it's all love no murder.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:10

I've heard of poor souls turning in their graves before, but this is a first for getting out and chipping at their gravestones!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:01

Is this one supposed to be about a stalker who is intending to murder the resident female? If so, then it tells the theme effectively - but if not, not.

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 06:11

Beautiful imagery x

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Sun 13th Dec 2020 04:44

I wish I was an elfen queen , spreading light across the world and speaking in magical tongues and hiding hobbits in my kingdom xx

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 13th Dec 2020 04:16

I like the name Poetica. I’ve sat in many classrooms and workshops where aspiring poets attempt to interpret meaning from poems. It’s fascinating and sometimes exhausting, but that’s part of the process and it’s true for me too that sometimes I don’t understand what my muse is trying to say, but I write it down anyway. Good piece that made me think!

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Philipos

Sun 13th Dec 2020 00:44


A poem of considerable depth, and well worth reading on more than one occasion.

Enjoyed.

P

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 00:05

I'm not entirely certain that I've understood the poem properly, but I like what I think it means. I'm imagining that lightning might strike quite a few times in the same place, and I have to feel relaxed about possibly not understanding the full or true meaning of the poem since the poet might not either.

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Chris Hubbard

Sat 12th Dec 2020 23:49


Hi Aviva,

Thank you for your interest. It's light verse of course, but there is more than a grain of truth in it, as with most things).

Chris

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Chris Hubbard

Sat 12th Dec 2020 23:45

Hi Stephen,

Thanks for your interest in this piece. Sometimes one's imagination looks and sounds authentic in verse.

Chris

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John Coopey

Sat 12th Dec 2020 23:18

Very pictorial, Jennifer. I like the image of purple clouds as bruises.

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John Coopey

Sat 12th Dec 2020 23:15

Nice understatement, Stephen. It leaves each of us the licence to picture what it is about.

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Sat 12th Dec 2020 22:52

I have learnt you can have sex with anyone its easy , man or woman . But to love someone is a completely different ball game . Love hurts sex is just sex .

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Sat 12th Dec 2020 22:28

what is our eternal home . Is it the womb or the stars in the heavens .

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Sat 12th Dec 2020 22:26

You write beautifully but it haunts me this poem, you remind me of the war poet Wilfred Owen

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jezzalee

Sat 12th Dec 2020 22:21

Tatted Heart is amazing and I feel like Black Bodies needs to see the world. You are a beautiful writer and your work is definitely special ?

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