Excellent poem and tribute to your mum and her determination..?
Comment is about Le Treport (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Tue 11th Sep 2018 12:02
thanks again for your comments.
why you read my stuff is beyond me.
Never pick up a sheep.
It could be baaaad.
chickens/burros?
do you live on a farm?
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
<Deleted User> (19980)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:48
Droplets of love fill your heart, its when the butterflies start, your thoughts are very happy...makes me quite sappy!?
Mature love is the best!
Lovely poem?
Comment is about CHITTER CHATTER...SHHH (blog)
Original item by lynn hahn
Congratulations Aly, a recurring theme treated with a simple and direct charm.
Ray
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Yes Mrinmoy you could say this is a poem written about nothing..too hard for my intellectual mind to come up with something brilliant ...?
Comment is about Three Beat Verse (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19980)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:30
You've tried to be strong, You've toiled for so long, God is in control, He plays a great role, In restoring your health, In your heart it will be felt!
Keep the faith! ?
Comment is about The Descent (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:24
fab piece Jon. Am I right in assuming John to be Lennon surnamed and Miles in the same way.....Davis?
Rose ?
Comment is about Miles and John (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Neressa, thanks! This piece has been close to my heart, written when I was younger but perhaps wiser.
Comment is about Journey to the Light (blog)
Original item by TROY
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:14
long time no blog dude.
Good to see your 'mouthwatering' return.
Rose ?
Comment is about Lamborghini (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Apart from being humorous I have learnt something about the cat/dog relationship I didn't know before ?
Comment is about FUN BUS : UK Researchers Explain Mayhem At HQ (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Thankyou for the comments guys ?
Comment is about Percentage You (blog)
Original item by donovan wilson
<Deleted User> (19980)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:32
Dark and light, I start to fight, Chose to go, But feel so low, In the end, I chose to mend, Finding the light, So mellow but bright?
Loved it...well done?
Comment is about Journey to the Light (blog)
Original item by TROY
<Deleted User> (19980)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:19
Rain cleanses the earth...its refreshing!? Good one?
Comment is about After A Rain (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (19980)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:05
You should go the way...where the heart goes and chooses to stay! ?
Comment is about Should I (blog)
Original item by donovan wilson
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:04
'Forever loved, taken too soon'.
No one could wish for a better inscription.
Beautiful, evocative poem.
Hannah
Comment is about TIME CAPSULE (blog)
Original item by ray pool
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Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:00
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:00
Fantastic imagery here.
Full of atmosphere and much truth.
Hannah
Comment is about Golden days (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 11th Sep 2018 08:57
A great thought provoking poem.
'We humans are imaginative' is the key.
This poem should be read many times.
Hannah
Comment is about I Wonder If (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thank you so much Taylor !
Comment is about The Mother of Nature. (blog)
Original item by Timothy David Ashe
Wow this poem is immense, in it's imagery. Powerful, clever. Thank you for sharing..?
Comment is about The Mother of Nature. (blog)
Original item by Timothy David Ashe
Hi Keith, I love to read as well as write poetry I was just re-reading some of my favourites.. This being one. To my horror I realised I had not commented.
So belatedly here goes.
The imagery is wonderful, we are all formed in different ways by our life experiences, our views on the world around us. Travelling back to our childhood transported by a smell, perhaps a country scene. Waiting for the inevitable... time never ceases it just rolls over us. So well described..thank you..?
Comment is about In promise of the Seasons (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Anya and Taylor, you are always so kind.
Thank you,
Jon ?
Comment is about Miles and John (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Love the poem..content is very interesting..?
Comment is about Must be a seasonal thing (blog)
Original item by Phils Words
Excellent poem.?
Comment is about September 2018 Collage Poem: The Earth is Burning (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Unusual and distinct flavour to a familiar theme! Loved it, specially how you named it. Congratulations Aly!!!❤
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Thanks Anya, Sal, Mrinmoy for reading and liking Journey to the Light. Your feedback keep me inspired ?
Comment is about Journey to the Light (blog)
Original item by TROY
You didn't write and again you did write!
Both the statements are true in context of the poem! ?
Comment is about Three Beat Verse (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Wow, that's intense, yajaira!!
Sometimes, naming a relationship puts a limit on the nature of relationship!
On a lighter note:
Now that we have mars thing coming up, I love you to the mars and back looks more love than going to and fro from moon! ?
Have a good day!
Comment is about Love, Your Platonic Soulmate (blog)
Original item by yajaira
Absolutely, Big Sal.
It does fit that idea too... Never crossed my mind!
Glad you liked it.
Greetings of the day!!! ?
Comment is about Forever Gone (blog)
Original item by Mrinmoy Dey
Here are the Marsden Jazz Festival Details:
https://www.marsdenjazzfestival.com/gig-detail/4125#venue
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
elPintor
Tue 11th Sep 2018 01:06
Personally, I believe this is about as fine an introductory post to WoL as I've seen--distinct in style and makes me look forward to more from you.
..good to see this featured, here.
Rachel
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Everybody present at the meeting.
Comment is about September 2018 Collage Poem: The Earth is Burning (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:42
Like I said before - great job.?
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:41
Mothers are gods in the eyes of their children. ?
Comment is about Mother (blog)
Original item by Adeeso Adeyemi Oladele
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:31
Who wrote this?
It came out excellent.?
Comment is about September 2018 Collage Poem: The Earth is Burning (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:28
Could be inscribed as an epitaph.?
Comment is about Forever Gone (blog)
Original item by Mrinmoy Dey
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:27
Very unique structure. Never seen one quite like this. Well done though.?
Comment is about She Speaks (blog)
Original item by SheSpeaks
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:23
Big Sal
Tue 11th Sep 2018 00:22
This poem combines pathos with dignity with authenticity. Great!
Peter T
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Thank everyone for another fabulous evening, I love our conversations ... you never know what subject will crop up next ? Great night xxx
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
very nicely put Aly. Many congratulations. Love the last lines in particular.
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Really clever poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you. ?
Comment is about Draw (blog)
Original item by Robert C Gaulke
Beautifully worded piece Jon. Thank you ?
Comment is about Miles and John (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
John, could you just confirm that the Marsden poetry event is on Sunday 14 October, please?
And you did say you had my Mark Sheeky poem, didn't you, as I cannot make his event?
Thanks!
Dorinda x
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Wo
The grammar lexis in your writing is really very sdvanced and in this poem the continual complex lexis gives a sense of gliding and flying and continual floaty graceful movement
A superlative line to all of your expressions for they
surely are devine
I especially like this poem because its packed with emotion..... And the way you stand alone line SURELY ARE DEVINE
Works perfectly
Comment is about Daydreaming (blog)
Original item by Erin Renee Moore
Stu Buck
Tue 11th Sep 2018 12:49
lovely work. deserved winner.
Comment is about ‘Triptych #1: Coffee, Paper, and Storm’ by Aly is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger